The Forbidden King

The world view of this book is okay, the extraordinary system is also good, and the character creation is okay, but the feeling after reading it is that the world exists for them, and the world revolves around them. It always feels like a petty world. The world view setting is obviously very good. In my opinion, it can be written more grandly, but the strength and weakness are determined from the beginning, and the upper limit is set at the beginning. Talent can determine the strength, which locks the way of this book

How should I put it? From the beginning, the main atmosphere of this book should be that there is no running away, there is very little daily life, and it is not as carefully crafted as the previous two books in which the encounter between the male protagonist and the female protagonist (I think this one may be a single female protagonist). From the beginning, it shows the two people getting along with each other after they are acquaintances and friends, and the shaping space and style before being put on the shelf are directed to fighting, writing, and promotion. In terms of level, the writing style that the author is good at in the first two books accounts for very little, but the advantage is that he will not change the style midway like the previous book and end up with the consequences of being unfinished (in fact, the previous book should have been written in the same style as the beginning of the story and the results will not be bad) An interesting difference between this book and the first two books is that the male and female protagonists are no longer peers, but have the same age. There is a certain age difference (it seems this is the first time that the eldest sister is the heroine in the beginning) and even because he knows the future, the male protagonist has a relatively deep estrangement towards the female protagonist from the beginning (although it disappears quickly). He has a one-sided impression and understanding. Therefore, when "breaking" the impression, it makes it easier for the male protagonist to have a good impression of the female protagonist, and saves the description needed to advance the relationship. Writing makes the theme of the story more inclined to fight and become stronger What has changed even more is that because the male protagonist is reborn, the mystery of the story has also disappeared. The author's previous two books have the protagonist group step by step to explore the unknown and the atmosphere of the world. The atmosphere is actually very interesting. It is a pity to give up the advantage in this book. It would be better to say that this book is very straightforward in all aspects. From the world view setting to the character of the male protagonist, and the relationship between the female protagonist, it is all explained in a few paragraphs, such as the setting of the haunted house, and the male protagonist repeatedly thinking that he is not a good person and has no bottom line (the characters of the male protagonist in the first two books were written slowly instead of letting him admit himself) Another example is arranging a passerby grandma to make the heroine in one chapter (this paragraph seems to be before Chapter 10, and the whole book is only 30,000 to 40,000 words), and the heroine already likes the hero. The pace is faster, the story paragraphs are not focused on the emotional changes of the characters, but on the escalation of the battle, and the adventure part that was present in the first two books is not at all. For example, in the last few chapters, the male and female protagonists fell into a haunted house (fortunately, the adventure part was replaced by the heroine's portrayal, which I think is good, but I hope there will be adventure parts in the future). The male protagonist skipped the adventure plot in one or two paragraphs (in one page, probably a few words), and then Afterwards, the plot focuses on the two new villains, allowing the villains to explain and demonstrate the survival mode and moral character of the forbidden masters at this time. Although the main purpose is to make them conflict with the male protagonist and fight to make the plot more tense. After watching it, I feel that the battles in the story will be more There are quite a few, and they will be very frequent. Although it is very slow based on the author's update speed, from the overall chapter, it is estimated that new struggles will occur soon to maintain the atmosphere of fighting and escalation in the work How can I put it, although the style of Invasion of the World has changed a lot from the author's first book at the starting point, but It is indeed consciously catering to the tastes of Qidian readers, which is not a bad thing, but if it is unable to control this style like the previous book, it will be easy to praise it. After all, many audiences also mean many opponents. The competition among works of the same type is fierce. If you cannot write something unique, you will only be abandoned by readers. Therefore, I think it is better for the author to add what he is good at, to use his strengths and avoid weaknesses, and add more essences of the previous book, instead of blindly pursuing hot style (after all, not everyone's writing style will always change, and there are many readers who like the style of your first book. Of course, it is important to write new ideas). In short, I hope the author can make this one more popular, so that it will not end like the previous book, right?

No, buddy, there are really only sixty chapters in two months. I'm really afraid that you will become a eunuch one day 😅

The female characters are well portrayed, but the male protagonist is a bit dull...😅😅😅

The hundreds of pictures in Korean comics are not as much as the Japanese comics can tell in one page. The story is similar and the rhythm is similar. The beginning is attractive, but the following is the same routine. The stories written in Korean comics are more powerful than those in Japanese comics.

🤓👆: Use the Infernal Hell to cut Cen Dongsheng in half, An and Yi in half, and see where his immortal bones are resurrected.

The analysis and opinions in this article are only personal subjective judgments. If you have any objections, please respect and understand. In case of any dispute, the author shall prevail. First of all, in conclusion, between the two heroines, I prefer Yi Qingyan, because I personally prefer someone with a higher sense of morality. Yes, in my opinion, the moral sense of King Pingping, who kills people like crazy and makes people frightened, is higher than the philosopher king who establishes a stable order so that people can live a stable life. In my opinion, An Zhizhen's character's method of controlling people's hearts and his character are obviously derived from Machima from Chainsaw Man, but his essence and pursuit have a strong Griffithian flavor. He is a dreamer who pursues dreams, hopes to rule, and aspires to become a lofty dreamer. Because Machima's essential desire is to hate domination and long for equality, and she identifies with her domination from the bottom of her heart and believes that under her rule, mankind can move towards a better future. But the question is, for her, is her rule or a better future more important? Personally, I think she pays more attention to her lofty self who leads everyone to a better future. In order to become that kind of person, she chooses to do this, which is more like a role-playing with a concave personality. It is said that she has the color of Griffith precisely because in my opinion, when faced with a similar choice, she will most likely make the same choice and sacrifice her own "Eagle Group". The only difference is that under the author's arrangement, I'm afraid she won't encounter such a desperate situation. An Zhizhen said in the article that she likes human beings, but except for the male protagonist, as of the latest chapter so far, I have not seen her have any special feelings for specific people, including her parents who currently only live in the background. Her perspective is more like a detached god who does not eat fireworks. Her love is a kind of charity love, pity love, and general love. By loving all mankind, she has gained a moral superiority over all mankind. In this case, she is cruel and ruthless to many specific individuals, such as the valuable passers-by who are inexplicably accused (such people must exist, but in the article, the ones she directly controls happen to be "evil people"), and many unknown stumbling blocks that stand in the way of her dreams. Therefore, I am not very optimistic about the future of her rule. She is a philosopher king, but she may turn into a dictator without checks and balances and unable to resist at any time. Heaven and hell are only in her mind. This ideal society that relies on the ruler's personal consciousness is like her own play house, depending on how long she is willing to play. People change, and once she gets tired of playing the noble game, this ideal society will fall apart. After talking about the character, let's talk about her emotional relationship with the male protagonist. In my opinion, her affection for the male protagonist comes from the loneliness of a dominant person. If everyone in the world is either a servant or an enemy to you, it will be difficult for you to curb your emotional need for an equal interlocutor. When she awakens her abilities and feels the inspiration of dreams and unspeakable loneliness (blood sorrow?), The male protagonist happens to appear. She can get along with her as an equal, not controlled, but is not her own enemy. Instead, she admires herself. Her loneliness is vented, and her human emotions are released, so she falls in love with the male protagonist. In my opinion, the character and experience of the male protagonist may not be very important to her. The status of friends who have equal dialogue is really important. Maybe Cen Dongsheng replaced by Cen Xiasheng and Cen Chunsheng will not have much impact. Of course, although she also longs for equality, out of inertia, she is still used to being the stronger one in the relationship between two people. (In fact, I personally think that this type of character would be more cute and more suitable for my xp if he occasionally rolls over or is passive). One of the reasons why I can't express my feelings about these two people is that she actually doesn't "have to be you", and the other reason is that the sense of déjà vu between Griffith and Gazi is still too heavy. Even if you temporarily forget your dreams, you will eventually trek towards the dream castle like moths to a flame, and it just happens that you are with me. Once there are differences between each other, no matter how sad and reluctant you are, we will leave you behind. Then there is Yi Qingyan, who I personally like more. The reason why I like her is because of her self-stretching and restriction in the face of desire, and her duplicitous kindness and compassion.         ，，；， Yi Qingyan is such a person. The special life ban is accompanied by strong desires. An Zhizhen has a neutral desire for control, while Yi Qingyan has an almost completely negative desire for killing. However, she did not become a complete murderer, but became what people call the "King of Equality", because even if she thought she was not for justice or morality, people finally saw something from her killing.         ""，，，：，，，， In this case, she had a thousand reasons to become an indiscriminate murderer, shouting "Blood sacrifice to the blood god, head sacrifice to the skull throne", "I will kill people if I am not happy, and I will not be happy if I don't kill people" or simply "I don't eat beef". However, she became the king of equality because she set "limits" for herself. You will kill, but you will kill those who are despicable first, those who oppress first, those who abuse others first, and those who "deserve" first. It's like you have to shoot at the crowd with a heavy machine gun, but whenever you see those kind people, your bullets tend to miss by a few centimeters. So you became the sharp blade that cuts out carrion, the new wind that scares the wicked, and the sun that falls to the earth: you will eventually burn everything, but before that, you will bring light and heat to the world. Even though she thought this was not justice, she did take the initiative to put on the chains for herself. Even though she has no need for followers, she is still furious at their deaths. For Yi Qingyan like this, it is difficult not to think that she does have a unique moral consciousness. Was her final death in her previous life also her final self-destruction and self-destruction in the face of her growing desire to kill? Otherwise, it would be hard to imagine that she, who could teleport freely to any corner of the world, would die during the siege. The sun that destroyed everything was finally shot down. Regarding this ending, how would she feel in her previous life and what last words would she leave behind? About her emotional relationship with the male protagonist, just like in the latest chapter, Cen Dongsheng is the person she loves most and the person she wants to kill the most; she is an accomplice who goes together and the chain that restrains herself. As long as Cen Dongsheng is alive, her reason will defeat instinct, love will defeat desire, and the future that was supposed to be heading toward destruction will lead to hope. Because Cen Dongsheng is her unkillable and undying lover, the "brother" who carries her life and leads her on the right track. This relationship of shared destiny will keep them entangled with each other until the end of their lives. In a word, it's great. In summary, please join the glorious Yi Qingyan Party. (I feel this, I am exhausted from playing with my cell phone by hand)

When my sister said, "He has a death wish, and I allowed it," the tone of the future King of Equality suddenly came into play. It was different, it was really different. The author's description of the special life ban was really good.

I originally wrote it in the main text, but then I thought it would be better to post it in the comment area. Because some people don't read what the writer says, let me explain again: I am indeed not the type to write very quickly, but the average number of words per chapter in this book is 4 to 5k, which is considered the standard for a new book issue. You can calculate this by calculating the total number of words. My writing habits have always been like this. I know that cutting into two chapters can increase exposure and is more in line with the mainstream of the starting point. However, I don't like cutting the plot, and I don't like to add "4k" and "5k" after the title to remind readers - this simply doesn't look good. Actually, I have always felt that the number of words in a chapter should be determined based on the plot, rather than a fixed number of words. Otherwise, it will almost certainly restrict the writer's ability to describe the plot... It's enough to say this once, and I won't mention it again. I think it is more important for novel updates to be stable and interesting. Please continue to enjoy this story.

Although generally speaking, it is about traveling through the past to pick up girls and find opportunities to become stronger, but the rhythm and writing style are very comfortable.

I have read every book by this author (including external sites). I think this one has the dullest plot and the least inspiring writing, but the updates are the most stable (comparatively speaking) and the results are the best. Now even the only advantage of updating has been lost. From the perspective of an old reader like me, it is really better to write slowly and maintain quality like the previous books.

Give full play to your strengths. It's rare to write many female protagonists who can handle a bowl of water. The level of invading the world is very good. It writes more about emotions and daily life.

Because some book friends have questions, let me tell you.

Alas, you have also fallen. It seems that you can't regain the feeling you had back then. Do you know how strong you were in writing about women? Looking at your book again, I can only feel that I have exhausted my talents. Especially the portrayal of the male protagonist is too far away from the portrayal of Duanmu.

I would like to mention one thing: use your strengths to create exciting female characters. 😌

Doesn't anyone think the plot of this book is boring? The main characters only have a few expressions when going back and forth, and the story goes back and forth while fighting monsters and upgrading. There seems to be no problem in skipping through the chapter list. So what is so attractive about this book?

Is the author's Sesame credit score enough to buy shared bicycles?

Have you ever been a forbidden master? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

You are guilty. It is because of what you are used to that there are so many fine products and even thousands of eunuchs. You are guilty, you have contributed to the corruption of the Internet environment 🤓

Although I really don't want to say it, this book is far inferior to the previous two books. Not to mention that the heroine of this book is weird and there are so many villains. I would rather read the fantasy life of teenagers.

It's like this every time, even when you invade the human world. If you continue like this, you'll be at LV 5 for the rest of your life. Don't even want your platinum sign or the great sign in this life. If you work hard, you'll have passed level 5 a long time ago. You're just playing to your own death every time.

The soul is back... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back... Driving the long whip and riding the six bridles.... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Climbing over the mountains and singing... Returning... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe with all our glory... 𓀋 𓀠𓀤𓀥 The soul is back... The soul is back.... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋

👍👍You are this

The writing was quite good before it was released, but after it was released, I don't know why the plot felt really cliche, um, two of the strongest women in the world, right? He was directly included in the harem, and then when one of the girls was born, she clearly felt that she had awesome power, invincible power in the world, and then she endured it for more than 10 years, and was bullied by her classmates without saying a word. The key point was that he killed kittens. He also said that he had been enduring the murderous intention, and as a result, he was bullied by his classmates. The protagonist directly showed his invincible power. The routine is really old, and it is all supported by the writing.

There were a lot of rainbow farts during the serialization, but now that I'm a eunuch, why don't you continue to do it?

From the secret base to the Forbidden King, the author's creation of the character's image when he appears is indeed very good, very eye-catching, and very attractive to watch. The style of the characters feels quite Japanese-style animation, but compared with light novels, the description method is also in line with Chinese tastes, which is really good. However, there are still some problems with the overall situation of the previous book, whether it is the change of style, the jumping of the plot arrangement, or even the ending, it feels like it cannot grasp the suddenly unfolding overall situation and leaves an open ending in a hurry. I hope this book can improve and the plot doesn't advance so fast and violently. Even if it's not in troubled times, it's still a good feeling to see the daily life of the "ancestral" sister. Because I think you, the author, have the writing power. Slow down the pace, lay a solid foundation for the overall situation, and then expand slowly, it will definitely be much better!

The first author I have read who can combine summer, chirping cicadas, girls with orange soda, folklore, and love is the dripping eunuch 😅

This kind of novel doesn't matter anything else. It just smells bad. It doesn't matter if it's illogical, but it can't lose its aura. A light novel without aura is just a bunch of virgin dog food.

I read another book before and saw that the author said that no matter what, I update 4,000 words every day, otherwise it will be difficult to continue writing if I keep procrastinating.

Start a new book and stop tormenting everyone.