Evolution Begins with the Little Man in the Bottle

It's okay, but the settings are too complicated. There are a bunch of panels and functions for two professions, and each organ can open a profession. It's a big problem if you can't hold it later...

I thought it was like the villain in the bottle in Steel Refining. What a pity.

So what kind of unfaithful protagonist did you write? It's all so messed up here, what's the use? Then you have to create a mentally retarded person, right? It's all like this, I'll fight you till death, and you're still preaching, so just preach.

Spiders spin silk from their butts, don't they?

There are too many hangs, and the content is stuck in the heap setting.

I feel like I need to create a panel, otherwise you won't know how many abilities the protagonist has at the end of the writing. You can remove some abilities. If there are too many and it's difficult to write about, just use the professional skill stream. Otherwise, it will feel like the cheat is like an adaptive one. It can have everything. If it is too comprehensive, it will be difficult to write. The important thing is that you have to let the readers at least see the skills of the protagonist.

I hope the author will not stop it. This is your first novel. It can be said that it is a debut novel. It is very unlucky. The results are almost bad, but there are still people who will read it, right? Please tell me in advance if you want to quit, and don't quit quietly. But with my attitude as a senior bookworm, I beg you not to quit. This is what new authors do when they start writing a book.

Ah! There has been no update for twenty-four hours.

It's not AI. The author took the initiative and responded.

It's very well written, don't stop it, it will not be good for your career development.

After reading Chapter 14, I can't help it. It's really unbelievable.

The idea is good, but the writing skills are not good, but the idea is really new, I hope it won't be discontinued

A system with feelings. . . . . Stop reading