Necromancer: a Blind Box Was Opened at the Grave and a Saint Was Revealed

One thing to say, in this fantasy world, where necromancers can control other people's corpses, is it really possible to enter the cemetery at will?

After watching the previous episode, the subject matter was good and the plot was okay, but it was this twist that made people who didn't know better think they were watching a unit drama. To the extent that pasta should be mixed with No. 42 Concrete. If it were changed, it would be a good novel.

1. A very good story, and I can see that the outline and creativity are okay 2. The writing level of Groove and the typos everywhere 3. The rhythm is really messed up 4. The name is difficult to remember. I am a stay-at-home boy and I have liked Western fantasy stories since I was a child, but even so, I couldn't remember the names of the protagonist group after 45 chapters. The protagonist's name is Lu XX, the saint + heroine's name is Luna (this is the easiest to remember), and the name of the rebellious corpse brother is too long to remember. The old wolf provides resources, the fat man is stuck with bugs, and there is also a strategy team who doesn't know what to do and has no memory points.

I feel like your book will collapse after 200 copies at most. Novices should not add random settings.

Don't be cowardly, don't you still want to send greetings to my whole family🤣👉

After reading seven or eight pictures, I only have one feeling: it's too messy, the writing is too messy, and I have no idea what I'm writing.

The Holy Lady is just unable to act independently at night, rather than losing consciousness. She is still aware of the situation in the outside world, right?

Transformed into a god, surrounded by blood storms and haunted by evil spirits. Okay, everyone agrees.

As the title chaos

It's been changed, it's been changed

There are small flaws, but it still looks great.

As a paladin of the Holy Light Religion who believes in the Goddess of Holy Light, I can only activate the rare branches of the Holy Light against the light cult and the light evil god it believes in - kill them all.

Original Sin God Realm, sounds like a replica of Divinity Realm Original Sin

Update soon🤐

As far as I can see, there are too many places where the author lacks thinking. Just like a fleeting carpenter's apprentice, a "cemetery" guarded by a military organization, a forum post about deus ex machina, Schrödinger's plot influence, and many other places that are either irrelevant or illogical. In fact, I typed a lot, but it was too presumptuous to write so many free things, so I deleted them. In short, I hope the author will think more when writing and review it again after writing, so that many, many problems can be avoided.

The writing is rather strange, but the idea is quite good First of all, the background description of the characters is not clear, and the basic rules of the world are not written first. The description of various people is also unclear. The combat power system is broken, there is no normal reference, the world currency system is not even visible, all the characters have no mental activities, and the plot is driven by brainlessness. I write wherever I think. I suspect it is not that there is no detailed outline, but there should be no outline at all. Especially when the protagonist communicates with other people (especially players), the logic is extremely confusing and disorganized. After reading the current chapter, I simply like the character of the saint in this book, but it's a pity

The data is so bad, I'm preparing for the next book

My little Ludwig, where is my moonlight sword?

It's okay if it's bones. If it's rotten, I'll spit it out for you after dinner.

It's very messy. I write a little in the east and a little in the west. It's not smooth and it seems difficult.

I'm just preparing for the next book, so I'm just updating it, not cutting it off.

No, Vivian died just like that?