Am I Their White Moonlight?

After reading Chapter 20, I immediately decided to give up. Many people usually say that it is a mess and foggy Let me explain why it appears to be foggy. 1. I don't know whether to say it's a clickbait or selling people's heads as dog meat. But in this chapter 20, I don't know why there is such a misunderstanding. I don't know how to clear my name, it's baffling. I have seen 20 photos, all of which tell stories, but the problem is that your real selling point is: whitewashing, not stories. It is undeniable that stories are indeed important, but the problem is that everyone is attracted by your introduction. Why don't you prepare to explain your introduction? 2. In my opinion, the first three chapters and the following 17 chapters of the novel are disconnected and have no practical connection. So the background in which the story unfolds is inexplicable. I wonder what the relationship between the first three chapters and the next 17 chapters is? It seems like the three golden chapters are funny. 3. The main plot is unclear, the interpersonal relationships are unclear, and the settings are unclear. As of Chapter 20, I can't see any main plot. I guess the main plot is either to regain strength and resolve misunderstandings, but I can't tell in the next 20 seconds. The interpersonal relationship is unclear. Two characters who look like heroines appeared at the beginning, but they did not appear in person in the following 20 years. There is also a woman Jiang Qing who appears in the fourth chapter, and the protagonist accepts her somehow. The setting is mysterious and unclear. 4. The character of the protagonist is inconsistent. At the beginning, the protagonist said that he would kill tens of thousands of people in a row, but later he didn't even kill a single 🦊. Don't tell me what kind of interests there are. At that point in time, when the protagonist realized his interests, he actually didn't know what interests 🦊 had. Don't be offended. He won't kill you yet. Didn't he say at the beginning that he caused tens of thousands of deaths? 5. It's still the same problem, the sense of fragmentation is serious. The next 17 chapters are out of touch with the three golden chapters, and out of touch with the introduction. Analysis: The pace of this book is very slow and messy as I said before, but from the golden three chapters I can see that the author is even more anxious. A reader said before: It's a pity that the author changed his mind and stopped writing Conan. I think it's because the author's work is so big that he forgets what he wants to write. He wants to write an original world but doesn't know where to start. He explained the key points and main plot of this article in the introduction, but it was not shown in the last 17 chapters of the novel. I felt like I was cheated. It is of course difficult for fans to turn to original works. I still feel that the author seems to want to break through too much, resulting in not handling some details of the plot well. PS: Tags: Daily Wen and Relaxation, does your profile look like it!

Before chapter 40, it was considered the main plot, and after 40, he entered the memories. As of now, in 94 chapters, he has recalled 54 chapters without ending, and he can't see the end of this memory. The main plot is that the evil spirit was born, and the evil spirit was caused by the evil spirit. Only a powerful person with a high level of cultivation mentioned it, and then it disappeared.

What I want to see is a protagonist who carries the burden silently and is calm and decisive. The protagonist of this book behaves like a little bitch when facing his senior sister, always licking the dog. I really can't stand in for senior sister's little naughty little brother!

It's a classic theme of chasing your husband in the crematorium, but it's written in an inexplicable way. There is nothing wrong with the writing, but the plot is vague and very out of touch. In the last chapter, he was still seeing a doctor, and in the next chapter, he ran to his junior sister for no apparent reason. The backhand before death is like a decoration, and one can roughly identify the protagonist. There are a total of forty-four chapters, but it's not as exciting as it should be, and it's not complete even if it needs to complete the plot. It can be seen that the author has his own ideas, but it is useless to say in the comment area that the problem will be solved later in the plot. Not all readers will click on the comment area to read other people's comments. Do you think the author is a woman? It's written like a girl's video

Why doesn't the author want to show off his writing skills by writing a single female protagonist? The writing is messy, the main plot is incomprehensible, and the memories are disorganized. Moreover, each heroine recalls it once and intermittently. The short and unclear main plot can only be found from the long memories. The primary and secondary are irrelevant. What's the point of the protagonist's fake death? After being resurrected, instead of doing his own thing, he exposed his identity to the heroines to play with? Are you going to lick senior sister again? Pretentiousness should be cut off constantly, like a dog and a mouse, and it will tie itself up in a cocoon, accomplishing nothing.

It's a pity. I thought the author would continue to write Conan fanfics. To be honest, Xiaolan's fanfics with a single heroine are really rare. The only one you can read at the moment is that the others are either eunuchs or the plot settings and character descriptions are a mess. Alas.

I spent two or three hours reading Chapter 91 and couldn't stand it anymore. To be honest, I couldn't understand what I was doing. The Riddler, the inexplicable memories that I fell into, and even a bit of a literary youth.

Well, how should I put it? After reading the first 10 chapters, I don't know what it is about. The protagonist is introduced through some other supporting characters, but in this case, what I want to watch is the protagonist, not the other supporting characters. After reading the first few chapters, I have no interest in continuing to read. (Representing only personal views)

It was so uncomfortable to watch, the main character is my senior sister's licking dog

It's pretty cool. It's a waste of time.