Xianjian Changsheng

Let me make a small suggestion. Let's not talk about the writing and plot, but let's talk about the first three chapters. There is a saying that the starting point is the three golden chapters. These three chapters are very important. The first chapter of this book is too ordinary. The protagonist is a time-traveling monk, so he wants to practice, and then he starts practicing. Is that it? What is he practicing for? Just to upgrade? In current novels, I basically like to write a small elite monster in the first few chapters to put a little pressure on the protagonist. In this way, no matter whether the protagonist is a hard steel or a dog in the future, it is very reasonable. I think this way of writing still has some reference value.

Don't write in a narration style. If you write like this, you will not only be supporting the supporting role, but even the protagonist's character will be a bit empty. If you don't know how to write, go to Eternal Evergreen or Immortal Mansion Immortal, copy some of their advantages, and you should at least be able to get more than 1,000 orders.

1St floor, 1st floor, occupying space 🪖🪖🪖

You can watch it now, but it is recommended not to fly around in seconds. There are too many modern words, which will affect the viewing experience!

Not bad, keep up the good work and update

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Well written. Come on, come on, come on.

The key point is the realm, and it needs to be written more mysteriously.

Yes, write more about beast control. Don't learn so many skills. Just one or two is enough. You need to be good but not too many.

More updates, more than a dozen chapters, ready to be put on shelves

Sandbox alien world + the vast world after the Conferred Gods War + immortal cultivation adventure + guidance from gods + non-system flow Five major federations appeared in the world after the disaster. As a newcomer who just came to the logistics department of the group, Zhou Yixing just wanted to be a civilian employee with peace of mind. He never thought that logistics personnel would also have to fight... Friendship and blood, firearms and psychic powers, human beings Humans and monsters, powerful plans, mysterious memory fragments, sandbox alien worlds cannot escape the fate of being spied on by powerful powers. The gods on the list of gods came here, and the young man who controlled Cang Lei collaborated to uncover the truth of the alien world, and set foot on the world again. Unexpectedly, the conspiracy of Journey to the West has already unfolded... Ps. The outline is detailed, Taoist friends are trying to catch me Editor: You can fly solo. Me: Don't tempt me. My heart of Chicheng can be learned from the world.

The writing is very good. Come on, I am optimistic about you.

Back again😆

This is my most regrettable book