Hogwarts: I Lay the Magic Web and Light the Divine Fire

How could an experienced archmage casually reveal his ability to make a living to a stranger he had just met? The first few photos clearly foreshadowed that the protagonist was very wary. Even if Hermione did not tell anyone, the protagonist did not consider the possibility that Hermione would be read and searched for her soul? This is not the way to write emotional lines.

Either give the protagonist a first-life Chinese who has never seen Harry Potter, or don't use oriental memes and famous quotes, otherwise it will be very dramatic if a British-born alien often does this.

I saw Chapter 8. This chapter started to add Chinese elements, such as the lightning strike wooden staff. It's not that it can't be added, but the author is not strong enough. After adding it, the painting style was inconsistent. At the beginning, he boasted about the protagonist's previous magic empire, how magical it was, and then talked about a lot of Harry Potter's magic body. Analysis of the system, preparing to become a god, and then encountering ordinary lightning-struck wood, which made the magic empire in the previous life rare and rare, with natural resources and earthly treasures. In the current world, no one cares about it, no one knows it, no one can use it... I can't accept the protagonist's boastfulness, I can't accept it, it's a drama

It's very poisonous, and it started out just to be unconventional. It is said that this world has no magical elements. All wizards are idealistic. How do those monsters and magical plants grow? By eating grass? Also rely on idealism.

Seeing that Slytherin's internal rules are so strict, the principal didn't straighten things out. Instead, he thought that two brats were fighting, and that this child must be a murderer in the future. You know, there is real torture and humiliation in the academy. He left the slave owner next to him alone and just stared at the protagonist. Doesn't this forcefully create a conflict?

Children's literature, early model of online literature.

It can be seen that the author has no outline, and even writes wherever he thinks. There is no plot plan for the characters. You are more magical than Harry Potter. Others have school teaching instructions to form a system.

You must either create an original world or a non-original world. Don't engage in aboriginal creations. This kind of aboriginal people traveling through the well-known anime and movie world is a poisonous point in itself, and few of them are popular.

When I saw in the introduction that there were no elements, I was thinking that writing a book really doesn't require brainpower? !

There are two chapters every day, one at 12:00 am and one at 18:00 pm. Thank you readers for watching.

The Slytherin magic changes are too much and boring.

From my personal point of view, I hate fans who copy plots the most. The protagonist relies on the prophet to do a lot of things, and finally returns to the original plot line. So what's the point of doing things? In this book, the protagonist comes from another magical world. Without knowing the plot, he arrests Peter Pettigrew on the train in the first grade. This is amazing. The idea of ​​the magic network is also quite good. I am looking forward to the subsequent scenes of young wizards and even professors using the magic network, and the protagonist's use of forbidden spells to explode, which is also a point of expectation. Finally, come on, author, I'll give you the daily recommendation votes!

The title of the book is lofty, and the content is the magical version of the childhood idol Return of the Dragon King?

If Muggles can be connected to the Magic Network, wizards will be an unstable factor. If possible, all wizards will be killed directly. Muggles will not be able to cast spells after leaving the Magic Network, so 🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶

This great mage is mentally retarded

Halfway through, I had a sudden thought. If you don't like the magic network being too expensive, you can consider doing something like Steam, which has a special discount of -80% this week. 100 Gold galleons of magic can be purchased for only 20 gold galleons this week. Oh, this is a summer special, -20% for all, and this is a Christmas special -95%, oh, my God, you wouldn't be human if you don't buy it!

Author, the most important thing is that people like Harry and Ron can cast spells silently and without wands. The protagonist has fewer opportunities to shine, the advantages no longer seem unique, and there are fewer scenes. The character of the protagonist is not like a great mage, he is very childish. Besides, casting spells to solve problems regardless of the situation doesn't seem to be compatible with Hogwarts. You try to ask for a fight, but the result is that you just use magic at every turn, and there is no discipline at all.

There is no original character whose personality is not broken, of course, except for Malfoy in the early stage. According to the author's own setting, as a talented mage with a bright future, he must be arrogant, but if he can survive to level 10 or level 9, at least if his IQ is not a problem, then he must believe in a principle, knowledge is valuable and can be exchanged with equal value. And this book, emmm, only sees arrogance? Conceited? Arrogant... Anyway, all kinds of operations left me speechless.

The void invasion in the latest chapter is really unbearable 😥

Is there a novel called Harry Potter in Carl's original world? It's outrageous that this kind of introduction has no desire for people to read it. Not to mention asking for money to read it, I won't read it even if it's free.

You can leave after reading this book halfway. There is poison in the back of this book.

To be honest, what's the use of a magic net without magic elements?

I feel like sooner or later the void creature will explode with thunder, I keep saying it every day

The Return of the Dragon King is too strong, a fan version of the crooked God of War?

The AI ​​section titles have not been cleaned up, and the writing style has also changed.

There are too many poisonous points, so don't read if you mind.

It can be seen that after Chapter 100 was published by Japanese people, I didn't want to write it very much. It felt a bit perfunctory (I'm sorry if it's not me).

After more than a hundred photos, AI writing

So poisonous, does the armor protect Avatar or Voldemort's Avatar?

The taste of sugar is too strong. Are you afraid that you are not reincarnated in the third filthy land of sugar?