Hogwarts: I Lay the Magic Web and Ignite the Divine Flame

How could an experienced archmage casually reveal his ability to make a living to a stranger he had just met? The first few photos clearly foreshadowed that the protagonist was very wary. Even if Hermione did not tell anyone, the protagonist did not consider the possibility that Hermione would be read and searched for her soul? This is not the way to write emotional lines.

Either give the protagonist a first-life Chinese who has never seen Harry Potter, or don't use oriental memes and famous quotes, otherwise it will be very dramatic if a British-born alien often does this.

I saw Chapter 8. This chapter started to add Chinese elements, such as the lightning strike wooden staff. It's not that it can't be added, but the author is not strong enough. After adding it, the painting style was inconsistent. At the beginning, he boasted about the protagonist's previous magic empire, how magical it was, and then talked about a lot of Harry Potter's magic body. Analysis of the system, preparing to become a god, and then encountering ordinary lightning-struck wood, which made the magic empire in the previous life rare and rare, with natural resources and earthly treasures. In the current world, no one cares about it, no one knows it, no one can use it... I can't accept the protagonist's boastfulness, I can't accept it, it's a drama

It's very poisonous, and it started out just to be unconventional. It is said that this world has no magical elements. All wizards are idealistic. How do those monsters and magical plants grow? By eating grass? Also rely on idealism.

Seeing that Slytherin's internal rules are so strict, the principal didn't straighten things out. Instead, he thought that two brats were fighting, and that this child must be a murderer in the future. You know, there is real torture and humiliation in the academy. He left the slave owner next to him alone and just stared at the protagonist. Doesn't this forcefully create a conflict?

Children's literature, early model of online literature.

When I saw in the introduction that there were no elements, I was thinking that writing a book really doesn't require brainpower? !

You must either create an original world or a non-original world. Don't engage in aboriginal creations. This kind of aboriginal people traveling through the well-known anime and movie world is a poisonous point in itself, and few of them are popular.

It can be seen that the author has no outline, and even writes wherever he thinks. There is no plot plan for the characters. You are more magical than Harry Potter. Others have school teaching instructions to form a system.

From my personal point of view, I hate fans who copy plots the most. The protagonist relies on the prophet to do a lot of things, and finally returns to the original plot line. So what's the point of doing things? In this book, the protagonist comes from another magical world. Without knowing the plot, he arrests Peter Pettigrew on the train in the first grade. This is amazing. The idea of ​​the magic network is also quite good. I am looking forward to the subsequent scenes of young wizards and even professors using the magic network, and the protagonist's use of forbidden spells to explode, which is also a point of expectation. Finally, come on, author, I'll give you the daily recommendation votes!