Starting in Konoha, Rune Land

If after devouring Princess Kaguya, Madara can be transformed into a girl who can be both male and female, what do you think? What about my suggestion?

Most of them were skipped and I didn't know if the author had an outline. The writing is a bit boring

I don't really agree that Madara didn't devour the time traveler.

Have mobile games been around for 10 years? What's going on?

Your writing skills are really not good. If your writing skills are not good, you don't want original characters. You have to write a few original characters, it's very messy

Frankly speaking, it's just a bit boring, and the conversation is like water. The author should learn from his lesson and write an outline before writing a book in the future.

The first few chapters were a mess.

What the hell is this thing about? I read Chapter 4 and didn't understand it clearly. What kind of medicine is it about? Is there no target to pursue and nothing to pursue? It's fucking useless to travel through time as Uchiha Madara, and it's fucking useless to write that you have completed your clothes and traveled through time as Rokudoko. Is there any difference between your time traveling into Uchiha Madara and time traveling into an ant? If you have a goal, it means getting stronger and broadcasting. Is there any room for improvement? If there is no room for improvement, then that's all. How can I improve when I am already invincible in the world?

I don't know how to remember it from the original novel, but the fans basically said that after he died, he lay in a coffin and was buried on the spot. Did the original novel tell how he died? If not, then whatever.

These comments make me afraid to read 🙂