Shrouding the Heavens: I Grinded My Way to Invincibility Across All Worlds

Confucian scholars have all appeared; you shouldn't be writing fanfiction about "Covering the Sky," you should be writing fantasy cultivation novels.

The author has the potential to write a fantasy novel; it doesn't have the feel of the original "Covering the Sky" series.

Handymen, that's a routine from so many years ago.

"The Fusang Tree of the Sun Emperor, the Taiqing Inheritance of the Eight Trigrams Palace, the Zhe Character Technique, the Goddess Furnace—these are all wonderful things." The furnace is a quasi-Emperor weapon!

When reading fanfiction, you have to follow the plot. How am I supposed to know I'm reading fanfiction if I don't follow the plot?

Go write a fantasy novel; this writing style doesn't suit "Covering the Sky" at all.

The beginning was poorly written; the protagonist's starting point was too low, and the writing style was different from other fanfiction.

It lacks the feel of "Covering the Sky," the protagonist hasn't read "Saint Ruins," and many plot points are nonsensical. It's probably for a newbie.

In the world of "Covering the Sky," the prevailing practice is creation-based techniques. The synopsis suggests the protagonist is actively cultivating himself into a puppet.

Your novel is way too lowbrow. In other novels like "Covering the Sky," the Great Dao is constantly being obliterated, the void is about to shatter, and people stand at the pinnacle of the Great Dao. In "Covering the Sky," the fighting goes on until the physical body is blown apart, the soul is shattered, and then they still keep fighting.