My Shipgirls Are Awesome

The characters aren't well-developed, making it feel like a melodrama. It's written like the darkness before dawn, filled with despair where you can see light but don't know if it's hope. The characters aren't well-developed. The protagonist knows the future and has some experience with it, so he should be full of confidence, leading those around him from despair to hope.

I've only read 61 chapters, and this male lead is so frustrating! He's so slow with construction. At the beginning, he had 5 cubes during the academy's construction window but didn't want to use them, saying he'd save them up for a big construction phase a year later.

Is the author from Flash? It has a strong "Lu" vibe, and the protagonist is like a spring in the first 100 chapters, constantly being pushed back. The combat power is also forced into balance; whatever equipment our side has, the enemy immediately gets too.

To be honest, I feel that Azur Lane's storyline is starting to have some problems now. The main issue is that the player's perspective and the commander's perspective are gradually becoming mismatched. The problems on the commander's side from the player's perspective are getting bigger and bigger, especially in the last event, Operation Ice Dragon Breaking the Wind, which felt like Manjuu was…

I dug a hole for August 15th and Changchun, then wrote over sixty chapters before finally getting to the big part, but Changchun was nowhere to be found. That's just ridiculous.

Well, what you're describing in your book doesn't seem to be a magical route; it's just a humanized version of a historical ship, perhaps with a little bit of magic. But why don't humans build ships of this caliber themselves? The reason magical routes aren't built is because those ship girls are literally star destroyers at sea; there's no point in building them.

If you're going to write Azur Lane fanfiction, just do it properly. Why are you messing around with the Eastern Empire ship girl settings? The four main Azur Lane characters are all elementary school kids!

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Aurora Color illustrations Chongqing, which sank itself Chongqing, where big shots are rising (All images above are from the internet; the watermarks were added by the website when the images were uploaded.)

How many chapters have you written about this red and blue equipment? With all these strange and unexpected things, you just can't seem to get it going.