My Shipgirls Are Awesome

The characters are not created well, it feels like a drama of suffering, and the writing is like the darkness before dawn. There is despair everywhere. You can see the light but don't know if it is hope. I have read more than 100 chapters into hope, and you are still like this, as if the dawn will never come. If this is foreshadowing, you have been foreshadowing for too long, and the new author has no reader base. After reading more than 100 chapters, it seems that it will always be the darkness before dawn. I see hope, but it will never come to dawn.

I just read Chapter 61. The male protagonist looks so achy and construction is so slow. He didn't want to use the 5 Rubik's Cubes during the window period when he first entered the academy. He said that he would wait until the window period after a year to save up and build it together. However, when the window period came before graduation a year later, he felt that there were too many people and didn't like it. When he went to his own port, it was under construction. When he arrived at his own port, he chatted with his girl but no construction was done. He forgot about it and went to visit other port elders to connect with each other. Is a large-scale construction so difficult? If you want to wait and see, it is better not to say when the construction will be completed, but to give an expectation and then fail to fulfill it.

The author is from fl? There is a Lu smell, and the first 100 chapters of the main character are like a spring, and the author keeps pressing on it. The combat power must also be balanced. The equipment that our side has is also available to the enemy.

To be honest, Bilan now feels that there are some problems in the plot. The main reason is that the player perspective and the commander's perspective are gradually beginning to mismatch. The problems on the commander's side from the player perspective are getting bigger and bigger, especially in the last event. The Ice Dragon Breaking Wind operation felt like a malicious black rabbit. Here is a brief summary of the plot. To put it simply, Donghuang in the blue world has advanced missile technology but is almost transparent in the main plot. This is because the Siren tester used the weather controller to pull several typhoons to block the southeast coast and prevent people from leaving. In the last event, Donghuang held back more than 800 arsenal ships and fired several salvos to raise the typhoon and beat the tester violently. During this period, the attitude of the testers was: I am protecting you! ——Don't come out until I restart the weather controller, okay? ——If you don't do it, I will use the Type 4 Siren mass-production fleet to push you back——You will regret it. Then Donghuang said: Protection will eventually become a shackles. At this moment, we have taken the first step of development. At first glance, it seems like a classic royal plot with no problems, but the question is, where is the Siren's main fleet at this moment? The answer is that the ruling body is outside the earth and the good guy Richard, a high-dimensional entity, is working to protect the earth from being invaded (although Hai Ruotian City has already invaded the earth). In short, Donghuang became very clownish in an instant, especially after the tester's host was hacked by Hai Ruotian City. At least half of the blame was on Donghuang, and he became even more clownish.

I dug a hole in Changchun on August 15th, but it took more than sixty chapters to finally build a big project, but there is no Changchun, which is really outrageous.

How should I put it? It doesn't look like the magic routes in your book are just humanoid versions of historical ships, with a little bit of magic at most. But at this level, why don't humans build their own ships? The reason why the Magic Line is not built is because those ship girls are literally sea star destroyers, so there is no point in building them.

Just write Bilan fans well, why are you randomly changing the setting of Donghuang Ship Girl? The four King Kongs of Bilan are all primary school students.

The pictures are all from the Internet, and the watermarks were added by Qidian

Aurora Color pictures Chongqing sinks into oblivion Chongqing rises to prominence (The above pictures are all from the Internet, the watermark was added by the website when the pictures were posted)

How many chapters have you written about this red and blue equipment? This and that kind of moth can't be fished out