Time Travel at the Same Time: You Will Die If You Don't Accept It.

The last one is Bengbu. I thought the first few worlds were from comprehensive comics, but if you add Marvel, what does it mean? Comprehensive "heat"? Which worlds are most popular and which ones should I write about?

After reading more than 10 chapters, I realized that the author changed the world too quickly. Yue Zhan talked about the changes, Naruto introduced the basic situation of the protagonist, and Pirates wrote that the protagonist eats fruit and then changed the world again. After ten chapters, you have changed to the fourth world. Just change it. Who can change it better than you?

Uchiha Madara used it. At that time, the body was put on the experimental table by Senju Tobirama and then resurrected. However, his Eternal Kaleidoscope was good and he was not blind. He did not install other eyes on himself at that time.

Just delete the novel about eunuchs. The system recommends it every day. Next time I see it, I won't read what you wrote.

The world is jumping too fast, and my emotions are constantly being interrupted.

In the world view of Ultraman Tiga, what do you care about that reader? If he doesn't even know the world view of Ultraman Tiga and the unified world we have been pursuing for a long time, let him crawl

Write here and there, your world jumps too frequently

If I were Kuroko, I would do this: eat the Devil Fruit in Chapter 5, go fishing in the sea in Chapter 6, and give the reader a taste of the Devil Fruit? ! Yes, that's right, I never mentioned that the protagonist wore waterproof equipment when going into the sea.

The halo of intelligence reduction is too serious to look at carefully. If you look at it casually, everyone is pandering to the protagonist, and the author has no ability to control the plot. As a result, he boasted too much at the beginning, but when the fight started, the protagonist still followed the original plot.

The most recent chapter is outrageous. There are so many people in the Celestial Dragons to refine their magic machines. Is it possible that the people in the entire pirate world can't compare to the protagonist in the early stage? If not, then the protagonist is so underdeveloped that he is directly unparalleled.

Chen Duo doesn't want to pursue freedom... She just wants to fulfill Lao Liao's idea. Lao Liao hopes that Chen Duo can become a normal person, so Chen Duo wants to go. Just like Chen Duo said to Lao Liao: You don't understand what I want at all. Lao Liao felt that what she wanted was freedom and a normal life. But Chen Duo has already given the choice to Lao Liao. I will go back and give the order just a word from you. If you want to pursue freedom, you won't leave your choice in the hands of others.

There is nothing wrong with the writing style and plot development, but the world changes too quickly. It only changes every few chapters. It is better to write longer and change again after twenty or thirty chapters.

Jiujiu Liu requires a sense of distance and separation. What do people think of your mixed worldviews?

Forget it if you change the world, you can't return the water. The burning fruit of the Pirate World and so much shared power, where do you put it to catch fish? The writing is inexplicable. After sharing for the first time, it is at least the Shichibukai level. Where do you put it?

How should I put it? It felt pretty good at first But starting from Chapter 18, on the pretext that Jiraiya told Sarutobi to use the telescope technique to peek, he directly arrested Sarutobi. . . Sarutobi was afraid that the protagonist would go crazy, so he kept his hands tied. The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel

The author has not synchronized to QQ reading

It would be normal to write chapters 30 to 50 in a different world.

What the hell, just after I got a feel for one world, it suddenly changed to another world in the next chapter. Too messy

World switching is too frequent. The originator of this genre basically cut dozens of chapters at a time and only described a few worlds in detail. This book only lasts a dozen chapters, which is very discouraging.

Once I saw Marvel's The Apprentice, I had no idea of ​​continuing to watch it.

You've strayed from the center of doing whatever you don't want.

I have never seen a novel where Marvel Comics has not collapsed. After all, the power level of Marvel Comics is so high and the protagonist is so crazy.

The first time I saw it, I thought it was pretty good. Later, the follow-up works became more and more ugly, and the rhythm of each world was not well grasped. Looking at the title of this book, can the doppelgänger protagonists in several worlds be written off to death? It's best if they all die and just leave a clone to write slowly 🙂. There are fewer and fewer clones in the common space, and the bonuses are gone even after death, and then the staff-making protagonist realizes that they are gone when he dies, haha. The most annoying novel about the undead main supporting character is the main supporting character.

You haven't even started the story line of a world, and you keep jumping from world to world. I'm really speechless😅I don't even know what to watch.

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

There's nothing wrong with it except that the pace is a bit fast, but generally this type of writing isn't very long.

In the universe, no one has any extravagant hopes for a harem. The protagonist of each world can be said to be a separate individual. Why don't you consider finding a wife? Are they all eunuchs? If there is a heroine, there will still be some clues. Without it, I will cancel it, so as not to waste time and read it every day. I want to go back and watch 99 World again.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

Can I get a separate volume when changing worlds? Convenient to skip worlds you don't like.

I'm borrowing the treasure land to use, and the monthly vote has been voted {"NickName":"Xuanyuan Xia Yujian","UserId":378438945} Boss, can you tell me the title of the book again? Someone deleted the post and there is no 😢 every time I look at it. Let's talk about it here