Pokemon Journey

It's just that the crazy water qualification panel, even if it is only one level, must be completely watered again! And I have to water several of them every time If the plot is good, let's water the top of the water, it's not unacceptable! But the plot is really hard to describe in one sentence. "XXX, use YYY" "Heiluga, dodge quickly" "Heiluga, use bite" "xxx loses the ability to fight, Kong Huan wins the battle" Yes, All the battles are gone in just a few lines. I don't know what to say. Some unimportant battles and passers-by, it's okay for you to write like this, but you can't write them all like this. All gyms, including Nazi's Instant Seconds and Flash Gengar's Instant Seconds

Although it's a bit like a running account, the ideas are clear and there are no surprises. If the output is higher, you will still be an excellent work. Come on! I support you

Mingyi

Spiny Shell

It may be the first time that the author writes most of it in a hasty manner, as if he is writing a narrative or an outline.

Why do you feel like you are reading an outline?

Desert Dragonfly

Dianchy

Heiluga

Kati Dog → Wind Speed ​​Dog

Fossil pterosaurs

Kyuubi

It is also an elven text about attributes and race. One who only pays attention to attributes and race. In the special chapter, Gu Liu used the messenger bird to suppress Lugia and fight the Phoenix King. Still fighting against attributes, Banmu's Big Needle Bee is tough against the three gods of Sinnoh. After looking at a dozen or so pictures, I knew it was another one that focused on attribute restraint. I still want to be a master even if I can't fight with inverse attributes. It's naive.

Dragon Head Gopher

Three evil dragons

Come on! Come on! Come on! Come on! Come on! Come on! Come on come on! ! ! ! ! ! !

I've read Chapter 31, and I have so little memory. I don't even remember the Pokémon clearly 😳. Has the author's skill improved in the future? Has anyone finished reading it?

It's really like a running account, with no daily routine, very little interaction, and few branch plots. It's just like playing the second game and always following the main plot. All the characters are the same as NPCs, including the protagonist. After watching it for a long time, you will feel a bit bored.

The progress was quite fast at first, but after Carlos received Diancie, the plot rhythm became much more normal.

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Newbie, new work, please give me some advice