The Road to Longevity Begins with Picking up Entries

. . . A small detective assessment. Someone hired a murderer to break the pig's feet and legs so that he could kill him. When he returned, the whole thing was like a spy movie, and he secretly and openly investigated the messenger. There were only 5 suspects, and they were not even warriors. After being promoted to a lower level, he crushed them with his backhand. Is it so grand?

It is very loose. Who is the deceased and what he is doing alive? In ancient times, it was easy to figure out these. Based on the life of the deceased, figure out the rules of the entries and make targeted plans instead of just prescribing what is needed.

Haha, I really like the protagonist of Revenge Never Overnight. The killing is decisive, it's really fun to watch, and it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist. Come on.

I like to read cool articles. This is not the case. I paid for it by mistake.

I rarely write such long book reviews. If this book and the author hadn't moved me so much, I would never waste my time writing such a long review. I feel that this book has the writing style of traditional martial arts, with many shadows such as the legend of Lu Xiaofeng. The writing is logically rigorous. If other books are rated 60 points, this book's detailed logic is at least 95 points. But this book has big problems or awkwardness in its branches. It feels like I forced myself to draw awkward branches and then forced them to fill in the leaves. The leaves are drawn perfectly, but there are indeed many unreasonable things about the branches. For example, if the protagonist is poisoned, he miraculously detoxifies at the last moment by relying on friendship, bonding, and a fleeting mind. This is obviously not in line with the style of this book. It would be much more reasonable for you to write that you can heal the wound by yourself and rely on your lifespan to detoxify at the same time. The protagonist has been poisoned for more than ten games. Winning the game is very depressing and exciting, but suddenly you have a bond of friendship and passion, and the poison is detoxified, that's it? It's not as exciting as the scene where the big man attacks the protagonist at night, and the scene where he grabs the knife with a knife stuck in his skull is a bit interesting. This is the first time I found something awkward, and the protagonist took on a mission to pick up someone. I thought it was really interesting to pick up the county magistrate's wife. It turned out to be a corpse, and this corpse was unusual. This little wife, and the magistrate were both unusual. I knew there must be a plot buried here. How to put it, if making a movie script is to bury everyone in the plot, and your novel has buried so much at the beginning, is this a short story? You kill two thugs who blocked the door and asked you to pay back the money. It's quite awkward. Even the villain's motives are weird. Why do you want to be neighbors with the house bought by the magistrate? Why openly declare war with the magistrate? I feel that the villain obviously has the behavior of completing the goal in a straight line, but he insists on drawing a lot of curved lines to connect the protagonist in the end. This plot arrangement is really too deliberate. Furthermore, killing rogues has caused the protagonist's worldview and values ​​to drop significantly. The protagonist is obviously a modern soul. You owe money to others, and legal non-violent methods are disgusting, so you kill them. This is very reasonable for Water Margin. Can you, a modern soul, do such a thing all of a sudden? If you beat those two guys and break their legs, it wouldn't be that outrageous. It's clear that the conflict has not reached the stage of bloodshed, but you just force your brain to make up your mind or perfectly reason from God's perspective. If someone wants to mess with you, do you strike first to give the other party a little shock? The description of the poisoned pervert at the end is quite interesting, but you get the entry for detoxification 10 times, and then the father and mother who help the policeman's relatives risk their lives to save others agree to test the poison. This arrangement is too deliberate and unreasonable. This entry is just forcibly dropped from the sky for the sake of the plot? It's so awkward. The previous entry's 8-node burst in 1 hour is very suitable for exams, but it is actually used for counter-attack. This kind of word is often used in advance so that it does not appear deliberate. I think the author should be a veteran, because the writing style is obviously different from that of a novice. However, there are many awkwardnesses in this short book of more than 100,000 words. I think the branches on the outline were drawn wrong at the beginning, which makes it more and more awkward. I feel that I am too harsh on this book, because compared to other novice novels, this book is really far ahead of others. However, I am very tolerant of novice novels, because when I read it, I completely lost my mind and didn't care about the awkwardness at all. I didn't feel a pity if I abandoned the book midway because I had no expectations. I think this book is such a pity. In addition, I don't think the policeman's start is a good way to write, unless it's a short story. I can read all the long stories at a glance. It's just that the county is changed to a larger map, and then the small policeman is promoted along the way. You can see the end at a glance.