Naruto: I'm Really Not a Pokemon

Hehe, the main purpose is to prove that I'm not just making things up. I do research before writing most of the plot (which is why I write very slowly 🤐). After all, this is my first time writing a book, and I'm very afraid of making mistakes, omissions, or other errors. I used to read Naruto fanfiction quite often.

The first half is well-written. The part that combines Pokémon ability extraction with ninjutsu is very exciting. The interactions with Greninja, his companions, and his teacher are also quite interesting. The part about becoming the Mizukage is particularly captivating, as his combat power undergoes a qualitative change, and his emotions are also well-developed.

Sigh, when I read other people's novels, I only read 4,000 words a day, and it takes me less than two minutes to finish. Why can't these lousy authors produce more? Who's going to read this little bit? What? Am I short of Qidian coins? Or have I been watching too many ads? Now that it's my turn to write a novel, I rack my brains for hours every day just to squeeze out 4,000 words; I can't even manage a little more. 😥

The Village of Bloody Mist isn't Konoha; the village's atmosphere is described as a bit too peaceful.

To be honest, there are so many fanfics about Naruto, Bleach, and One Piece that they could be used as building blocks, but the author's ability to bring something new to the story is truly commendable.

Honestly, the protagonist became invincible too quickly. I thought he would develop for a while longer, but I didn't expect him to become invincible after going to a parallel world. The protagonist became invincible too early. He was already strong enough before going to the parallel world; aside from Madara Uchiha and the Six Paths Otsutsuki, he feared no one.

The style feels different now, with a more behind-the-scenes feel. It's not necessarily bad, given the current level of power, but the protagonist's actions don't feel as ethical. One of the enjoyable aspects of fanfiction is addressing some of the shortcomings of the original work, but now the protagonist's perspective seems biased towards Kirigakure.

"Arceus hasn't arrived yet. If I fall, the Pokémon will be unable to hold on alone, and Kirigakure will be destroyed by the Mizukage and the others." "I still have mythical beasts to capture, dreams to fulfill, and mistakes to correct." "How can I fall down?" "How can I fall down!" "Mist Shadow needs me, Blue Boy needs me, the Pokémon family needs me." Need me I need Jianchuan Orange! "So, I cannot give up! "I want to stand up, I want to..." "Let's fight again!" 🐶

No, I finally realize what's wrong. Other villages give reputation and ninjutsu after defeating a Naruto, but this guy fights like crazy and gets nothing. The satisfaction is negligible, and the protagonist feels more and more like a beast of burden.

These chapters are so weak, it's all turned into some kind of fighting again, when the previous ones were really good. Reading Naruto fanfiction with all this fighting is pointless; I feel like I wasted my money subscribing to these chapters. I'd rather just get another Pokémon.