Naruto: I'm Really Not a Pokemon

Hehe, the main thing is to prove that I am not writing blindly. When writing most of the plots, I always look up information (so I write very slowly 🤐). After all, it is my first time to write a book, so I am very afraid of making any mistakes or omissions. I myself often read Naruto fan novels before. Although the setting of Kishimoto's original work is full of bugs, sometimes I still feel uncomfortable when I see the obvious time and age errors in the fan novels. So I try to be more serious when I write. PS: Stacked armor. After all, the author is still a human being, and after reading too many Naruto fanfics, it is very likely that his memory will be confused in some places, and he will regard the second set as the original version. So there must be some mistakes and omissions, and everyone is welcome to help point them out. If it has little impact on the plot, I will try to modify it immediately. If there is something that cannot be changed 😏, it is the unevenness of the parallel world. PS: Come and praise me. 😃

The first half is well written. The combination of Pokémon ability extraction and ninjutsu is full of expectations. The interaction with Ninja, his companions, and the teacher is also quite interesting. Especially the part about becoming a Mizukage is very attractive. There has been a qualitative change in combat power, and the emotional aspect is basically written. Maintaining the dignity of the previous generation Mizukage and protecting his companions, in short, this part is well written. But the plot after becoming Mizukage can be said to have taken a turn for the worse. I think the specific problems are mainly reflected in a few parts. First of all, from the description of the protagonist's character, I personally believe that people's thoughts should change with experience. The protagonist has experienced cruel wars, assumed the responsibility of water shadows, and had a series of experiences. However, the author will always give the protagonist some very boring psychological descriptions, and the interaction with his companions still seems very... Childish and funny, if you are a teenager growing up, these are understandable and even occasionally make people laugh, but now that he is the protagonist of Mizukage, the writing style is more serious than the funny and humorous style. In the beginning, he was still talking about serious things, but suddenly he was interspersed with similar words and deeds, giving people a strong sense of separation and discomfort. Secondly, I think the most serious problem lies in the plot. All in all, they have the ability to unify the ninja world and conquer everyone early on, but they have to play like a child and wait for the villain to attack and then take the opportunity to unify. The reason is just to change the name. This leads to the protagonist being offline for a long time in the subsequent plot. There is nothing wrong with this way of writing. However, the subsequent plot and the unification of Kirigakure actually have little to do with the development of the new generation. That is to say, the previous content is not the key to the subsequent plot. It is equivalent to just writing a lot of branch lines, resulting in a large amount of content that is not interesting to read just by looking at the title. Of course, I think the biggest problem lies in the author's concept. I saw the author speak before, and it probably meant that novels with less than one million words or insufficient words are not qualified. However, I feel that if the plot is heavily filled with water, it will be boring and the number of words will increase. It is meaningless to the novel itself. Maybe after becoming Mizukage, a plot deduction that suits the protagonist's strength may be more exciting.

Alas, when reading other people's novels, I read 4,000 words every day and read them in less than two minutes. I always think that these dog authors can't do more? Who can see this? What? Am I short of starting coins? Or have you watched fewer ads? Now it's my turn to write a novel. I've been scratching my head for several hours every day to squeeze out 4,000 words. I can't squeeze out any more 😥

Blood Mist is not Konoha. The atmosphere of the village is a bit too peaceful.

To be honest, there are so many fans in Dead Fire Sea now that they can use bricks to build a house, but the author can write some new ideas, which is really good

To be honest, the protagonist became invincible too quickly. I thought he would develop for a while, but I didn't expect that he went to a parallel world and became invincible immediately. It's too early to become invincible. The protagonist is already strong enough before going to the parallel world. Except for Uchiha Madara and Liudou Otsutsuki, the protagonist has no one to fear. Going to the dragon vein to solve the chakra problem will actually make the combat effectiveness more in line with the current stage. But the protagonist directly absorbed Madara Uchiha, who was fully equipped with the Reincarnation Eye. This combat power can already penetrate Naruto. How will the protagonist participate in the subsequent plot? It feels very difficult, too invincible. The few remaining soldiers Obito gathered are not enough for the protagonist to escape. As expected, the protagonist is now forced to hide behind the scenes.

Now I feel that the style has changed, and now it feels a bit behind the scenes, which is not bad. After all, I have the strength, but I just feel that the protagonist's style of doing things is not so decent. Originally, one of the fun points of the fandom was to make up for some of the regrets of the original work, but now the protagonist's perspective seems to be only biased towards Kirigakure. When Kenji is doing things, such as the Nine-Tails Rebellion, he is in a state of observation and silent promotion, which feels uncomfortable. Although it is better for adults to be self-interested, whether it is Naruto or Pokémon, it feels like adult romance. It is a bit too political now, and they are a bit unscrupulous in order to achieve their goals.

"Arzeus has not yet arrived. If I fall again, the Pokémon will be alone, and Kirigakure Village will be destroyed at the hands of Mizukage and others." "I still have mythical beasts to catch, dreams to complete, and mistakes to correct." "How could I fall." "How could I fall!" "Kirikage needs me, Lanzi needs me, and the Pokémon family needs me." Needs me … Needs me. Jianchuan Orange! "So, I can't fall!" "I want to stand up, I want to..." "Fight again!" 🐶

No, I finally know what's wrong. After defeating a famous person in Konoha, Konoha will give you reputation, but you won't get anything from Ninjutsu if you fight so hard. The feeling of pleasure is as little as not at all. The more you look at the protagonist, the more he looks like a part-time worker.

These few chapters are too watery and have turned into a struggle, even though the previous writing was quite good. It's boring to watch Naruto fans engage in these fights. I feel like I've ordered these chapters in vain. I might as well draw another Pokémon.