The Devil Goes to the Left, the Brave Man Goes to the Right

The content is quite interesting, but the writing style is a bit strange. There are too many unnecessary details and it's hard to read😢

The writing is so bad, it's so easy to see Riqing's translation. The previous plot is so confusing that I can't keep anyone interested.

The plot is okay, but the writing is weird and makes me tired to watch. For example, in this paragraph, it could obviously be written that there are problems with coming from the devil world, but it is added in front of it. There is also the section about the Free Federation, which is also very strange to watch.

The plot setting feels quite interesting, and the protagonist should have a hidden T0 strength? It's just that the author's choice of words and sentences are too blunt. It would be good to polish this book's writing style. After all, this is the first time I can find some fun in such a chaotic narrative. Finally, come on~

I finally understand. Each generation of braves has its own unique skills. The first generation of traditional braves, the second generation of p-design players, the third generation of farming style, the fourth and fifth generation of invincible style.

After reading six chapters, I didn't understand what the author was trying to express. He didn't explain the plot clearly at all. If I didn't read the introduction, I wouldn't know who the protagonist is.

The subject matter and ideas are not very outstanding, and the writing is a mess💩I read a few chapters without my conscience and then walked away.

I have read it hundreds of times, but I don't think your writing in the comment section is so bad. Although it cannot be said to be excellent, it is of average level. It is very difficult to conceive a story, and it is even more difficult to express it into a long novel. It often takes a long time to write, and it is normal to be unable to write a word. I have written tens of thousands of words and dozens of chapters, so why can't I be more confident? Just cut it.

Could it be that he was reincarnated again? You can tell just by looking at the name.