Shenhao: Please Stop Doing This

I clicked on it casually, thinking I was reading a mindless article. Unexpectedly, the author launched a shameless head suck and stole all my points in one breath. Evaluation: Excellent rhythm, fluent writing, I read it in one breath, and there was no disconnection of ideas. The story is reasonable, and many operations that would be outrageous in reality are designed by the author to be very reasonable and natural, and it does not feel like it is forced to reduce intelligence. The pacing is also well designed, and the readers turn to the business war before they get tired of pretending to spend money. It's much better than the same kind of writing that ends in the same routine. Disadvantages/Suggestions: There are too many women, and there are too many characters. Although they all have reasonable plots, they are rarely mentioned again afterwards. I hope the author can pay attention to this and have better control over some tool characters. It is best to reuse these tool characters. There are too many names and it is a bit confusing. Every time I see a name, I have to think about it to distinguish it. Most of the female characters in the nightclub stage have withdrawn, which is good. Too many tool female sex partners are meaningless. The nightclub stage has passed, and low-value women are meaningless. And it is illogical to throw them away after the middle-value stage. If not, it is better to concentrate on writing a Zhang Ruonan or Shen Youchu. There are already enough characters, and there is no need to write more unremarkable ones. For example, Miss Zhou, who I am writing now, has a mediocre character and is not likable. I guess you may want to write about her mysterious classmate, but IMHO, there is no sense of expectation. It is better to write more about jewelry girls or hotel girls. I can't even remember the name. . . . The author writes the plots of different stages very smoothly, but it would be nice if they could not separate them so clearly. The career does not delay the partying, nor does it delay picking up girls. For example, do not write about the partying in a long paragraph, and then turn to write about the career without mentioning a word about the partying. However, this aspect should be a test of writing skills. The author tried his best. And why Some early characters such as the programmer brothers are completely worthy of better descriptions and more plots. They are interspersed between careers. It may be my personal reason. I like this character very much, but for such a three-dimensional character, the exclusive plot only has a Lamborghini company to show off, and it has not appeared in the follow-up for a long time. The above is purely my opinion, Hu Bibi. If the author doesn't like it, just think I'm farting. It's already written very well. Monthly tickets are offered. Come on

Interesting divine writing, rare!

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He is a righteous and generous person, and he is a big brother wherever he goes. Later, several white, beautiful and rich women competed for the position of big wives and spent all kinds of money on the male protagonist, but the male protagonist also gave him soft food. . . The format at the back is bigger. Why are you helping your brothers to find people in northern Burma? My sister-in-law had something stolen while traveling in Paris. You can just call her and return it obediently. Later, when mediating the war in the Middle East or the South American drug dealers' shopping spree, you will need to be the middleman to make peace. Anyway, there are brothers all over the world with just a phone call. . .

After reading Chapter 185, I couldn't help but want to say a few words. At the beginning, I felt that it was really well written, and I was having a good time with my brothers. Especially what his father said: Son, I am really spiritual. I know that everyone has a growth process, but he always does this. I really don't think it's necessary to think about being in a circle and cultivating connections. It completely goes against the core concept of this book, "Flower World", just be happy. Finally, I want to complain about the plot I just saw. The protagonist actually feels disappointed because he can't borrow 1 billion from his girlfriend? It's difficult for me to ask my wife to borrow 100,000 yuan from my parents' house for my business. Am I going to get divorced?

Organize a team to make movies and TV series, and support your brothers to the top

Shenhao writes about entrepreneurship and takes it as the main line. He treats women as if he has no feelings, and no woman has feelings. Then he uses tricks to deceive women physically and mentally, and then emphasizes that he has no feelings. It doesn't matter if you write about a scumbag, you write the woman as gentle, virtuous, and wholeheartedly living with you, and then you specifically emphasize that she is not emotionally involved and is simply a scumbag for the sake of being a scumbag, and she becomes a scumbag by using too much force. In order to make the protagonist look like a human being and also want to do charity, in the plot of going diving, it is described as being kind and spending money to help people recover corpses. As a result, the personality was divided, and while showing kindness, he deceived women's feelings, which made me mentally schizophrenic. The protagonist is described as a scumbag with no morals and emotions, but he must retain a little bit of humanity. It has nothing to do with the word "god". The protagonist is not worthy of the word "god". It can only be said that he is a nouveau riche who suddenly becomes rich and then takes revenge on women and then strives to be upwardly compatible in order to achieve class transfer. The first part was really attractive and comfortable to watch, but the more it turned out, the more the protagonist appeared, he seemed to be mentally ill to seek revenge on women, and he also looked like a Phoenix man trying to be upwardly compatible by any means necessary, which completely had nothing to do with a divine novel.

Jackie Chan's status is written high. He has status in the entertainment industry. In the business circle, especially in front of billionaire families, he is just an actor.

The structure is too small. If you open a Jingdong, the employees will be your brothers and the treatment will be better. With tens of millions of mansions, the poor people in the world will be happy! This skill can help a great cause If you use it to make small fuss in the early stage, I won't pick on you If it does this in the later stage, it is a shark arm

Shenhao didn't see it. He saw a silly boy who had an extraordinary plug-in but tried his best to get into a small circle and still talked about worldliness 🙂🙂

Set up a logistics company and pay your brothers to challenge the status of the postal service. The kind with cannons.

At first I thought the writing was quite unique and the writing style was good, but later on it became more and more extreme and disrespectful of people, especially women. A bit disgusting and very disappointing.

This book is the most innovative novel I have read recently, but I really don't like the plot lately, it's not satisfying enough. Maybe everyone is attracted to their own eyes, but I have come to see Shenhaowen. Is your entire serious career line? It's not about starting a business, it's about socializing. I think the audience who wants to read Shenhao's articles at least don't like licking, regardless of whether it's a woman or a man. Although you may feel that what you write is not about licking, but about worldliness, but worldliness essentially means abusing yourself. When you take the initiative to find a circle to hang out, you and your audience are not of the same mind. I liked this book before and took the time to code these words. If you think what I said is bullshit, then delete it, so as not to affect your sales. It's also possible that you don't want to repeat the pretense routine and want to write something new. Your new stuff attracted me at first, but recently it makes me feel boring. It's like two sides of the same coin. Just subscribe as you please, and it won't be a pity that I am missing a reader. I just saw Shenhaowen's loser, and he's not a big deal.

In the past, Shenhaowen couldn't stand it because it was too seductive. The plot of being a licking dog for a strange woman and throwing money at her was done. She also had to write a "sincere" emotional scene, and the content was extremely fragmented. After all, everyone is just reading online articles for fun. In reality, the trend of antagonism between men and women is getting more and more serious. Who dares to say who they can really grow old with? But most of the good buddies you met in high school and college can still be called out with just one phone call, right? There is a sentence in the book that may have been unintentionally written by the author, but I really like it. It probably means that apart from playing a vendetta against your wife to cut off money, men can develop some true feelings after playing for a long time. Not working in the same city, you have made new friends in the past three to five years, and it will not affect you from going to the roadside stall to brag during a long holiday when you are both free. And very few people who have been in a long-distance relationship for three to five years can finally get married. Although this book has become more and more popular since it was put on the shelves, I am still in the waiting period of subscribing, so I will write more about it later.

After reading Chapter 211, I can't complain anymore. Women don't have sex anymore, and they don't have fun in the colorful world anymore. I started to build a career, and the more I wrote, the more boring I became. Completely divorced from the original intention. I just wrote about diving while eating, drinking and having fun. It's not that exciting. I haven't experienced it yet, why can't I check the information? Douyin has so many popular science topics about food, drink and fun. You didn't bother to check the information at all. I took my brothers to play with guns and horses and went to the Far East to play with tanks, planes and cannons, drink good tea, smoke top-quality cigars, and fuck all kinds of hot girls. There are a lot of places where you can make money, so focus on business? Business is the least important thing in Shenhao's novel.

Ever since I came to Hong Kong, I couldn't stand it anymore. I wrote here and there, piecemeal. When writing a novel, just write it well. What Shenhao Wen wants is for readers to enjoy reading it. There are so many personal things included in it, so why are you doing it? Goodbye Jianghu

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Slip away. Taiwenqing is not suitable for me

Shenhao can be there, but sometimes he is very disrespectful, even if he is hurt by a woman. You can't hurt people casually.

Be brothers, in your heart. I can't get through the phone if something goes wrong

Delete comment! I can only praise, not express my true feelings.

It's okay for the protagonist to be humane and sophisticated, and he can grow mentally and become tactful, but it's a bit hard to accept being a social network celebrity. I'm not here to watch the twists and turns of business battles to get to the top. Shenhao's circle is the top circle, and anyone who doesn't move closer to me will be eliminated. By the way, when will the update time be stabilized?

After it was released, the more I wrote, the more disgusting it became. I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 210.

It was good in the early stage, very attractive, but later on starting a business was a bit biased. It's not that it's not good to start a business and become an Internet celebrity, but it's almost a feeling. Later, it depends on personal preferences in terms of emotional private matters. Thousands of people have different opinions. I'm not sensitive. I'm a little tired of changing maps after going abroad. I'm almost new. Let's take a look again. Let's see the pitfalls of your genius club.

In fact, if you really pay your employees, you will become a tycoon. Look at Fat Donglai now! It's the most typical

Open a live streaming company and challenge your brothers to invest in them. Otherwise, your brothers will be afraid if you send gifts too many times.

After seeing 200 pictures, I really can't stand it anymore. What's written on the back is so awesome that anyone can step on it. Not happy at all

I clicked on it and read a lot. It turned out to be the book I gave to my good gay friends.

The writing is quite good, but the only thing is that the heroine is just a fictional character? None of them really exist, there is really no sense of immersion in this aspect, and the driving scenes are all mentioned in one stroke. The author's writing skills are insufficient in this aspect.