Shenhao: I Can Withdraw the Wealth of My Ancestors

No one will read your style of writing. Your first book was very good. Everyone likes the real pretentiousness you wrote, because we are all ordinary people who need to take on the role of the protagonist and imagine themselves to be powerful. In fact, it is best to do that. You can respond to a hundred responses with one sentence. Very cool.

There are too many books about picking up girls, and nothing too good. Grandpa makes money and just skips over it. What is unique about this subject is time travel and making money. There are too many books about picking up girls. Just keep it simple. There is no need to be too detailed in pretending to be cool.

Don't write out all the plot. . . The hotel singing game "Women" is too long-winded. It would be better if it were split into three parts and embedded with other plots. . . I'm tired of aesthetics. I guess many people just stop watching it.

A bowl of noodles contains 90% of the soup.

After seeing the latest, I have several feelings. It's good to pick up many jokes, and the author is rich in emotion, knowledge and wisdom. The only shortcoming is that there are too few updates 🙂 4k updates per day, speaking for you 6k updates per day, calling for you 8k updates per day, free monthly tickets Updates of 10,000 words per day, likes and recommendations Updates of 20,000 words per day, a great scholar will debate the scriptures for you!

It's so beautiful

The author should start again. The writing is okay, but this setting is a contradiction. You said you changed the past, but will it change now? Now it's hard to say whether there is you or not. Unless you perfect this theory, this novel will be limited.

Pulling is fun, nothing else. The writing is actually quite good, but it's a bit empty and flat, and it's hard to have any emotional ups and downs.

It's boring. It's already so popular before it's even released. Hurry up and write about your ancestors. Stop trying to pick up girls in real life.

You still need to read this to pick up girls. It mainly depends on your ancestors. Your ancestors are mentioned in one stroke. Now there are so many descriptions.

The male protagonist's style is a bit like Bai Haonan in the movie "The Winner Takes the King" that I watched a few years ago. The protagonist did not play match-fixing to hide from the boss behind him, but kept picking up girls and improving on the road Later, it also wrote about overseas and even participating in war plots. This book is currently on the way to travel. The plot and writing are very good. I hope to surpass Brother Haonan. Come on.

Why don't you re-open the original book based on what everyone pointed out to you, the character of the good brother that the brothers want to see, and specify that it will work. You can see it carefully.

Very well written😍

Not bad, not bad, it suits my taste😍

Let's go back to the Good Brother flow. The style of the first book is quite good.