Immortal Invasion? Invasion of Xianxia!

The original world is written in a bad way, like shit, and is very different from Xia Gaoyang's book. I don't understand what Zheng Wanqiu's role is. I originally thought you wanted to write about her realizing her mistakes and returning to the wrong path. After all, she didn't do anything. She is even very consistent with a normal person, but she has no vision of people. But now the comments from netizens disgust me, making readers feel disgusted with her. It's a bit stupid to shape the character through netizens' comments. I hope it can be changed. Finally, I would like to say that the first three pictures are really not good-looking, and I would be very dissatisfied. It's disgusting to forcefully pretend to be cool when you have nothing. The following ones are pretty good, but the first three pictures are very dissatisfying. If I hadn't seen Xia Gaoyang, I would have left immediately.

The pig's trotters are portrayed well so far. I hope the character's personality won't be changed later to advance the plot.

Group travel is something that can subvert the entire world and social structure. An "official" organization can have villains, but it cannot be stupid and incompetent. Personally, I think this aspect is overdone. Regarding the corpse of the Aries God General, it was seen that it was penetrated by a punch, and it was burned without careful investigation. No organization in the village can reach this level. And it doesn't matter who killed him, just to show off a humanoid weapon to the boss and not investigate? Have you ever thought carefully about the concept of this behavior? It's roughly equivalent to "There is a nuclear weapon hidden in the city, but I think he is a good person, so I won't investigate." This woman has so much power without any restraint from the organization, she is still stupid. Really, brother, this paragraph of your writing is unbearable to watch.

I think this character is well written and reminds me of the two female leaders I have encountered. I don't understand that many people criticize the author for this character. Shouldn't it be because the author is awesome when he writes a villain that draws hatred? How can you say that the shaping is not done well? If you want to treat a villain as a heroine, then of course it's not good, but it's obvious that this is a pure villain.

For now, the portrayal of the female character Zheng Wanqiu is a failure.

A finance major solves a criminal case. That's nonsense. You are very proficient in how to commit economic crimes, but complex criminal cases involve all parties and countries, and you are a time traveler who knows nothing about it. You are completely missing all five senses and limbs. It is lucky that your identity is not discovered. Solving the case is whimsical, and the author must have some logic to write a cool and divine article. It is too ridiculous for a beggar to turn into an emperor in an instant.

Not bad, very good... I would like to say that you have the qualifications to become a god

The new book is very interesting, please keep writing it. There are really no regular readers anymore, so I have to change my account and start again. . .

Ever since you wrote about the first powerful official, I thought your writing was very good and your writing style was also humorous. I was waiting for the new book with great hope, but I didn't expect it. After I missed the last book, I also lost interest in your new book. I guess I still wanted to read it, but I didn't expect it to be right. At the rate you are going, all the popularity accumulated by powerful officials will be defeated. Think about it carefully before writing it. No reader wants to read a novel without an ending.

Xianxia? All I saw was a mortal rolling in the mud

Yo! What a coincidence, isn't this! I saw it when you opened a new book

The two worlds feel like they are both high-level martial arts worlds. They are too homogeneous and have no differences. They have nothing to do with Xianxia. They are not foundation-building or golden elixir ones. They are okay, but not what I want to see.

After the book is written, the author becomes famous

What can I say about this book? It has platinum status. Both the portrayal of the protagonist and the profiles of the supporting characters are perfect. The sense of immersion can be said to be very strong. I am not exaggerating. I have been exposed to online novels since the sixth grade of elementary school. I can say that I have read countless books now. I am definitely a hardcore bookworm. As we all know, the more books you read, the more picky your taste becomes. Ordinary books cannot be discerned at all. Some books can be known just by looking at their titles. For a slightly more advanced book, you can also guess the outline by looking at its introduction. For a more deceitful author, his book title and introduction have successfully attracted me, but I can guess almost as soon as I look at the table of contents, and I can even judge whether a book will enter the palace. But this book is different. First of all, the title of his book attracted me very much. I initially concluded that the author is also an unconventional person in some aspects of life. Looking at the introduction of this book again, do you feel an addictive impulse? After reading the table of contents three times, you won't know until you look at it. At the first glance, you will be shocked. One word, it's amazing! Book title + introduction + table of contents, the trinity! The three basic elements of the novel are interconnected, linking up the past and echoing each other. It is very rare to be able to do this. At this point, an online novel has been completed. Let's look at the content of the first three chapters. The three golden chapters of online articles are extremely important. If the three chapters are not written well, the book will probably be useless. Therefore, the first three chapters must attract readers. This author has handled it very well. The unique beginning makes people want to read on. Basically everything that needs to be explained is explained, and the main theme is to be frank and lenient. As of today's latest chapter, its rich content still makes people want to stop it, itching unbearably, and can't help but want to explore the following content. The story plot has ups and downs and is soul-stirring! Some of the people and events in the article are also thought-provoking. The author also gives different perspectives on issues related to morality and ethics, and handles them very well. From the current point of view, the writing style of this book is excellent, and the writing is natural. The exquisite wording, smooth sentences, and profound writing power seem to be inhuman! Reading it feels like being there, and it's amazing! The author's writing style is unique and he can be called a master! To sum up, this book is definitely the best novel ever written. It surpasses its predecessors, jumps out of the frame, and has eclectic content. It is difficult to regard it as a traditional online novel. This is a treasure that has never existed before and will never exist again in the future. It only exists now. I know that my evaluation may be difficult for people to accept. It is a bit exaggerated. I will not argue about this. I will leave it to future generations to evaluate whether it is good or bad.

The part after Killing the Aries was written too hastily. The supporting characters are of course subdued, but the protagonist's reaction to this is also a bit conflicting with the previously well-educated character. The supporting characters are the foil for the protagonist. If the supporting characters are not well written, it will make the protagonist not very good. It's a pity.

No, this book is no longer updated? ? ? ?

What's going on with this book? I also voted for a monthly ticket last month I was going to order a book today, but it was updated seven days ago? ? Sent?

The writing is pretty good, but I'm still curious about where the country's power lies?

This is not even the slightest bit different from Xia Gaoyang.

Aries is a bit smart, now it's all about genetic testing, who wants to watch the video?

I read it yesterday and it was finished.

At the beginning of the month, I was going to order all the books I had been reading for a month, and I would read them later. But when I ordered this book, it was already finished... Oh, what a market 😥😴

"A boy from this world, a cruel dark corpse king appeared in the elf world. He sat on a luxurious toilet made of gold. He often robbed the elves on the way and asked them: Do you think I look like a human being? If the answer is yes, he will sit back on the toilet with satisfaction. If If you answer no, he will become furious and send out his minions to destroy everything. The beautiful elven world is suffering from a great crisis. Please sign a contract with us and become an invincible warrior to resist the Dark Corpse Emperor! " A cute blue bird-shaped elf in the subspace shouted. "I will give you love and tolerance!" A brown and green fat little elf said, blinking his mung bean eyes. "I will give you courage and strength!" A red elf with two horns on his head said, waving his cute little sword. "I will give you happiness and patience!" A purple elf said, swinging his crab hands and tentacles. "And I will give you wisdom and magic!" The cute blue bird-shaped elf stretched out his colorful wings and said. "Who do you want to choose for the contract?" "As a child, I can't tell. I want to try them one by one!" The bald boy said eagerly. As a result, the bald boy named Walkerma von Hindenstein gained unparalleled piety and power. His love was so strong that he claimed to be the spiritual descendant of the God-Emperor and a living saint. He even made up rumors that he was a descendant of the God-Emperor's illegitimate son... His courage was so strong that he would ride into the battlefield in a chariot, shouting spells while wielding a hammer to kill any dirty scum who dared to touch his luxurious carriage with dirty hands. His happiness is so simple. Apart from whipping himself every day, you don't know what he did to the statue of the God Emperor while hiding in his room... His wisdom is so outstanding. He reads ancient scrolls and scripture files in the Imperial Library every day, and from the treasure house of forbidden knowledge, he understands a great truth: justice will defeat evil, otherwise it will be defeated by evil. "After so many years, what is your choice?" The four elves asked in the dark. "Only children make choices, and I, the greatest gentleman in the empire, the invincible pastor, the light of civilization, the holy Archbishop Walkerma, want them all!" The bald middle-aged man stretched out his big hand and shook it tightly. As a result, his body turned into a skeleton, and he was forced to put on the Bone King's armor and the crown of witchcraft. He cut off his right hand and forcibly attached it to a bone melon. His body was repeatedly pierced inside and outside by the black tentacles ejected until it was completely wrapped. Became Nagash, the Corpse King. "What a greedy guy. I've run out of ideas. Let's find the next person to seduce." The four elves named Nurgle, Khorne, Slaanesh, and Tzeentch discussed this. "Young man from this world, a brutal dark corpse emperor has appeared in the elf world..." Before the cute blue bird-shaped elf finished speaking, the bard who was stopped said: "Lovely elf, have you heard of Cathay?" "Um..." The bird-shaped elf seemed to have a strange association, and replied tremblingly: "The medieval one?" "Exactly, I have a long narrative poem of 800,000 words. Please give me some time and listen to me in detail."

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

Completed 🤔