Simulating Immortal Cultivation: Senior Sister, Your Character Is Ruined

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​]​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Know ((out-of-the-box) simulations is that there are too many simulations, is that the combat power is broken, is that the senior sister is not like a reborn person, and the protagonist is that they are too clown-y and so on - is that they can't be compared to others. I think they are all minor issues, the focus is on the character of the protagonist, who has gone from being a show-off to being too diligent. I can only say that the pressure on the senior sister is enough. As long as you keep the wonderful interaction with the senior sister and add some little mysteries that are slowly solved, this book will be popular I feel that the classification is wrong. The immortal cultivator is more interested in the description of combat power and less emotional drama. If it is a light novel, it will not be entangled in these points, but will ask for the addition of a female character. It is difficult to pure love

Chapter 117 was simply written in vain. It was previously simulated that the immortal soul already existed before Lin Zhiyu ascended to the upper world, which then led to Lin Zhiyu killing all the senior officials of the sect. Then in Chapter 117, you forcefully attributed the immortal being knocked down to Lin Zhiyu. I would like to ask how Lin Zhiyu used the world barrier from the lower realm to defeat the immortals in the upper realm? With such strength, Lin Zhiyu is just a little immortal? This must have the strength of the Immortal Emperor. It made me so poisonous that I couldn't stand it anymore

The interaction with the senior sister is very interesting, but is the arrangement of this immortal realm really reasonable? The Nascent Soul is not as good as a dog, and the transformed gods are all over the earth. The peak masters of a peak are all Earth Immortals. There are a lot of Earth Immortals with less than 50 pictures. They have always emphasized the third-level Dao Foundation. So I want to know what Dao Foundation those Earth Immortals are? There is also the setting of the artistic conception inside. So far, before Jin Dan, other monks' understanding of Tao was on average in the meaning of Tao. The main character is Tao Xiang. However, Pig's Foot has been simulated until the peak of returning to the void, and he has not broken through to the realm of Tao. So how do other people understand it? Are they more powerful than the first-grade Taoist? Even the protagonist with this configuration cannot even pass the Earth Immortal Tribulation. There are not a lot of other Earth Immortals. As a result, the protagonist has simulated it so many times and never reached the Earth Immortal level once.

It's okay, but the promotion of the main plot is actually centered on the bond between the protagonist and his senior sister. To a certain extent, this is a romance novel. The protagonist is a time traveler, and the plug-in is a simulator. Senior sister's reborn person, the plug-in is the talent of cultivation. Senior sister was kidnapped in her previous life. In this life she wants to change and become stronger, so she causes trouble everywhere. The protagonist falls in love with his senior sister and always follows her and works silently. The main plot line is not complicated and the writing is not bad, but this type of novel has its own natural flaws and is destined to not be long. The biggest flaw is that if the protagonist wants a woman and abandons the senior sister, he can get more and better women, and can open up a wider harem. The protagonist has no reason to hang himself on the senior sister. The protagonist can live a better life if he abandons the senior sister. Choosing the senior sister will obviously reduce the protagonist's quality of life.

Finally, this book has only one female protagonist. Kowtow to all the bosses.

The protagonist's performance in the simulation was too arrogant, and everything revolved around Senior Sister Rao. Moreover, the senior sister has been punished several times, and the senior sister, who has lived for hundreds of years, has unusual feelings for the protagonist. It is too intellectual. Is this a powerful re-cultivation?

I've been writing nonsense lately, does anyone read it? I write every day to get rid of the edges. Anyway, if you write like this tomorrow, I will give up. . . How many of those who read at Qidian want to read something marginal? Damn it.

I suggest that if the author continues to write like this... Then just change the platform to write... That way you don't have to be so secretive.

Didn't he secretly touch the heroine's stockinged legs after only a few meetings? The two inattentive women fall in love with the male protagonist. The male protagonist is really self-righteous and worthy of being a daily drug addict. It really disgusts me.

A common problem with simulators is that they overwhelm the protagonist, so they have to find a reason to kill the protagonist. The protagonist, a first-level Taoist peerless genius, cannot break through the Earth Immortal, and the sect peak masters are all Earth Immortals. Moreover, in the simulator, there is no interaction with the senior sister. In reality, the protagonist rushes to join in, which doesn't look good.

Emmm, I really can't imagine how a reincarnated Earth Immortal with swordsmanship and sword skills at the Earth Immortal level could lose to a protagonist with only two kinds of swordsmanship 😥

It's hard to understand why a reborn genius cannot defeat a person who only relied on his golden fingers to understand a few sword intentions. He has been fishing for who knows how many years and started practicing even later. (I can understand if the gold finger is opened wide, but it is not wide)

It's too uncomfortable to press and hold the same pressure. I feel that simulating once every 7 days is a bit too frequent, which makes me feel uncomfortable every time I simulate. Moreover, no matter how many simulations are done, most of the rewards will be to increase the Taoist intention by one level. In this way, it is better to simulate to a higher level of Taoist intention and then run away and commit suicide.

It's too poisonous. Cultivation is not like cultivating immortals, falling in love is not like falling in love, and the writing about fighting is too crotch-shaking. It can be read as a simple novel.

The only function of the system is to issue a love task

This is the story of an innocent boy of 17 or 18 years old who crossed the road to buy a drink, was hit by a Universiade car, and traveled to a different world.

After reading Chapter 187, the front part is indeed very interesting, but the further back you go, the faster you read. The routines are the same, infinite upgrades and map changes. I feel bored after seeing the back

It seems that he is determined to write a flying protagonist.

The combat power has collapsed a bit. Even if you can build a foundation and cross the golden elixir, now you have to cross the Nascent Soul, crossing two major realms. In other simulators, you can return to the void and kill the earthly immortal. In the later stage, you can kill people across a large realm. It's a bit outrageous, but it depends on how the author writes it. After all, it is your own setting.

What a tragedy. The male protagonist has turned into a dog-licker! !

No, I bought this book all the way to the end of the book. Why do you ask me to pay for it again?

Are you still alive? Author, please come back for more updates 🙂

How can I put it this way, it is difficult to read a romance novel even though it has some flaws, but it seems a bit naive as a novel about cultivating immortals? It seems that you don't necessarily have to go to the pool to simulate and shock others every time. Firstly, it is old-fashioned, and secondly, it exposes your trump card. You can just stay in the cave and finish the simulation before going out to fish. The discussion with senior sister can be done privately, why should it be made public? A mediocre little beggar suddenly went against the grain and made it clear that he had a problem... You can probably guess that the plot behind it is to be targeted for inheritance, and then pretend to be slapped in the face... The author may think that the climax of the plot is gone, but the contrast between the climax in the simulator and the stability of reality is also a technique. Otherwise, there will be many bugs in the plot... And these bugs will cause the protagonist's level to rise slowly. Maybe the author wants to increase the level of the male and female protagonist to be interesting? But I always think that if the protagonist loses, the heroine loses to the next target to seduce other men, tsk... I don't know how many times I was cheated in this simulation 😰

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