Full-Time Hunter Starts with the Hunter Exam

The first three chapters perfectly create an image of a person who is a little smart but thinks he is arrogant and shows off everywhere In general, it is very unpleasant

A very interesting fanfic. However, there are also some problems. There is too much emphasis on the so-called logical reasoning and the abandonment of the logic of the original work. Especially in the second part of the hotel scam, judging from the original work, most of the hunter assessment is buried in transportation and checkpoints. In other words, there are two situations. In the first case, candidates rush to the exam venue non-stop after registration. Basically, there will be no large-scale rest time, and the screening is basically narrowed down from large groups to individuals through test recommendations. For example, when Leorio and others went to Fierce Fox, there were basically only a few people. In other words, the test is whether the candidates can make a choice and find a suitable venue in a short time. In this case, there will probably be two situations. The first type of scam exists, but it is probably related to the Hunters Association. The second type of scam will directly serve as the examiner of this test. The summary is that it is a bit of a bullseye shooting and it is said to be a scam, while ignoring the original work or the rationality of the hunter assessment time and level design, and then there is a lack of diversity of candidates. Anyone who pretends to be a customs clearance information or examiner will inevitably encounter violent resistance. There are many examples in the original work, such as the human-faced monkey, Menqi, trap tower, etc. Considering the benefits of the hunter exam, it is a bit natural to scare the contestants by procrastination. Generally speaking, the best design is related to the hunter assessment, and then creates several smart people, such as Kurapika, Gon, and others who see through the scam, or the uncle who talks to Gon about the truth like Juezu Juela's analysis. There is too much emphasis on the protagonist's reasoning, which is a bit dependent on the script and reduces the mobility of other candidates. Based on the diversity of the candidates, there should be some stupid ones at the beginning, that is, they will not accept your tricks and directly engage in violence, or ask you to take out your hunter's license; those who are tolerant will act in private; those who watch theaters will highlight their differences; those who have fun will find a prominent place and pay attention to changes in the situation. But few would look at such an obvious example and waste time here.

Not a cool article in the traditional sense! The protagonist has no system, is not invincible, does not cheat, and has an average appearance! After traveling to the Hunter World, I was still self-righteous and underestimated the Hunter World, so I deserved to be slapped hard in the face! The first two volumes have a total of 79 chapters and 160,000 words. They are all taking the hunter exam. During this period, the protagonist cannot use telekinesis at all! It wasn't until the third volume, the undercover gangster chapter, that the protagonist began to practice telekinesis, truly paid attention to the hunter world, and curbed his bad habits of self-righteousness! It was also from this time on that the protagonist began to move towards becoming stronger and subtly participated in various major events in the Hunter World! Including but not limited to the origin of the chimera ants, and Cajin's exploration of the dark continent, etc. The new author wants to describe a relatively ordinary person, the hardships and surprises of exploring the hunter world. I don't guarantee that the writing will be good, but I will definitely guarantee that it is not super supervisory! It is recommended that readers lower their strong expectations for the protagonist in the early stage, and instead choose to watch and accompany the protagonist to gradually change! If this does not meet your needs, I can only say sorry to you! Then this book of mine is really not suitable for you! A guide to avoiding poison! Be careful when entering the pit to watch!

The character of the protagonist is too weak, and I wanted to write it as a battle of wits, but to be honest, instead of showing wisdom, it showed stupidity. If you travel through time and become a child, will you really become a child? I am easily moved by others, I am easily influenced by others, and I am even kidnapped by others morally. I feel that I am not as emotionally stable and have clear goals as the 30-year-old social beast around me.

The author still doesn't realize he's made a mistake. It is true that you designed different exam content. But you focused too much on the plot of Allen and his son from the first exam. It even lasted until the third exam. The relationship between father and son is inherently awkward or pretentious. From the first to the third exam, you made their relationship the key point that led to conflicts. The writing of the third scene was so slow again. Before the end of the first exam, I wrote about the feeling of being a full-time hunter. From the second exam, especially the third exam, the writing is the same as that of Qiong Yao drama...

The author writes the novel with a two-dimensional thinking. The background of the story, the initial setting of the protagonist, the ultimate goal of the protagonist, and his passion for adventure are all the same. I want to start a great story/a great voyage/become a great person, plus the superpowers and wits of the Hunter World. Isn't it cool? However, the underlying structure of the two-dimensional world is still based on the law of the jungle, with the strong being respected. However, its top-level structure is not like the real world, which has universal concepts that are compatible with the development of civilization. Let's talk about the Hunter Association. According to this game, you can become a hunter only if you have a firm goal. Why is living an ordinary life not considered a "goal"? You must know that in reality, ordinary life is also very difficult for ordinary people (damn 996). To develop telekinesis, perhaps too many superpowers will bring chaos, but telekinesis users are consumed very quickly. In other words, cannon fodder is still needed. Why do so few pass the exam every year? The ultimate goal of some two-dimensional works is just to defeat the last big boss, and forget to give "order" to the world. And in a world that lacks "order", how to organize people? How to define the right and wrong of human behavior? How can we not judge heroes based on their success or failure? The two-dimensional world is still very realistic, but it is artistic, highlighting some things and making people ignore some things.

The Hunter World is not actually a world of equal exchange. It is purely information isolation. The more things you know, the stronger your Nian Nian ability can be developed.

Stop playing detective games. To be honest, it's a bit of a drama. The plot is too long.

The author seems to have put too much energy into shaping the plot. Not to mention how many people could read the dozens of chapters of poker without skipping a beat. The biggest problem is that the protagonist is not likable, and can even be said to be annoying. In web articles, the plot should serve the protagonist, rather than the protagonist serving the plot.

It looks like the male protagonist of a detective novel. He doesn't have the feeling of a hunter. He can have a rational and soft side, but the main theme of the hunter is still relatively cruel. A chapter of growth must be arranged for the protagonist as soon as possible. Sometimes a little more emotional and crazy can better reflect the beauty of reason.

The first few chapters of this book were good, but then I got a little unreadable. Just the so-called "fighting of wits", let alone the protagonist, even Hisoka is written as a bit mentally retarded. In addition, the protagonist has been reborn for half a year and has no consciousness at all? Six months later, you still treat everyone else as an NPC? It's just that he has incorrect outlook on life, and his brain is also not good. He hasn't thought that he might die for half a year, and he hasn't made any plans for half a year? Personally, I feel that the author's rhythm needs to be adjusted. As for the first test, there are all kinds of personal stuff, and I won't mention the rest. It's hard to describe in a single sentence. I don't know what to say about the characterization. The examiners generally just yell, and they yell everywhere.

It's not even as good as Zhixi in the original work. If he continues with such talent, the protagonist at the beginning of the main plot will be at the level of the Scissors Killer, not even the Bomb Demon. Could it be that the author wants to take a route similar to "God's Alibi" or "Fourth Dimensional Apartment", which is not strong in combat but very capable?

It feels completely different from most Qidian male videos. . . Ummmm, does anyone really like this kind of idiot male protagonist? Isn't it written with a disgusting protagonist? At the end of the first volume, it was very depressing to be crushed by Hisoka first, and then immediately threatened for the second time. This is not to say that the plot cannot be like this, but it is very uncomfortable for the reader. Then entering the second dungeon, a telepathic person was threatened by a gangster with a gun in Chapter 20.30. . . It was suppressed three times in a row, but there was nothing exciting in between. Is it really reasonable to expand the content like this? Not really optimistic about it.

It's tasteless to eat, but it's a pity to discard it. To be honest, a battle of wits without the aid of force is really boring (=_=) Judging from your estimate, this exam will take at least sixty or seventy chapters. If it's boring, go eat ashes in the corner of my bookshelf.

The first few chapters are extremely well written! It is no longer a fanfic that was sensational when it first came out. It is extremely important to make the supporting characters flesh and blood without losing the excitement of being the protagonist. The protagonist has some flaws, which I think are pretty good and no longer perfectionist. It is not a "Hunter" that is promoted all the way. It pays attention to the plot, enriches the details, improves the supporting characters, and plays the game back and forth between the hunter and the prey. This is the Hunter I want to watch!

I can understand that the author wants an ordinary person to read the comics he likes, and then gradually change his romantic imagination of the comics, and then improve himself. There is no problem with this idea. The problem is that you are inconsistent. You have given the protagonist the identity of a profiler in the front and you have given him wisdom. His defeat must not be a bullshit. He loses because of a very small thing, and he loses only because he is only a little bit stronger. Why can't this book allow readers to relate to it? Because the protagonist in your novel is not the way a normal person should think. Why can a novel about cultivating immortals be able to relate to it, because he is an idea of a normal person? You, a normal person, will treat me to a meal, and I have to help you solve everything? You want to write about the impact of the father-son relationship on the protagonist and then he finally realizes that this is reality. Do you feel awkward when you read the father-son relationship you wrote? Finally, there is a special NPC. The protagonist is a trash passerby. Brother, what on earth are you going to write about? The description you gave is so rubbish. A fan with such a good intention at the beginning wrote like this. You are really not good at it. It was probably during the second exam that you arranged a new supporting role. The protagonist here should pass the test with his son so that the real events can be seen from the perspective of the protagonist, instead of being messy and making the readers struggle to understand through a long meaningless quarrel. Then the protagonist is beaten by Dongba. There were two tricks, and I'm serious. The writing here is very poor. The key is that there is no plot after that. The first time the protagonist followed the B grid you gave me before, he shouldn't be defeated by Dongba in wisdom after that, but he did the second trick and broke the defense. This pair of protagonists had a poor sense of substitution. The protagonist changed from an intelligent protagonist to a passerby, and you brutally abused the protagonist at the end. So I ask you what makes you happy? In the entire first volume, the IQ was crushed by Dongba, the potential was crushed by the son of a passerby whom I met, and the protagonist had no highlights. Your writing is really amazing.

A Conan-like protagonist, and a Conan whose knowledge and skills have been severely reduced.

I recommend a hunting novel, a fantasy and otherworldly novel, the hunting scenes are very realistic. "Polar Hunter: Fishing for Seals in the Ice Cave"