Cosmic Myth: Beginning with the Meteorite Creator

The writing is very good, the creativity is good, and the following is my opinion The form of crystal people, as inorganic life, can have many forms, and it does not have to be human form. Naturally evolved creatures must have their own unique advantages. The omnipotence of cats and the flexibility of invertebrates. The greatest advantage of humans is wisdom, which is different from the higher intelligence of other animals. Since crystal people have human intelligence, they will not only have human forms And later Continuing the plot, extracting a few key words, warrior, training, fighting It can be clearly seen that it is a very standard modern online martial arts plot. There are too many such plots and it is boring The subsequent plot and the beginning are too torn. As mentioned before, the power of human technological civilization, destroying giant beasts is child's play. The Crystal Man civilization has three ancestors, a protagonist, and Lan who can teach technology. Many years have passed, and the Crystal Man civilization has become a warrior civilization. . . . . It's hard to understand, I even think this beginning was bought

The first 16 chapters were pretty much the same thing, which made me think it was a behind-the-scenes development flow. However, after chapter 16, it jumped directly to 900 years later, and then changed the protagonist and became a loser pretending to be a slap in the face flow. Only then did I realize, oh, it turns out that the first 16 chapters were a background introduction to the world view. Anyway, up to now (September 20, 2024), except for the first 16 chapters, I don't think the content of this book has any connection with the title of the introduction. Now the first protagonist has become a pure background board, and the story has returned to the same old routine. The current story is that I know the ending after reading the beginning, which feels quite boring. Finally, I would like to say that I originally thought it was the kind of creation god style, but in the end, it is still the same old loser who pretends to be a slap in the face and then becomes a genius and finally becomes a peerless master and creates a new era. I am tired of watching it. Can you try something new?

What a pity. The more you read, the more pity you get. I suggest you just cut the second volume. Then continue writing the creation in the first volume. When the infrastructure is completed, the species is completed, the close-up of the three ancestors is completed, the two gods hold the kingdom high and hide behind the scenes. It is not too late to write about the emergence of racial resistance heroes. During this period, there are interspersed with the ring of star beasts, the peeping of alien gods, and a little bit of Cthulhu's indescribable erosion, and a drop of black soul blood to kill each other. That would be even more perfect. I really can't watch Crystal Man Fighting Through the Sky at all. Genesis: Black Crystal is more in line with the taste of current readers.

The title and introduction of the book do not match the content. It jumps 900 years in a flash. Not to mention, the sense of immersion is zero. The protagonist's sense of existence disappears directly, and the separation is serious.

It's so confusing. It's a great creation article, but in the second volume, the main line of thinking suddenly changed and a crystal battle broke out. The author's audience is probably going to disappear.

The first 16 chapters describe the main character, who is having fun watching it, but then jumps 900 years, and the main character disappears. They all describe the step-by-step growth of a useless crystal man, just like changing the main character. Dozens of consecutive chapters make people lose the desire to read. The first 16 chapters describe group portraits, but starting from the second volume, they all change the main character and only describe him.

The Creator hasn't come out for so long? You've been digging this hole for too long, right?

Either write directly about the creation of the myth and continue it, or write about his creation 900 years later. Being so hard-faced is just asking for trouble. Seeing him kill the giant beast, I thought they were going to create a race for hegemony later. As a result, you jumped directly to 900 years later. At that time, I thought I was just writing some emotional records hundreds of years later. Some books are also written in this way. Although it is very dramatic, there is no problem. When I looked at the catalog, it turned out that it was 900 years later. There is no description at all before, just jumping like this can only be said to be a big thunder.

I just wrote it wrong. Even though I was a god, my grades were ruined by Huang Zheng in the third era. You have made such a difference since then.

The span of the jump is too large and the feeling of fragmentation is severe.

It feels too jumpy to look at, there are so many sudden spans, and there are so many pitfalls.

A good book. As long as it doesn't collapse and stays stable, it will be a good book!

Some sentence fragments are like AI, which is very uncomfortable to read. I hope the author can improve it in the future, otherwise it will affect the reading experience.

Don't cut it off. I think we can still save it.

A very good book, Liang Cao

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down, work hard and encourage each other 😁

It feels like a pity. The setting is similar to the Kingdom of Gemstones, but the plot is too fragmented. I don't know if it can be brought back together.

I really like this theme and setting, but the plot is just an ordinary novel!

Actually, the author might as well just not write about the behind-the-scenes. The second volume, which is interspersed with history, is very well written. It can also be used by different audiences. From the perspective of quality alone, I think the second volume is much higher than the first volume.

Author, don't give up. I think your writing is very good. Come on, don't give up.