Nordic Mythology: Start Ragnarok in Advance

Although the writing is not very good, he can accept it, at least it is not mindlessly licking the gods + seeing the woman unable to walk, at least he can see, it is much better than the others, not particularly poisonous, so he can accept it.

I judge that you are eager to confront everyone. The most basic thing in writing is to make everyone happy. What are you trying to disturb by creating such clown-like content? In one sentence, no matter what you want to write, you want to express something that no one cares about. You just want to make everyone happy. If this philosopher writes prose, do you still think that you are so good at handling the plot of the character? Is everyone too aggressive? I need to scold you😅😅😅😅

I was confused when I read the new book. The protagonist, a black dragon, looked like a headless fly every step of the way. Existing since the beginning of the world, the ancestor-like leader needs planning but not planning, and needs strength but not power. You said it's okay to play a mortal protagonist, but you can also develop well if you are an ordinary jungler who saves resources and embraces the chosen one. The result Everywhere I go, I feel defeated, a typical thankless person, with a hot face and a cold butt. In the end, after a lot of effort, I got a huge benefit. Really, I don't understand a little bit. What are you trying to do with this plot and this character setting? Obviously the character setting of the protagonist is good at the beginning, and the subject matter is also good. I have to make this book a disaster for me to be happy.

I would also like to give some suggestions. Don't blame them all for being a black man. Since you want to build up your power, don't create a group of subordinates who can overpower your superiors. Otherwise, you are really making a mistake. Aren't there countless venomous snakes in Nighold that bite the World Tree together? You can directly use dragons and snakes as weapons. Regarding the Familia, I suggest you read more about how other people write about divine protagonists. Even if the Familia cannot help a lot, they must not add to the chaos. Otherwise, after reading so many content about the protagonist building up his power, readers will just take off their pants and fart, and they will still be scolded, or they can be like trying to win over each other. Some monsters and evil god allies, but don't have content where the protagonist is taken advantage of by inferior characters. If you can't write a good strategic plan, don't write it. Develop your power steadily and take advantage of mature past life memories. For example, many Greek mythology novels create non-existent things and concepts in advance to seek the priesthood. Although it is better to be vulgar than to poison, the strategy plan you write will only make everyone think that a fool is plotting, and it will bring the level of all characters to a level that everyone thinks is not as good as mine.

I think the description of the plot is okay, but why do I feel that the protagonist always suffers: The reputation is really not good. After fighting the boss and no one else was seriously injured, I broke off my wings and got nothing (the creation of the new world is none of my business, and the sacrifice of the new world is none of my business). It's hard to tell that the strength has improved a lot, but it's hard to tell that you've been resting on the laurels of your previous life. You can see the evil at a glance when you're ugly, and you don't even have any human relatives. The comment is that the protagonist traveled through time and became a black dragon, which is really a drag on himself. If he had been reincarnated as the God of Magic, he would have taken off long ago It doesn't feel good, author. If this continues, who will be able to tell that the protagonist is the protagonist? Odin is almost becoming the protagonist.

My suggestion is that you don't suggest it. Let the author write it by himself. If you're interested, read it. If you're not interested, withdraw it. That's it. I'm done.

What do you say? I was somewhat interested in this book, but after reading the comments section, I thought this was abusing the mainstream?

Now when I fight Odin, I can't beat him. I know I can't beat him, but I still fight. Is this in line with the protagonist's cunning and cunning character?

Just vote twice to save face, don't be a monster again

The author has a showdown with Odin and starts a war with the gods. This is too early. I still feel that we need to develop a wave and expand our power. For example, creating powerful creatures, giving birth to powerful heirs, marrying powerful gods, absorbing monsters/monsters/gods as subordinates, cultivating an army (like the Hall of Valor, etc.), Exchanging interests with gods to gain allies, or creating a gate to the underworld so that gods cannot pass through and humans cannot return.

I hope to see updates to this book in the future.

I really want to have a showdown with Odin and start a war. At least one of the protagonists will be restored and strengthened. Second, we must have our own power. Divide into three parts and divide the God Clan. Four pull enough numbers to become powerful allies. Five Odin and Loki turned against each other. The Six Wolves and Hela are about to appear as fighting forces. There will be problems with Thor, the Seventh God of War. For example, he will be poisoned and become incompetent. For example, he will not participate in the war because he has different ideas from Odin. For example, he will be trapped in the underworld and cannot participate in the war. For example, Thor will fall. Etc.

And if you plan to go to war with the gods, the protagonist should make preparations in advance, 1 For example, make the underworld dangerous and full of traps, making it impossible to get in and out, and then introduce some of the gods into the underworld and imprison them to weaken the combat power of the gods. 2 For example, in the days to come, seduce some gods to swear oaths, like Wei 3 For example, create restraints and kill gods with exclusive weapons 4 For example, provoke gods, trigger jealousy, hatred and other emotions among gods, give them weapons, poison, seduce them with some true prophecies, and conspire to kill powerful gods

Is this because I remembered that there is another novel that I haven't finished yet and I came back?

Why do you feel the protagonist is so weak? ⊙ω⊙

The author's description is quite interesting, take a look first.

To borrow a phrase from tno, a rotting corpse that does not need to be buried cannot produce decent content even if it is climbed up.

The author, in addition to snakes, does the main character have other creatures created? For example, creatures that symbolize death, darkness, greed, and insidiousness, such as crows. Or Evil Monster 2 also has the protagonist's territory, what is Hades like, how is it controlled and developed, and is there any judgment on people's good and evil? Is there a Styx? Is it possible to imprison enemy gods? Is there a fruit tree (eating it can restore Yang) (eating it will stay in the underworld forever, and are there monsters/gods who can be subordinates to manage the underworld, such as guarding the gates, causing death, and catching the dead. Can the three protagonists create various plants containing various poisons (the gods will sleep forever if they eat one kind of plant, and they will become insane if they eat another). Eating poisonous plants will cause rage, fornication, physical weakness, etc. Can the four protagonists create it? To bring plagues, wars, and disasters to humans? Do the four original gods in the article have descendants? Do the six protagonists have priests? From what you wrote, can the protagonist regain control of humans, dwarves, and elves? What is the goal of the seven protagonists? Destroy the gods? Do you want to be the god king? Or do you look down on the order brought by the gods and bring justice to humans? Or do you want to strengthen your stake in the world? 8 If humans have a great impact on the protagonist, the gods, and the world, should we increase the area of the atrium and change it from Northern Europe to Europe? What is the relationship between the nine protagonists and the gods of Odin and Wei, the frost giants, the Vanir gods, and the so-called neutral gods? How do they view monsters/monsters, subordinates? Or should they be destroyed? Or do they not matter? Author, are the above questions foreshadowing? Or are there some issues that are not suitable for this article? If not, the author can pretend that he did not see it.

Even if the protagonist doesn't care about class, he can convey the spirit of resistance and teach resistance. In doing so, he can also put the protagonist as the villain. There is a saying that a great traitor can look like a loyal person, and a great loyalty can look like a traitor. For example, the main character 1 has an impure purpose. He just uses them to cause war and cause death in order to gain souls, and does not care about the results. For example, the second protagonist just puts on a hypocritical mask, which is fake, so as to attract the admiration of humans and devote themselves to the protagonist, so as to gain control over humans and keep them in captivity. For example, the three protagonists are just disturbing the gods, because the gods also have hierarchies, which prevents them from uniting. "Why can Odin be the king of gods, but I can't?" Wei Neng thinks this way, and other gods can also think this way. If there are constant ambitions among the gods, endless infighting, and rivers of blood, isn't this another kind of Ragnarok? For example, the 4th protagonist just treats the dead humans who fought bravely as cannon fodder. When the protagonist goes to war with the gods, they will be useful For example, the 5th protagonist just treats them as cattle and horses, squeezing them and working for themselves. The protagonist doesn't have to do anything, they will bring the soul over, which is much easier for the protagonist.

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