Three Wines and Seven Swords Is Very Tang

It is too deliberate, constantly suppressing the protagonist, who is capable but poor, and is always involved in the whirlpool one after another to act as a virgin, a cheap labor force driven by others.

The introduction is attractive. I withdraw the first five chapters and discuss the first small point. The author may want to create a Wen Xiaoer-style optimistic poor ranger, and also want to use the protagonist's need to make money to lead to the subsequent plot, but there is no need to deliberately suppress the reward the protagonist receives. The first chapter shows that the protagonist has the ability to be a master and kill the fish demon queen. The bounty can be spent on a meal at a famous restaurant in Chang'an, or you can be like the protagonist who later gave loose money to a beggar and said that he will get it back after all the money is spent, but you can't write about the poisonous point of not being able to get paid because of debts owed by the previous generation. You should be rewarded for your work. I don't like this the most if I work part-time (laughs)

Generally speaking, it is definitely a classical fairy tale with the Tang Dynasty as the background, but the fairy tale part will account for more than the history, so some historical facts will be changed for plot arrangement. For example, Wei Shuyu was not actually an active figure in the early years of Zhenguan, but in order to draw out Wei Zheng's line, I moved his timeline forward. Pei Min was born in the Pei family of Hedong, but I couldn't find any specific details about him, so I arranged the identity of Pei Shisan, also to make it easier for him to stand out in the subsequent plot... Including the core characters in the tentative three-volume story, the Dragon King of Jinghe, Lu Dongbin, and Li Bai. In order to maintain the integrity of the story, it is difficult to write it completely according to Journey to the West or historical facts. The author will more or less perform some artistic processing of his own, but it will generally conform to the image of them in the minds of readers, and the angle will not be too weird. I will definitely write about this kind of adaptation later. I hope readers can understand it. After all, this book is still a fairy tale in the final analysis. There are also some details, such as prices in various eras in the Tang Dynasty, the customs and customs of each of the 108 squares in Chang'an, and even the tributaries of the Weijing River, which cities and counties they flow through, and even the names between people, etc. The author will try his best to check the information so as not to affect the reading experience of the readers. However, the author is not a history major, and I am also a part-time party member, so readers are welcome to point out common sense errors and logical loopholes in the book. I will try my best to modify them, thank you🙇 Finally, I just want to say that there is only one person missing from the recommendation position this week. I fainted from crying...😭😭😭

It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away

I almost froze when I saw this name, it was indeed Tang!

That is to say, is there a possibility that the Tang Dynasty was in Nanzhanbu Continent and not in Dongsheng Shenzhou?

Readers, Tuesday's follow-up data is very important, that is, the number of people who have finished reading the latest chapter. I hope readers can finish reading the last chapter. I'll see if I can be recommended today. Thank you🙇

The poor Madonna protagonist suppressed by the author.

I have to laugh every time I see this title

There's nothing wrong with the title, but the Chinese character Tang really made me think it was the Tang character on the modern Internet. I didn't read the introduction and thought it was a funny Jianghu novel.

A very Tang Tang. I thought it was that Tang Dynasty, but I didn't expect it to be this Tang Dynasty 🙂

If I continue to write along this line, I might as well fight the black monkey, why are I still reading?

It's tasteless and tasteless. When I read the title, I thought it would surprise me like I did when I watched the bad Ke Qiyuan. It's a pity. It's obvious that the author suppresses the protagonist, the poor protagonist, the Madonna protagonist, and the protagonist of cheap labor.

At the beginning, when I was looking at buying rotten vegetable leaves for children, I didn't want to read this book. I accepted the fate of others and put aside the plot of helping others.

Is this written about time-travelers or indigenous people?

Despite all the cynicism about the author in the book review section, I still followed it all the way, but the second volume was really uncomfortable to read. The book review section said that the protagonist is the Virgin, I can understand the author's thoughts The book review section said that the protagonist was given a moneyless identity to advance the plot, I can laugh at him for not reading further The book review section said that the protagonist cannot be seen, I can understand the author's intention to start from the main character The group portrait is written from the perspective of a corner, and the protagonist is just an observer But the story in the second volume is really uncomfortable to watch. The plot is dragging, various Riddlers, and only half of each line is written. People don't know what the story is at all, and it makes people watch in a fog. My education is low, and I don't know how to express it. Anyway, I just feel inexplicably awkward.

The content is quite good, but the title is too ugly. I recommend changing it to another one. I felt uninterested after just one glance.

The wine went into the intestines, seven parts turned into moonlight, and another three parts roared into sword energy, and when he spat it out, he was half of the prosperous Tang Dynasty.

This novel gave me the feeling that the author had served a table of food, and I was ready to start eating. The author just stuffed all the dishes into my mouth, and the result was that I couldn't taste anything. He wanted to write a fairy tale with a particularly compact and market-like rhythm.

It feels like the release time is wrong, either in the middle of the first volume or in the middle of the second volume. I subscribed to the first few chapters of the second volume, but after reading it, I lost interest in reading it. I feel that the taste has changed.

When writing an article, if you want to be impartial, first write an outline, preset a reasonable ending, and let the protagonist achieve this ending through means that are acceptable to the reader. When you have no ideas, you can create one or two branches (copies), just like Journey to the West. The suffering on the journey to learn the scriptures, skipping one or two will not have much impact if you don't read it.

I feel good after reading it, but I don't know if I can finish it.

After being abandoned by me, he was really going to die. The author's writing is not strong enough, the excitement is not enough, the world view is a mess, and the plot of White Snake and Green Snake is poisonous.

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