Starting from the Disciples of Yingui

A certain aspect of the protagonist is the author's self-projection, and the newer the author, the more he will project it. Why do everyone say that the protagonist is not good? It's because the author really can't write it. He has never carefully observed what outstanding people in reality should look like and how to present them. He himself is very ordinary, how to write about them? People cannot write or imagine things they have not seen before.

There is no potential for popularity. To be honest, as a protagonist, you must have at least one shining point, either with strong talent, perseverance, or resourcefulness. But no one likes such a pure loser image. No wonder your books are basically not good. I suggest you read Pillow Blade when you have time to see how others portray the protagonist. I think everyone prefers protagonists who can show off their emotions without being surprised and who are decisive in killing.

It's okay to say that Kou Xu is talented, but the protagonist is too unbearable. It is said that the protagonist's spiritual talent is high, but where is the high talent? Those unique understandings? The protagonist must have something outstanding. Now the impression given is that he can't do anything, and he doesn't have any outstanding talent. The protagonist must be compared with the best in the world. It does not mean that he is invincible at the beginning, but at least he has this potential. At present, his character, resourcefulness, talent, and luck are not outstanding. How to digest the adventures and the relics of the Evil Emperor in the future? Long-term observation of the fluctuations of all things can produce secrets, and demon seeds must also be able to do it. What method should the protagonist use? Although it is still early, there are no possibilities for the protagonist.

In the latest chapter, I didn't understand what the protagonist was thinking. How do you know you can't practice it even if you haven't seen it? If you take a look at it, maybe one day you will have an idea and understand some of its principles? What are you writing about? If you write that the protagonist has read The Secret of Immortality, it might be used as foreshadowing in the future to understand some truth. To put it bluntly, the Secret of Immortality requires understanding and luck. Regardless of whether you can practice it or not, at least you will gain something. If you don't have both, then you are still trying to make money. You can't practice martial arts, and you can't create your own. What do you rely on? Do you rely on so-called nonsense? Don't say that the protagonist doesn't have talent in practicing qi, doesn't he have talent in spirit? The top martial arts of the Yellow series focus on spiritual talent. The four great wonder books are the same, and so are the other magical arts.

So whether the protagonist can become a Taoist demon? To be honest, it is very difficult without magical skills. It cannot be solved by the thinking of a time traveler or the like. Double Dragon has the aura of the protagonist, and magical adventures are constant. The protagonist now does not seem to have Ling Donglai's unique talent throughout the ages, but a miraculous understanding of martial arts. Therefore, it is not a big problem to give him magical skills. It does not mean that he is invincible, otherwise even if he creates his own, it will take a lot of accumulation.

The three golden chapters have been wasted on you. Knowing that this is the world of Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, but you are still a disciple of the Yin Kui Sect, the first thing you think about is not how to practice martial arts to improve your strength and survive? ! ? ? ! Actually going out for shopping? ? ? ?

After reading a few chapters, the author basically expressed his own opinions there, and it was still the classic ladybug comment.

I have written three books. All three are eunuchs. This author can be blacklisted.

He is not very good at martial arts and is still arrogant. He is really a qualified cannon fodder. Without twos and threes, how dare you go to Liangshan?

Double Dragon is not easy to write. It is full of group portraits and abstract. To be honest, I think Fan Yun Fan Yu is better than Datang, just looking at the logic and plot

Pang Ban's method of cuckoldry is just the usage of the sixth chapter of the Demon Seed Technique [Sixth Seed of Him]. Ordinary magic methods use tangible objects as the magic medium. Because Pang Ban's realm is too high, he can use invisible emotions as the magic medium, which is the method of "using people as matchmakers and emotions as inducements", commonly known as the cuckold method. The orthodox training method of Zhong Mo Jue is actually Longying's step-by-step method.

1. To be honest, real ordinary people should not survive more than three chapters. Is the protagonist dead? No, so where does the truth come from? Moreover, when we say that online articles can ignore history, common sense, and logic, where is the truth? Second, in the past, when writing martial arts fan fiction, it was really wild and unconstrained when Goldfinger was opened. Everything was available. The exercises in books by different authors were all routine operations. Anime, games, and film and television dramas were all child's play. Most of the abilities that have never been described in any other works are the majority. But now? You can look for all kinds of online articles, not just martial arts fans, but all online articles. Whether it is other cheats or systems, they are inseparable from other works. No one will imagine or use abilities that have never been described in any work. They are all so rigid and rigid in thinking, but they still have the nerve to ask for ideas?

After reading Chapter 5, I feel that the author has not understood the yellow martial arts. Your point of view is applicable in the world of gold martial arts. The person who stands at the top of the yellow martial arts is not an emperor khan, but a great master who can break the void. For example, the most famous Goguryeo in The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty. It was Fu Cailin, not the King of Goguryeo. The first Turkic warrior was Bixuan, not a khan. As for Zhongyuan Ning Daoqi, he was the number one master in the early stage. In Huang Yi's other Shattered Void, he changed his name to Xian. Chuanying single-handedly defeated 20,000 Mongolian troops and killed the Mongolian marshal.

Let me tell you the new readers who are coming in. The protagonist of this book is very rz. Please change the book.

The beauties in the world of Double Dragon of the Tang Dynasty are based on the Hong Kong comic version. Recommended women include Zhu Yuyan, Fan Qinghui, Bi Xiuxin, Dong Shuni, Fu Junma, Fu Junyu, Fu Junqiang, Yun Yuzhen, and Ren Mei Mei, Shang Xiuxun, Li Xiuning, Susu, Danmei, Wen Caiting, Lianrou, Bader, Meijisina, Huanwan, Shifeixuan, Shi Qingxuan, Shang Xiufang, Shanmu Shafang, Wei Zhenzhen, Dugu Feng, Queen Xiao, Zong Xianghua, Shen Luoyan, Rong Jiaojiao, Song Yuzhi, You Qiufeng, Dongming Princess Shan Wanjing, Dongming Madam Shan Meixian, Hong Funu, Hu Xiaoxian, Water Girl, Fire Girl, Xin Na Ya, Ling Long Jiao, Ji Qian, Yin Xiaoji, Fan Caiqi, Hua Lingzi, Chun Yuwei, Song Yuhua, Liu Jing, Qing Qing, Xi'er, Yunzhi, Xiao Yu (Yang Guang's favorite concubine), Zhu Gui'er (Yang Guang's beloved concubine) Favorite concubine), Xiao Huan, Yu Ling, Yanni Changzhen, Fu'er, Shang Qingya, Zheng Shuming, Bai Qing'er, eldest grandson Wugao, Li'an (Tuyuhun beauty. Fuqian's subordinate.), Huana (Tuyuhun beauty.) Female. A subordinate of Fu Qian), Jin Huanzhen, Jing Man, You Xing (a prostitute in Yangzhou Tianxiang Tower. Also known as Tianxiang Shuangyan.), Ouyang Qian (a female official in Shi'an County. One of the three slang handsome men. Nicknamed "Tiger Yihong" "Powder"), Mingkong (a disciple of Wuwan. Suspected to be Wu Zetian in later generations), the beautiful lady (a master of Northern Xinjiang, Yiwuren, Ma Ji's daughter, Funanda's lover), Concubine Yin De (the beloved concubine of Li Yuan), Sha Zhi'e (the fourth young lady of the Shafu. Chang Ke's wife.), Sha Zhijing (the fifth young lady of the Shafu.), Mei Ling (Mei Xun's sister and the concubine of Li Jiancheng), Sao Niangzi (the proprietress of the inn outside the Great Wall)

Later, Tao and demon can be combined into one. You can refer to the legendary Heavenly Demon Skill of the Emperor. 1. The Demon Sword controls gravity and uses chaotic gravitational field and powerful compression force to kill the enemy. In addition to a circle of blades on the edge of the Purple Gold Heavenly Demonic Knife Wheel, there is only a purple light spot floating in the center. During the rotation, light waves continued to expand outward from the small purple light spot, blessing the blade at the edge. Just like a rotating water glass, the water in the glass will be splashed out in all directions. In the process of the high-speed rotation of the Great Demonic Knife Wheel, there will also be powerful discrete forces, which will radiate outward from a point in the void at the center of the knife wheel. The faster it rotates, the stronger the discrete force will be. Therefore, although this sword wheel is a sword technique, it can provide extremely powerful defense. Principle: All energy movements in the world are caused by uneven distribution. If the energy distribution is completely uniform, then there will be no energy transfer, no movement, all life will stop and disappear, and this area will become completely dead. If the vast universe also has life and death, then "all energy is evenly distributed" is also considered to be one of the ways of death in the universe. 2. The demon is furious. The powerful artistic conception of the move of Demon's Fury is not just a simple shock, but is based on the core image of natural disasters and earthquakes. The large floor plates are actually always in motion, but this movement is extremely slow, so it is almost imperceptible to ordinary people's sense of time. But when the continental plates squeeze and collide with each other, over time it will cause the edges or interior of the plates to shift and crack. Huge energy will be released from these locations, causing huge disasters to the creatures on the surface. During the Spring and Autumn Period of China, there is a very simple and straightforward explanation in the ancient books compiled by the great sage Zuo Qiuming. "Guoyu·Zhouyu Part 1": "The Yang is suppressed and cannot come out, and the Yin is suppressed and cannot shine, so there is an earthquake." The demon is so angry that it seems to treat the enemy as a whole as a big floor. No matter how thick and stable the aura is on the surface, in fact, there must be errors and vibrations due to the internal flow of Yin and Yang. When the devil is furious, the most trivial mistake will turn into a huge shock, causing the enemy to shatter itself like the thick earth, and become irreparably torn apart. The development direction can refer to Whitebeard's Zhenzhen Fruit 3. The disintegration and reincarnation of demons to understand the true meaning of the world's energy cycle. Burn and release your own power in the most intense form, but no matter what you do with these powers, these powers will not really disappear, but will still be one with the practitioner and receive his orders. Therefore, every minute and every second, it is at the peak of extreme burning and never declines. The location of the heavenly demon's bliss is subdivided into meridians, seas of qi, and acupuncture points. According to the attributes of true qi, it is divided into hard and soft, clear and turbid, cold and hot, etc. The divisions of the physical body are even more complicated. Bones, muscles, blood vessels, heart, liver, spleen, lungs, kidneys and gastrointestinal tract, eyes, ears, mouth, nose, tongue, skin, the inside of the brain, etc. If you look closely, there are countless, indescribable. Under the seemingly single whole of "people", in fact, every thought, every action, and every day of life is the result of the mutual stimulation and connection of countless small parts inside. Human beings are born this way and are accustomed to it. In most cases, these small stimuli are not noticeable. The actual working principle of Ke Tianmo Bliss's move is that starting from the contact with the true energy, the true energy, body, and soul of the person who is attacked will become highly activated and extremely sensitive, so that every detail and every tiny stimulus of the internal operation of the true energy, body, and soul will be expanded thousands of times. Then all the amplified stimulations are superimposed on each other and twisted into pleasure. After such accumulation of layers, the excitement and bliss experienced by those who are recruited has simply reached an unimaginable level. All senses will become obsessed and crazy in an instant, losing control until all power is swallowed up. 'Looking at the replacement of life from the perspective of a demon, the weak eat the strong. The death of the weak is not sad, but is transformed into a part of the strong. The killing and plundering is interpreted as the inheritance and sublimation of life, so it has the meaning of bliss. ' You get pleasure from completing the act of reproduction, you get pleasure from eating and drinking enough, you get pleasure from living in a safer and more comfortable environment, you get pleasure from getting through difficulties... The source of all these pleasures is the continuation of life. In the world of "Legend of the Son of Heaven", most of the tricks are only for fighting. Only the trick of "Tianmo Bliss" symbolizes the way of the demon's life evolution. However, for those who have difficulty understanding the deep mysteries of Heavenly Demon Kung Fu, the power of Heavenly Demon Bliss in their hands may not be as powerful as any of the four eclipses of Heavenly Demon. The biggest function of Demonic Bliss is evolution, you can refer to Dragon Ball Saru The dual cultivation function of Demonic Bliss for men and women, when the fertilized egg is combined, it absorbs the power of the soul, which is equivalent to absorbing a complete soul

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Huang Yi, the successor of Yin Kui Man, also wrote a very awesome article about why he must have the Secret of Immortality. At that time, it seemed that no one could rival him except Ling Donglai.

You Zhiyin Wuji, I'm afraid you've cultivated a fake one! What is the concept of Zhiyin Wuji? It already belongs to the realm of heaven and human beings. It is invincible at the peak of brokenness! However, the protagonist in your novel cannot defeat four old monks who are at the peak of their masters! These four old monks can't defeat Shi Zhixuan, who is not mentally ill, even if they work together, which is equivalent to the combat power of a great master! As for the concept of a grand master facing heaven and humans, he is not an opponent at all. It can be said that they are not on the same level at all! Look inside the Shattered Void, the bloody hand Li Gong faced the supreme master Ling Donglai. He didn't even meet him, but he wrote all 72 moves of the Demon Hand behind his back! Inside Fuyu Fanyun, Lang Fanyun battled against two great masters, Shuiyue Dazong and Shan Yuru, and easily achieved one death and one injury! Even if the evil spirit Li Ruohai, who is at the peak of the Grand Master, is only one step away from entering the realm of heaven and man, he is no match for the magician Pang Ban! Look at the opponents you wrote, 4 old monks at the peak of their masters, an out-of-state pseudo-grandmaster Shi Zhixuan, an old peak master with less than two days of life, the Zhenyan monk, facing the protagonist of Zhiyin Wuji, shouldn't it be the ending where the protagonist kills indiscriminately, not to mention that there is a great master Song Que to help out, and the performance that should have been killed indiscriminately turned out to be so weak as you wrote!

The biggest problem with this book is that the protagonists get together with the two dragons at the beginning and study martial arts together. After this paragraph is removed, the plot will not be so confusing.

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Chapter 25: Persuading people to quit, another author who enjoys himself with God's perspective

How come after defeating the four major bandits, Zhu Yuyan's line is gone?