Strange Recovery, No One Can Dream of Becoming an Immortal

When I first started watching it, I felt like my brain had been polluted by evil spirits. It was so messy and messy. I felt like I was more capable of taking this bite and it was a little bit overwhelming. Most people are discouraged from the beginning.

It looks great. I was so frightened by the scene where corpses were planted in the ground that I really can't imagine the author's mental state at that time.

I finally found a good writer for this article. When will the protagonist learn Amaterasu? Please update it soon.

There is a problem with your book. The tone at the beginning is very good, but the more you write about pig's feet, the more it jumps out. The plot changes from a weird struggle to survive to a trip to an amusement park. You are just writing for your own enjoyment, and you are a group of people who have no regard for the reading experience of the readers. The plot could be slowed down and written in more detail with more details. Many of the creative points in the climax are just mentioned in one stroke without being expanded upon at all, leaving the reader unable to understand, the image not established, or the story left unfinished. The same goes for the characters. There are many interesting characters. They are described in detail and three-dimensional and fleshy. It feels like they are torn apart after just two strokes on a piece of white paper. Or the character has just stood up and the skeleton and flesh can be filled in and then cut off. For example, the brain-brained Lao Wang died and there was no longer a supporting role. It feels like your readership is coming for the dark blood era, not the light and happy second dimension.

Goldfinger is similar to Demon Slayer.

Do you want to write about parasitism and cultivating immortals? The biggest parasite is Cthulhu.

Do you want to write about a parasitic cultivator? Is the last parasite Cthulhu?

It's so chaotic, I really like this feeling that my brain is on fire.

Looks good, Brother Chicken is quite interesting.

The writing is a bit level. But somehow, I always look at my imagination and approach science to decipher various semi-immortals, which doesn't feel like a fairy tale.

The author is a master and this is definitely not the first book

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Brother, your writing style doesn't look like a novice! Which god's trumpet is it! ?

It feels like I'm watching Kataha Yoshimitsu, but it has a charm.

Foreign anchor Juniper/Death Note Ama/True Face I think it was written with reference to the second one

The writing is very interesting, and it is this chaotic style that is a bit picky among readers, and may not be popular. After reading the first few chapters, I always felt like I was seeing flowers in a fog. The clues can be connected, but the more I restore the truth, the more doubts I find, and I can't stop reading. Secondly, the weird atmosphere created by the article and the author's wonderful imagination also keep people awake at night. It's like a combination of Chinese-style Chinese Cthulhu and Liaozhai. It's very wonderful.

The author's mental state is a bit abnormal, and his writing is very confusing and confusing.

But it's less exciting 😰

It's pretty cool, but the main character has too few spells, just 2 moves, and I didn't even think about learning some new ones.

Does a newbie have this skill? Which god's trumpet is this?