Pirates' Undercover General

It's not bad, it flows smoothly, the writing is good, and the scenes with the heroine are not awkward either Goldfinger is not the kind that gives out three colors of domineering at the beginning The only thing that makes me feel poisonous is that the fruit is eaten inexplicably And it is a blood fruit, there is really no cool character

I originally wanted to read this book, but the lack of reviews scared me. Can someone like Shen Nong help me answer my questions? 🤓

So the protagonist is a white-eyed wolf.

Has anyone seen it? There are so few comments.

What are the uses of blood fruits? Has the protagonist developed any abilities?

To be honest, it would be better not to write a female protagonist. If you don't know how to do emotional scenes, just write less or not write them at all.

This is a package building. If you have any ideas, you can send me a_(:з∠)_ name + identity. If there is a setting, you can also add it.

Navy Ranks

Advantages: The writing is good, it is not a novice, the plot is reasonable, and the title is quite attractive. Disadvantage, I don't know why, but I feel bored just looking at it.

All I can say is that the plot description is pretty good (if you don't consider the timeline) Luffy is 4 years old, and Hawkeye and Moria have just become the Shichibukai. I won't go into details about this. After all, it's not clear. It's okay to be vague and give the protagonist room to play. But what the hell is Perona already having considerable combat power? 15 Years ago, Perona was 10 years old. Then Qing Pheasant is actually a major general? , Robin was 11 years old when Luffy was born, now Luffy is 4 years old, it has been 7 years since the O'Hara incident ended, let alone a lieutenant general, I don't have a problem with being a general.

The book is quite good, but it's a pity that the author has passed away and has stopped updating. I'm sweeping the grave\|/