I Am Cultivating the Golden Elixir Avenue in the Heavens

In summary, the author still has some ink, but it is just a lot of nonsense, and there is not so much in his heart. I see that I am not the only one who is absolutely sloppy in the reviews and talks too much. Can you design more exciting plots? At least a third of the chapter is blind. Everyone has an opinion

By the way, where did the Yuanying thing come from? Whether it is the List of Gods or Journey to the West, the gods in it cultivate the nine turns of the Golden Elixir, and then the three flowers gather together and the five qi return to the origin to achieve the Taoist Fruit. The concept of Yuanying does not exist at all. The only similar one that can be found is the spell of Yuan Shen leaving the body, but this spell is actually a way of using divine consciousness and has basically nothing to do with the golden elixir. Where did this new concept come from?

To be honest, the author's writing style is not enough. The latest pictures are all about Daluo Jinxian. How can they be so good? They even write about using money to buy medicine to treat the injuries. Isn't it a bit insulting to Daluo Jinxian? The pressure to suppress the battle is a bit illogical, right?

What's the point of recruiting a maid? It's so poisonous, I won't take it with me to the next world. After all, it's Youdao Quanzhen, but this is too out of character. They are either just random boys with enlightenment, or they are surrendered demons and ghosts who are sitting down to practice and accumulate merit. After all, they have been in seclusion for ten years, and they don't have any concentration at all 🤤. I specially rewarded 100 comments

I suspect that the protagonist has become a fake immortal

The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that I talk to myself and talk too much nonsense. It gives me a headache when I read it. I say goodbye...

Why is the value of speaking so high? No wonder no one comments. Also, it's time to change the world. You can tell the plot just by looking at the table of contents. No wonder no one subscribes.

The world of Journey to the West, which is the size of the solar system, may not even be as big as the sky. Emperor Xin wrote a poem to insult Nuwa, and the normal immortals slapped her to death. They didn't even dare to face luck and cause and effect. Cultivating a fart immortal is nothing more than sour Confucianism, and the imperial power is supreme in the bones. Real ascetics think of Zhang Jiao.

Real water, writing novels like poetry

The more I write, the worse it gets. From prehistoric times to Jianlai, it has become a chronicle, and the characters are gone.

After reading the lotus lantern part, it doesn't feel like I'm reading a novel, it feels like I'm watching the protagonist bragging about himself, a lot of psychological activities, and a lot of verbal chatter.

It has been writing for so long, but you, the author, have made no progress at all. Could you please stop talking to yourself and just write a single chapter?

Practice the inner elixir method and practice the golden elixir method!

What is written in volumes 8 and 9? You are a level 9 boss and it is so hard to go to the level 2-3 world. What are you trying to do? In WLK, it is like a level 80 Dafa brushing the Fury Flame. Shadowfang, how many arcane explosions are left in the whole process feels like an insult to people's intelligence.

Come on! The story is relatively simple. Is the World of the Divine Condor a novice village?

1 There will be complaints or inner monologues after every conversation, which makes me very uncomfortable when reading and listening to books. 2 After the beginning of "Baolian Lantern", there is no portrayal of a person who has become an immortal. The most basic spiritual consciousness and spiritual scanning coverage are not reflected. It is completely a high martial arts fighting scene. 3 Or is the whole sentence similar to that of Gao Wu Honghuang? When writing about the world of Uncle Jiu in the Republic of China, killing a vixen still requires action? With a flick of the finger, a sword energy appeared. I have to complain, you are already a quasi-sage, but you can't die within a hundred miles with just a little bit of mental pressure? Even if you use the golden elixir to turn around, it's not something that a little vixen can do, right? 4 It's too much to lower your intelligence and suppress your combat power. In fact, it's not necessary. You can't reflect the combat power of an immortal at all, including the combat power of Zhetian. You have just arrived in the world of Zhetian, even if you are injured and unable to use your strength, your spirit and soul are still Daluo Jinxian, right? The essence has not changed. Every time I travel through time, I have to ask around for information like an ordinary person, and I suddenly find out where I am in which world. I really can't stand it anymore, I'm addicted to it. I really haven't watched it as well as before it was put on the shelves. I let myself go as soon as it was put on the shelves. The dialogue is just one sentence, and a few narration lines are added after the dialogue.

What world will be after the sky is covered?

Alchemy and Youwei methods are relatively simple

There are too many inner monologues, right?