Lord of Immortality of All Heavens

At the beginning of "Shading the Sky", the protagonist turns into a licking dog, very thorough. . . . . . Can't stand it anymore

I think it would be better to use Lin Zhengying or Lin Fengjiao as the name of Uncle Nine. After all, most of the Uncle Nine movies have the last name Lin.

A reminder for future readers The author has a big heart and calls the Qi refined from the sun as Tao Qi (he took it himself). This shows that the author has the idea of ​​​​creating a new system. Although the protagonist in the book practices Taoist methods, he is following the path of demonic cultivation. The protagonist is selfish in his three views and will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. Therefore, this is a book about plundering and cultivating immortals. Just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

How come all the damn things can be related to merit, and merit is so worthless?

Discussing Tao with Partridge Whistle? ? ? How to rob a tomb? ? ? ?

I hope the author won't be too verbose in writing this book. The last book was just too verbose. In the last book, I only wrote one or two chapters of my inner description.

Jiang Ye, I really don't understand why one or two of them want to kill Haotian. The people I eat the day after tomorrow are people like Master. He doesn't care about ordinary people, he just rules. The practitioner is also eaten because the gambler mutilated him. After all, Haotian still follows the rules, and the master just does as he pleases. Which of the two is better to judge?

Where did Yang Shen say that Hong Xuanji was a time traveler? ? Does the author not read comments? It's not fun to book everything until now.

Duan Yu didn't like martial arts at all or even rejected martial arts in the early stage. It's impossible for him to want to learn martial arts from the protagonist. According to the author's style, Tianlong is about to end again.

What to write about Jiang Ye? I don't even understand Jiang Ye's realm and yet I dare to write about it. I'm speechless.

After reading dozens of pictures, I finally came up with one thought: Don't blame Shen Nong for his weak life. After reading it, I heard that the Taoist Patriarch has ascended to heaven! ! !

The writing is so long-winded, with a lot of psychological descriptions, and the paragraphs are so rubbish that it's so annoying to read.

What's the matter? Hong Xuanji is a time traveler? ? ? ? ? ?

Partridge Whistle is a nickname, and the person's surname is not Partridge. That Partridge brother in the first few chapters made me really uncomfortable😖

There was a problem with the level of cultivation in the previous book. I didn't want to read it after reading a few chapters. Moreover, the main character's IQ was not online and he had problems in dealing with people and things. He was self-righteous. To be happy, you can go and watch the projection of the heavens. Enlightenment starts from covering the sky, starting from perfection, long in the sky, the most powerful BOSD in the sky, etc. Everyone watches Zhutianliu to make up for the shortcomings of the original novel, film and television series. To be happy, the protagonist should kill Be decisive, the opportunity realm is logical and upgrades quickly, treat people and things normally, you are good to me, I am good to you, if you want to kill me, then eradicate it without leaving any future troubles. Don't be stupid and be nice to him just because he is the protagonist. You must have your own plan when dealing with the protagonist. People are selfish. When you get the opportunity in the original work reasonably, you can help the protagonist, but don't be reckless and put your own interests first. Zhutianliu novels are most afraid of confusing cultivation levels, unintentionally raising or lowering the cultivation realm of other novels, and causing damage to each realm.

Are you letting yourself go when you write this? , The beginning of White Snake doesn't match up with the previous chapter. He turned into a monk after traveling through time. Is this a different body? I feel sick just looking at it...

Inexplicable. I write whatever comes to my mind and I don't even know what I'm writing about.

In the first few chapters, he was knocked to the ground by poison and pretended to slap Luo Laowai in the face. With a glare, Luo Laowai bowed his head and bowed. Goodbye to you~

Damn it, the more I read it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. I blame labor and management for not reading the book review. Shennong is dead. The grass on the grave is already 30 battles high. I'm here to try the poison.

When I saw Hua Qiangu, I immediately persuaded her to quit. I wrote well in the first part, but did I change my mind when writing the second part?

It's really embarrassing. It's like a country bumpkin going to the city. Things from this lower world are also called good things. The worst thing you have in heaven cannot be compared to Zhetian. If it's the fairy world that Zhetian, let's talk about it separately.

The writing, how should I put it, sounds like a newbie, maybe the author is pretending to be young.

Anyone who has not reached "Mythical Daluo Tianxian" for one day is an ant, and he will always be an ant, unless he is like Lanbai Society

Leave a footprint, mainly because I have never seen anyone write about Sansheng Sanshi and Hua Qiangu. Come back then.

I like the time travel genre, hope you can keep up the good work

What the hell, writing about White Snake, I'm not interested in White Snake

Let me know when the protagonist comes out

Refining Qi Yin Shen Yang Shen Jin Dan Yuan Shen Human Immortal Earth Immortal Heavenly Immortal True Immortal Golden Immortal

No, isn't this a weird world at the beginning, and it's a cultivator. It's a bit weird that you keep jumping into the world of martial arts.

The author said all the things I was not satisfied with about this novel at the end. I hope you can read another book and not make the same mistakes as this one.