Reborn Xiaoao: I Want to Be a Leader

It's good and comfortable to watch. The main character is also well portrayed. I'll recommend it if I haven't come up with it♀ I'm awesome as a labor time traveler. I hope it gets better and better.

What the hell is the Turtle Hero? Hasn't he fallen into the reputation of Ziwei Sword Fairy😰

Look what this is. Don't be polite when it's time for the Poison Dragon to collide. Also, since we've written about the Japanese pirates, can we consider including Hattori Senjun and Sarutobi Hiruzen? These two are also very skilled in martial arts!

When I watch it, it's all about driving around various girls. As a girl, I really hate watching these. Isn't it good to write a good plot? From the initial shock to the gaudiness at the end, it's a pity the writing style. I feel like I'm putting the cart before the horse.

I don't know which god's vest it is. The level is in the top three at the starting point. It is really not easy to write a book that I already know about Xiaoao in such a colorful and fascinating way. Both the imagination and writing style are just right. The characters basically have their own characteristics. There are very few fools. The upgrade process of pig's feet is good. There is no one step to reach the sky. The same is true for martial arts. It is well-reasoned and well-founded. It rarely fluctuates. The writing is basically consistent with what I read. Like it.

Unexpectedly, after nearly a hundred chapters, it turned out to be surprisingly good. Although it is written about the background of Xiao Ao, the original male and female protagonists Linghu Chong and Ren Yingying of Xiao Ao do not have many roles. This is very good. There are many fan books about traveling through Linghu Chong and so on, which are particularly boring. Can you write the same protagonist better than Jin Yong again? On the contrary, the book describes a middle-level demon sect who is constantly promoted, coupled with his love-hate relationship with the eldest lady of Huashan, which is very attractive. In particular, the supporting characters of the Divine Cult that are not described in Swordsman are all flesh and blood. This book can be said to be the costume version of Du Lala's promotion, or the martial arts version of Romeo and Juliet. Even if you have not read Xiaoao, it will not affect your reading experience. I hope to maintain the style, and never let the protagonist easily obtain the Sunflower Secret Book, the Nine Swords of Loneliness, etc., Become invincible in an instant, and then become an ordinary and cool story, that would be boring.

The writing is surprisingly good and has a strong sense of immersion. If the next 400 chapters are also at this level. Then the next book can not be written about fan fiction, but directly open a book similar to "Swordsman in the Snow"

I have watched a lot, and I feel that the highlight is the meeting and separation with Yue Lingshan. The rest are a bit ordinary, with ordinary plot development, cliché adventure and loss of virginity, the protagonist's personality is not distinctive enough and is a bit popular, and several female characters appear too quickly and are not impressive. They are too like supporting characters and are dispensable, and other supporting characters are not good either. Overall, the writing is good, and the plot is ordinary and featureless. You can watch it or not. It feels like a martial arts test, with a lot of room for improvement. Make hay.

The front part is very good, but I saw several pictures of Lin Pingzhi's mother, a forty-year-old woman. Do you have any quirks as the author? You can't write enough. I was really disgusted by it. . .

You are so fucking drunk, why don't you write Tong San to death and keep being a disgusting person again and again? How about playing the novel routine from twenty years ago? It's really not refreshing enough.

Yesterday, January 16, this chapter of the Eastern Invincible finally came full circle, and they were very happy. This should be Lu Songxian's version of The Invincible. It is also the Invincible in my mind. It is the best in the world but it is disgusting and creepy. I don't know how you feel. Anyway, I have watched 4 or 5 different versions of The Invincible in the movie + TV series. Lu Songxian's version impressed me deeply. Very good 👍Two monthly passes

The part where the author wrote about the little junior sister was so amazing. I will die if I can't see the little junior sister again 😍

I'm very upset about why people who write about Xiaoao always write Lao Yue as a big Yin Bi, just because he hasn't become bad from the beginning? Sure enough, if you keep doing good things and do bad things, you'll be fine... Just like Zuo Lengchan at the beginning? ? ? ?

I would like to thank my book friends who support me. I have written millions of words of useless manuscripts before. For my last book, "Half a City of Fireworks", I only published 50,000 words on the platform, and I still have 20 words saved in my computer. Because the contract could not be signed, it was not issued. I just want to say this to say that I can even write 300,000 words in a single book, let alone this book, which has been signed. During this period, I have experienced the most difficult time in my life, but I still haven't stopped updating, and it will not be unfinished in the future. Specific questions about the content in the book. When choosing a genre, there was a martial arts fan, and there was a martial arts fantasy, and I chose martial arts fantasy. Because what I want is to frame the characters in the world of Swordsman and roughly follow the main line of time, but there will be many original plot lines and original characters. For example, a book friend came up and gave a bad review, saying that out of the 12 halls of the Demon Sect, there are only six halls, and there is no Yunshui Hall. What he said is right. But I think as a creator, I still have a little creative freedom, right? For other questions, you are welcome to correct me! I will adopt it as long as it does not affect my own plot line, thank you.

In martial arts, some write about upgrading, some write about emotions, many write about fighting for hegemony, and even more about magical skills, or cultivating immortals, etc., There are countless. But in the genre of martial arts, it is really rare to downplay both martial arts and martial arts, and write about machinations. Master Jin Yong wrote The Swordsman and The Deer and the Cauldron. Although he also focused on power and strategy, he did not deviate from the line of martial arts. The protagonist's route in this book is that it does not matter whether he is martial or not. He seems to work hard for power. Therefore, the story development caused by the protagonist's behavior deviates greatly from the readers' expectations of martial arts stories. This does not mean whether the story is well written, but it is difficult to fit the category of martial arts novels. In addition, at least in gold-type martial arts novels, tactics, maneuvers, and status are no match for the punches and palms of martial arts masters. In The Condor Goddess, martial arts masters can change the direction of the war, and in Tianlong, they can directly force Yelu Hongji. So it seems strange that the protagonist seeks power instead of martial arts. Finally, to put it bluntly, from the perspective of the structure of the Sun Moon Sect, the easiest way to fight for power is to cut yourself off, directly PK Yang Lianting, and become a servant of the leader. You can take charge of power simply and quickly. After you have established a relationship with the leader, you can also follow Sunflower. This is great.

When I read Chapter 160, the protagonist is still wandering in the Qi Sea Realm, and has not even entered the day after tomorrow. You give him a trick at the beginning, and when he reaches the Qi Sea realm, he uses the Beiming Divine Art. He has also absorbed a lot of acquired internal energy, and then his strength is still at the Qi Sea realm, so it is better not to use the Beiming Divine Art. There are a lot of contacts with major masters, but I have never been very strong. With the little increase of finger pull, I can only fight some unknown people or minions. Why do I dance so happily with this little strength? To be honest, I really can't see it. Either don't cheat, or don't make it so frustrating. With the protagonist's strength and progress, if you don't use this trick, can you reasonably bring him to this state? What is the use of this finger? Is it a foreshadowing for the later stage?

Suddenly I felt that this Oriental girl was the real Dongfang Invincible, and the fake one on the Blackwood Cliff should have practiced the Sunflower Book. The person who died at the hands of Ren Woxing in the play should be this fake one.

Otherwise, don't write about women. Since you have written it, you should eat it after giving so much pen and ink. As long as the plot is reasonable, it is fine. I am afraid that the protagonist will win the hearts of a lot of women, so I won't eat any of them. It is very torture to watch.

I have read almost 200 chapters, and I can only say that the author's writing style is very old-fashioned. The plot changes often jump around without any foreshadowing, which makes Monk Zhang Er confused and inexplicable. I don't know what the author is thinking, and the writing is inexplicable, as if someone forcefully stuffed shit into your mouth while you were enjoying the melon. It is so confusing that it makes people feel that the author never reads what he has written. Why do you have a sharp head and fight with each other. What's going on in the comment section? Don't you want to read it? Also, if the characterization is good, it's good; if it's bad, it's really bad. Convinced, I read a few more chapters, but if it still stays the same, I can only choose to abandon the book. Others may think it is well written, but I can only say that this style may not suit me. (Purely personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

The protagonist still has a sense of justice at the beginning, but it slowly changes later on, probably after he is promoted to deputy hall leader. After that, he only has the goal in his heart, and as long as the goal is achieved, no means matter. That Yang Fengming's mission is really inexplicable. Is it really necessary for this person to die? If it is really necessary to die, why don't you just kill his daughter along with him, but stay here instead? You are so kind and righteous, why don't you accept this mission? What's the point of taking over and not eradicating the roots? Benevolence and righteousness? Or is it hypocrisy? People can't help themselves in the world, but the protagonist has a choice. Obviously he has the martial arts to become stronger, and he won't do things he doesn't like to do. Is he afraid that he will not have the right to become an innate master? Just practice martial arts well. It's completely unnecessary to accept any blood missions. Will not accepting missions have a big impact on the protagonist? I don't think so? Moreover, it is a demon sect in the first place. How many of the missions of the demon sect do not go against the original intention?

What is the appeal of Yue Lingshan? The protagonist, a leader of the Sun Moon God Sect, went to Huashan in the middle of the night to look for her? Forcibly renewing the relationship?

So I prefer Dongfang Invincible

I am extremely confused about the fact that the main character is handsome in appearance, and even tends to be feminine, which means he is not gay, but he likes to describe the emotional part in details, and even has a tendency to like sadomasochism. It is too similar to female videos. Generally, male authors are not willing to spend time on emotions, mainly due to lack of imagination, so excluding gay guys, it is a female author

This protagonist made you feel very frustrated when you wrote it.

Not to sensationalize, but first of all, why did he become the leader? Because I am not a human being if I am allowed to do so! Even Xiang Tianwen couldn't bear to let my old behavior relapse. It wasn't much better back then. Dongfang Bubai defeated Ren Woxing without killing him, and it was not for torture But he didn't want to kill him. Ren Woxing was not his opponent, and the imprisonment in the water prison was the conclusion that his subordinates were afraid of. Dongfang Bubai felt that Ren Woxing could still compete with him. He had a kindness in the past, and killing him would be a pity, sad, and he couldn't bear it. So, Dongfang Bubai is a soft-hearted person. The Three Corpses Brain God Pill is an old tradition started by Ren Woxing, Dongfang Bubai has no control. Is it humorous for a group of people who use the Three Corpse Brain Pill to talk to Dongfang Bubai about the rules? Tong Baixiong may be one of the rare normal people... Dongfang Bubai initially wanted to fight for it, but finally realized that it would not work without killing these strange people Personal relationships and major issues were very troublesome, especially since Dongfang Bubai was not that kind of great man. The main theme is [Let's forget about it] At this time, Yang Lianting is no longer a simple villain, but a loyal minister who does not want Dongfang Bubai's family fortune to be ruined. Heimuya killed all of them, except for a few innocent ones. The three zombie brain pills controlled the subordinates. Although the famous sect was shameless, they had a bottom line! As for Dongfang Bubai, he really doesn't want to take care of it. Yang Lianting can just play if he likes. Dongfang Bubai also really doesn't want to kill anyone. If the game can't continue, he will take action. In the plot, except for Tong Baixiong, Dongfang Bubai has no pity for anyone else Because, the previous relationship was more or less incestuous, and he was too lazy to kill. Tong Baixiong was a pity, but he also had a hole in his head, so he killed him brutally. Dongfang Bubai really wants to retire to the mountains and forests, and I'm tired of it. Maybe Yang Lianting had some grandiose ideas, so Dongfang Invincible just let him play. The image of the demon sect itself is actually a group of people who share the same views and then go their own way and form a group. What he pursues is happiness. Dongfang Bubai does whatever he wants, not because he has no great ambitions, but because he is no longer free. They are a gang formed for the purpose of making a group of privileged masters comfortable. Tong Baixiong is the weird one who takes everyone's bragging seriously. What Dongfang Bubai likes is mutual interpersonal relationships, which are free and happy. What he values ​​​​is the relationship between friends. Instead of rights, instead of letting me do what I want, he becomes the leader and has no friends anymore. Even if we kill all the people who rely on their old age and sell their old age, it will be useless. We can't go back. This is the core reason why she doesn't kill. The reason why Dongfang Bubai makes people feel abnormal is precisely because he is in an extremely abstract environment and he is a political leader. If he does not abstract, the result will be abnormal. A group of abstract and chaotic strange people began to be abstract and normal because they were not abstract. It is really very humorous. Strictly speaking, Dongfang Bubai doesn't want to kill anyone. He even hopes that Ren Woxing will be like the original Big Brother, where everyone can practice martial arts, enjoy grudges, and live a free and easy life. But I can't go back. Dongfang Bubai himself is not very killing, and I even hope that Heimuya can be normal. The problem is that you can't go back, you can't do it. This group of people are gathered together because of abstraction, and the famous sects rely on profit. So, in the end, you found out that the famous factions are scheming for their own interests, and Heimuya talks about morality, merit, and kindness. At first glance, it seems that the Demonic Cult is more anthropomorphic than the righteous, but the details in the plot all tell you that the Demonic Cult is really abstract🙂

The author's writing style is very good, but there are some things that the plot is too disgusting. First, the hypocrite is too realistic, and Yue Buqun is a villain. The third problem is that the vivid writing is a good thing. In the end, it does not kill people and relieve their anger, making the readers uncomfortable. Second, the protagonist is neither a saint, nor evil, nor refined and self-interested. If the Holy Mother had saved Lin Zhennan and Lin Pingzhi, she wouldn't be as disgusting as Lin Pingzhi. If it was self-interest, he would have been killed directly, especially Lin Pingzhi. What are you keeping for? Save it to advance the plot, which is the author's biggest problem. Sometimes the protagonist doesn't take any action on people and things that can be solved in advance, which is too passive. Is it essentially that the author doesn't have a good grasp of the plot? We can only keep some people and leave some things unresolved to advance the plot.

A fake corpse? Is there any success in studying the body of Rama in seclusion?

Resurrection! Hahahahahaha good! At least this book needs to be finished! I really like this book

The writing is good and the plot is reasonable. It is one of the best in the martial arts category. However, some of the plots are a bit jarring, and the author's ability to read them all depends on the author's writing.

How can someone write so much about such a big thing? He's always making excuses.