The Elf Metropolis on the Abandoned Island

I have seen more than 50 pictures, please share your thoughts. As many people have mentioned, the issue of management rights. I think your island has been bought, and with so much official involvement, it feels like the protagonist has almost no autonomy. This includes setting up villages and appointing village chiefs to relocate the population. You must know that the village chief and party secretary are all administrative units. In other words, the protagonist has now entered the administrative system. Does the so-called island belong to him or the country? In addition, no matter what the author thinks, but in terms of performance, there is no greeting for thousands of people, and there is not even a discussion process. Judging from the performance, it is enough to show that the government does not take the protagonist, the so-called island owner, seriously at all. At that time, it will still be the appointment from the superior, or the internal selection of the village. You, the island owner, are no longer the village party secretary or the village chief. The land you bought is your own territory. No one will listen to you, no matter what you say. Therefore, the most important issue in private territory is sovereignty. What sovereignty you don't have now, and what sovereignty you don't want. This is not private, it can only mean that you rented a piece of land. The second issue is the rhythm. I feel that the rhythm is too fast. After arriving on the island, I did nothing. I just tidied up a few rooms and started to receive guests all the time. Including that after I got rich, I didn't seriously find a construction team or the like to develop and organize it properly

Check in, dear

Whose island is this? Who do you listen to for development? Currently, three-quarters of the content is about official endorsement? If you want to send someone to take care of it, just send someone to take care of it?

I have some thoughts to share with the author. Since it is called an elf metropolis, it should be dominated by elves, right? Now, what the author writes is not even close to Xiu. He has not explored any small island and has not actively looked for elves. What is the difference between what the author writes and a resort with a group of cats and dogs? Since it is an elf metropolis, the elves should also have personalities. You can give them away as you say? Putting the cart before the horse and writing about an elf-like device for so long, it is not all designed to meet human living conditions, and based on the protagonist's world background, isn't it just a waste of time? In the era when elves first appeared, if you have elves, you have everything. If your island is full of peaceful elves, do you need to find people to gain popularity? People have to queue up to come to your place to camp. All these bells and whistles are of no use at all and can only be regarded as a resort with primitive features.

Since it was said earlier that it is private property, why are there any streets? Natural village? Prepared by? So who is in charge in the end?

You really haven't made any progress at all. How many books have you written? Still the same

I didn't realize it was an elven metropolis, but it was full of people. There were also official intrusions about policies and plans. It was not leisurely at all, but a bit boring.

I don't understand why I started eating elves all of a sudden. It was fine before and I only ate the renewable parts of the elves. Then I started to breed the elves and sell them. I regretted ordering in bulk.

Is the author a civil servant? This kind of thinking is too rigid. Is it consistent with reality? There are many people who are worldly, and the rights transaction is not written down, but the dogmatic thinking is very regimented. When paired with the free and open theme of Pokémon, it seems very strange. Although the dark flow is too realistic, it does not destroy the theme of freedom and openness. You feel that it is not suitable to write about Pokémon. I suggest the author to write it anyway. That kind of urban theme, such as college students going to the countryside to become village chiefs, etc.

Downplay the official thing. It's annoying to death when you see those people pushing left and right to develop.

Come on for development🤭🤭

The author's design of some characters and the protagonist's personality is really unpleasant. Many of the characters are just arrogant, while the protagonist feels like a tool man. The protagonist lacks a strong side to many things and feels like a passer-by. Many plot settings are too blunt.

So who is in charge of this island now? It's best to explain directly

It's too realistic. The shortcomings are exactly the same as the previous one. Maybe the author sees them as advantages. It's hard to say. Maybe it has its own audience just like Darkness.

After reading the previous chapters, let me tell you two things that I personally find poisonous. First, the protagonist is afraid that his family will find out that he is no longer him. I am worried. I would like to ask, after time travel, has your blood relationship changed? Or is there something on the other side that can detect souls? Second, the island is too small, five kilometers long and ten kilometers wide. I would like to ask what can you do with such a small island?

The subject matter is good, but the writing skills are too poor, and the characterization is not very good. Many plots are very abrupt, and some are illogical.

Why didn't the author use his original account number? Even if he wanted to remain anonymous, your exposure was too obvious. It was both a flower room and a fairy forest. I knew who it was after reading two chapters.

The eldest young master goes wandering, which is a bit of a dissuasion🙃

To be honest, rather than the protagonist recruiting natives or something like that, I prefer you to rely on the system to recruit original characters to structure the development of the island, and the natives can just be treated as civilians to provide popularity.

Requirements: 1. The name should not be too popular, such as "xi" or "yun". There were too many elves in the previous book and it was a headache to read 2. Just 2 elves are enough first, no rare ones, preferably elves from Guandong and Chengdu. When the supporting characters appear and there is a plot, add a group to privately chat with me to add subsequent elves. 3. It's okay to have your own story, add some other professions, pay attention to logic, don't be too rigid, don't be too confusing, 4. Take control of your own character, don't be like the rich second generation or something, just something ordinary