The Grim Reaper Comes to America

Is this the level of a great god? What is this written about?

I feel like the author is really in bad shape now. I read Cao Thief ten years ago and was looking at starting a new book. However, I was a little disappointed after reading it. Although it is indeed understandable. After all, not only have I not written online literature for a long time, but I have also switched from historical classification to American dramas. It is understandable that the quality is not good enough But the shortcomings are also obvious. The first is the contemporary nature. The author's view of online novels still has many traces of ten years ago, which makes the character creation still feel like ten years ago. But it's not the "old-era flavor", but the "old-life flavor". For example, we would like the "retro decoration of the 1980s", but if we really put people into the "real scene of the 1980s", I guess not many people will like it. Because although it still has its previous advantages, the shortcomings that caused it to be eliminated have not been corrected. This also directly flattens the characters in this book. Although the story is linear, it feels fragmented, and the logic is not tight enough. Secondly, the plot background of the story is actually too big. Although there is not much focus now, the background of "Xianxia Classic" has been laid out through the first chapter. This is an advantage but also a disadvantage. The author's creative ambitions are too great. His original intention is good. He wants to write works like "Taoist Priests in Another World" or "Swordsmen in Tokyo", but as Feng Chaohuang said in "The End of the World", the character system and the world system must be closely related. According to Ma Yuan, the essence of the work "... In..." Is to seek connections between different things. However, with so many chapters, this book still does not clearly explain the relationship between Wu Zhu and the United States. Even what Wu Zhu is in this book is not fully explained. There are more than twenty chapters. , It's not clear what the story is about. Thirdly, the writing style has really declined. If you look at the previous works and compare them, you will find that the works are a lot watery, and I believe the author definitely doesn't want to be watery, so the conclusion can only be that the level has dropped. There are many similar shortcomings in detail, but in summary, I feel that the criticism from people around me is indeed not unfair. But the author really wants to come back and write a book. In my opinion, it should be because he wants to write a book and it is unlikely to be because of financial problems. Then I think he should take the opportunity to practice his writing and adapt to the new era. Don't care about grades for now. Just study while reading high-quality works in recent years. Think of it as rehabilitation training

After laying out so much background for the protagonist, he still ended up like a mentally retarded loudspeaker, revealing his secrets at will. He doesn't look like a magic stick who has experienced family extermination, living under someone else's roof, life and death crisis, etc.… Either he's just slapping himself in the face, or he's just trying to please himself, so he must be logical before and after!

Is this a great god? Chapter twenty-nine, up to this point, I still don't know what the author wants to write. When traveling from modern times to ancient times, the first thing a time traveler looks for is whether there are any mysteries, whether it is possible to learn them, and then other abilities. When traveling from ancient times to modern times, the normal thinking is to check the history, and they will definitely follow the historical context to the present, so it is impossible to be indifferent to the Japanese. As a person in the mysterious world, he will definitely be interested in some of the mysteries of Hua at that time. The protagonist's practice is to practice whenever he thinks of it, and most of the other time he spends his time messing around.

I read more than 20 chapters today and I can't stand it anymore. I thought it was a new author, but it turns out he is still a master. That's it?

If nothing else, just give it up based on the fact that the first person we met in Chapter 31 gave away the exercises for no reason. This is something that a great god can write.

After reading the book friend's comments, I realized that the author of this cat is a great god? ! That's it? A weird background setting was made for the protagonist's ability. The beginning was really off-putting...

It would be pointless to change the name. The surname Xiong is fine. What the hell is Chris?

The first chapter, the first page, was immediately withdrawn. In the end, it was Fusang who got divorced or Phoenix who cheated on her. Fusang goes with golden crow, phoenix goes with sycamore. This can all be wrong, and I have no hope in the future.

If you read the comments section, you will know that it may be a pirate. If this novel is not good, then 90% of the novels from the starting point are garbage.