Tokyo Strange Tales

Will the best of the year who was forced away by Mao Zhan personally make a breakthrough in the world? I have to reward it just for the observation of convenience and high-quality fun.

First of all, I would like to say that I read almost every book by the author next door. The author was disgusted by the sinking river, and some books were unsustainable and rushed to the end. I understand and support the author. To put it bluntly, I have no malice. It is just my complaint as an ordinary reader. I have no intention of abandoning the book, no similar threatening intention, and no intention of teaching the author to write a book. If someone wants to read it but not leave it, I also admit that you are right. This is just my complaint. This book has almost 100 chapters, and 40 or even 50 of them are already about petting cats. I don't deny the author's skill in description, nor do I mean that the slow pace makes it unreadable, but after all, this book is not about a single female protagonist, and the presence of other characters is almost zero now. The plot has stagnated here since chapter 50. When I open the update every day, the hero masturbates his cat. I don't hate this character, but I really can't stand it. The little witch's desire is high, and Yuetu gives her medicine to suppress it. I thought there was a foreshadowing here and I will move forward. I wrote more than ten chapters and then my desire was high again. I have also seen some book friends say that after all, it mainly describes love, but it is really overwhelming to interact with the same main character all the time. Even if the goal of this volume is to interact with the little witch to shape this person well and promote the relationship with the little witch, then it is not like every day will be a similar or even identical interaction process. After all, this book is in its early stages and is updated daily. Every day when I open the book, I see the interaction between the male protagonist and the little witch. All my patience, expectations and even my affection for the characters are worn away. I don't want the other characters to become just passers-by. There are too many homogeneous interactions. Let me give an analogy. You have a total of 50 episodes of a TV series. I can accept that 10 of them are about cats, but I can't accept that there are now 10 episodes. The first 5 intense episodes of the world unfold, the first glimpse of the world, the battle, the promotion, and the adaptation to reveal part of the truth, and then the next 5 and 6 episodes are about cats. After all, this is not a cat-related documentary series.

Who poached the best of the year for the Cat😰😰😰😰

The writing felt pretty good, but there was a bit too much description and little actual plot advancement, which made me tired. When I see the part where the protagonist is short of money and accepts a commission from a colleague, I feel that the logic is a bit untenable. If you are short of money, let the witch use the magic of turning rocks into gold or any other money-making magic to gain immediate wealth and freedom. Why do we have to go around in such a big circle?

Is the description a bit too much, and it feels too complicated. Some people in the comment area said that the author has always been like this, but I didn't feel this problem at all in the first book. Maybe it is the difference in interest and acceptance of fan fiction and original work? In addition, when will the first book be finished? I want to start it soon. I hope the author can test the waters here and the first book will do well.

The biggest problem with this book is that it has no theme. If a book wants to be outstanding, it must choose and clarify its theme. But it's not in this book. The plot is sparse, and I basically write whatever comes to mind. After a few shots, there is no plot advancement. If the theme is character creation. However, I see that the current impression of the heroine is thin and can be summarized very simply. So, what did you write? What was shaped? Who is your audience? Is it a self-pleasure work? Moreover, I thought the world view was very big, but now it has become thin. It has only one advantage, to put it harshly, and that is the writing style and gorgeous rhetoric. However, the writing style must serve the plot and theme. The writing is the icing on the cake, but here it becomes a help in times of need. I can say that this book essentially feels like the author used it to practice his writing. Do you really want to write well and get good grades?

It's too watery. I don't want to watch it any more.

Yes, it has gorgeous rhetorical descriptions, and its level far exceeds that of most authors. Liangcao

Laobei, promise me not to be elbowed by Shen He again, okay?

Look and cherish. The heroine is underage, so she is destined to not get any recommendations, she is more likely to be banned, and she may die at any time. Nothing else, nothing too poisonous.