Living on the Peninsula

What started as a great story—a sweet, one-woman romance about a girl and her child becoming a bond—turned into a messy affair where Yoona (the protagonist) sleeps with a minor actor. All the buildup about the child's weight and the importance of being a good father was rendered meaningless. The 30-year-old protagonist was written like an immature street urchin. It's a shame, given how original and imaginative the premise was.

An author who hasn't improved at all despite writing so many books—there's another author in the Korean entertainment novel scene named Reincarnation Jing. You two could truly be considered the hidden dragons and phoenixes of the Korean entertainment circle on Qidian. Every protagonist in his books is a chaebol's sycophant, while the male and female leads in your book are both mentally unstable, violent, foul-mouthed, low-quality idiots.

Well, the male lead's personality is hard to judge; it's quite fragmented.

Looking around, all I see is Bae Joo-hyun.

I'm telling you to quit, I'm leaving. Such a great premise, and the writing is awful. Such a perfect single-woman story, and you had to go and do all that messy stuff, plus the characters are just plain stupid. You wouldn't find anyone like that in real life. I'm leaving, what a waste of all the fans you built up with your previous books.

Modern Korean entertainment novels are filled with denigrating Koreans. I don't know what the point of writing them is. We're here to read novels, not to drink chicken soup for the soul. Cha Ji's Korean entertainment novels never write about these things. If you're going to write a novel, just write a novel. Why do you have to add all this unnecessary stuff?

It's really well written.

The author could read more Korean entertainment works; it seems you haven't made much progress.

Will you still write in the future, bro? You're not going to stop writing books, are you?