
Gotta Get Out of Prison
得脱樊笼
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 364k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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32Fans
85Chapters
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I just watched the beginning and saw the flaws. The main character plugs in and recharges directly with banknotes. Banknotes are essentially just paper. If they cannot be exchanged for gold and silver, they are not just pieces of paper. Moreover, different banks have different banknotes, which are just local handwritten papers. They are not even official money. This loophole is too big. This is just a top-up. , Will the silver money disappear automatically from the bank? How can the bank explain the disappearing silver money? The money is gone for no reason. If it doesn't disappear, just open a bank yourself and write the money. Anyway, you don't need real gold and silver. You should change it or fill in the loopholes later. Although the protagonist's cheat is unreasonable, don't be too outrageous. At least it is logical on the surface. And this loophole is not a one-time plot, the plug-in follows the protagonist throughout the whole story. With such a high frequency of occurrence, every time I see it, there will be a scene due to the loophole, which will affect the rhythm of the story.
Only a few sentences touch on the love relationship between men and women. There is not much fighting and fighting. It seems that the protagonist is scheming. In fact, the whole story is scheming. It is very frustrating to read.
I was writing so well before and suddenly the system came up and slipped away.
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You have received 100,000 starting coins from Adolfsky. Come and thank him for his works!
Today, we are freed from the prison and can return to nature
The first few chapters are okay, but it's really hard to leave the disciples behind and abandon them.
The road is long and long, and I will search for it from top to bottom. Let's work hard and encourage each other!
Half-baked. It seems to be read but not read. Look at the classical Chinese translation
After reading the comments, they were basically negative, so they slipped away.
Joy follows the rules, can turn things upside down, and can also shake things up
Did the plot move so quickly? Just in the room, the next sentence is chatting at someone else's house. The more I read, the more I can't understand it.
I actually collected it after reading the first few paragraphs of the first chapter. Why should I add a panel? It's a pity
Not like Xianxia, like Qiong Yao, but the writing is worse than Qiong Yao
There are indeed a lot of flaws in the front, but looking back it's still pretty good.
Collected
The road is long and far away, I will search up and down, work hard and encourage each other 😁