This Wizard Just Wants to Take Students

Could the author take a look at what he wrote after it was published?

It is known that the protagonist has about 100 magic stones The third-level qualified slave worth 30 magic stones is loyal and reliable, and may have some basic mysterious knowledge The third-level new blood worth 20 magic stones has an unknown heart and may not be bound The protagonist chooses to find a new blood It is known that the protagonist escaped from an official wizard. Although he was seriously injured, he may have mastered advanced skills. It is most likely that he bought an apprentice to survive [healing experiment or body swap experiment] Other wizards choose to come over to snatch the apprentice. Are you not afraid of a trapped beast fighting to the death? For the sake of the entire female apprentice, the author, you are really playing tricks 👍

At the beginning... The protagonist doesn't go on a killing spree, so it's a bit hard to convince the audience.

🤭Does the author want to create a moderate force, or is it like the wizards in Harry Potter? I think it's pretty good.

The subject matter is attractive, but 30 for 5 is a bit disgusting. More than 30 for five, his teacher was beaten to death and he managed to survive. What level should he be? Shouldn't the idea of ​​a normal person at the same level be to first consider whether he will be replaced by him? It turns out that the supporting character here is equally powerful as the protagonist, and he can bully the protagonist. The protagonist is also wise. He knows that he can survive, but others don't. Directly telling the supporting character who wants to forcefully buy him that he has a few days to live and that he will take him away before he dies. How dare the supporting character do this? Especially since the author also wrote supporting characters in it, he was afraid that the protagonist would have a backhand. Oh my god, it's even more outrageous. Even the solitary wild dog on the grassland knows that the injured cheetah keeps getting angry and can't lean on it. A person who is labeled as rational and knowledgeable doesn't know? The trapped beast is still fighting, what a wise protagonist and wise supporting character. It's a bit overwhelming. You can barely explain what you wrote about samurai warriors and the like. How can you explain wizards? The anchor point for readers at the beginning is that wizards are basically knowledge. The result is that knowledge alone does not lead to brain development?

The first part was pretty good, but then when I got into the dream chapter, I felt like the author had changed. There was a big difference. The main plot was probably about getting stronger at teaching. I really couldn't stand this long dream chapter. Kick me at the end of the Troublesome Dream Chapter, thank you.

If you can still keep reading after seeing the situation in Chapter 144, I would like to call you the Ancient God Nurgle.

The first chapter is just feeding💩? He was injured by hostile forces and his family dared not save him? They are also afraid of offending hostile forces. That's awesome, even intellectual essays wouldn't dare to write like that.

The early stage was very good, but after reaching the level 1 wizard, the author started to downplay the system for some reason, and I felt that the author started to let himself go, and had no idea what he was writing. I was reading for the system, and the author downplaying the system made me feel uncomfortable, as if I had been cheated. If the writing was good, it would be acceptable, but the chapters in the dreamland were really wearing down my patience. What is the point of entering the dreamland? It just happened to be stinky, long, and the story line was messy.

What I like most about wizarding literature is the study of magic and essential understanding. You are nothing.

It's ridiculous that a third-level wizard apprentice has only 10% of his strength without his witchcraft It's more reasonable to say that he is seriously injured and has not recovered.

What students do you teach? We should follow the family line. If the family bond is not strong, what is master and apprentice? In the later stage, I switched to the wizard empire route. Should the outstanding female wizard Xiaobaicai who has been cultivated through hard work be given to other men? Male students should go to the Red Flower Double Stick to train, develop, and become a professional corps.

The male protagonist must be a female student. She spends a lot of magic stones, has no mentor, is bullied by other mentors, and is bullied by apprentices of the same level. She is a loser, and anyone can step on her? The author made this up and said in this chapter that a lot of people are dissatisfied. Shennong died of poisoning

I think it's quite good-looking, and I'm not talking about getting a wife. The protagonists are relatively serious at the moment. The author's writing is good, and the golden finger is also very good. The overall feeling is better than most novels. I don't know that readers are so picky. Go and take a look at the rankings. Those rubbish can be ranked high. You should take good care of them. There are a lot of them.

I read this book for the first time and read the first chapter. I quit. The protagonist was eroded by energy, and the academy didn't care at all. After death, he was thrown out like a dead dog. I couldn't understand it at all. How could someone who spent resources to train someone be able to stand alone and give up completely? There are also people who say they are afraid of retaliation and dare not save the protagonist. I don't understand it. They don't dare to do this. Why is there any need for this academy to exist? Is it a piece of shit? Are you allowed to be flattened and rounded by others?

From being amazed at the beginning to being disappointed now 😐, I have to say that it's really uncomfortable. The subject matter is perfect, the start is OK, and the protagonist's character is okay. The point that makes me uncomfortable is the education of the apprentices 👍 The matryoshka-like card skills are okay, but can you put it another way? It's barely reasonable for you to say that you can improve it as soon as your apprentice learns a witchcraft, but isn't it a bit unreasonable for your apprentice to learn a talent skill that is not popular and you can immediately use it in front of your apprentice and make it stronger? (Don't forget that you were just an apprentice at the time) You can ask your apprentice to tell you how to use this witchcraft, and then hand it over to your apprentice after a period of time and say that it has been improved during this period, isn't it better? It will also make your apprentice feel that you have worked hard during this period of time for him (there is really no need to be so anxious to show off) Also, I think "Karin"'s growth performance is really a failure. Fortunately at the beginning, she went from being uneasy when she first entered the academy, to being timid when she first met her teacher, and then after knowing the teacher's ambition, Good! So far, there is no problem. The problem is with the bloodline at the back. After seeing this, I laughed. What a ridiculous plot 😅 The protagonist's conscientious education in the past feels like shit, no matter how hard he works, no matter how little wizard is the champion, he is a scum in front of the blood, no matter how he transforms from an introverted little girl into a proud and sinister white-haired non-human cub 😅😅 (I have already indicated the minimum step I can get to in the future) In comparison, I feel that Gagarin is more suitable for the profession of students, (that rice bucket... Forget it, I am speechless) The author gives me the feeling that he is more biased towards girls, I don't know if he is right, I hope it is my illusion, and I also hope that the "Karin" or the two twins who don't know what they are doing now will not be too outrageous, at least not too strong in character.

The author aroused my interest with the subject matter, and knocked me to the ground with his strength. The first few chapters were like a big showdown, slamming it in my face. I'm still feeling dizzy now.

Personally, I feel that it is outrageous to conduct referendum executions in the wizarding world, or to execute wizards by apprentices. This is a world where great power belongs to oneself, and the protagonist is not invincible to dominate the world. If you do this, emmm, and there is more than one school of power, basically all the first-level wizards will run away. Everything is not as important as your own life. What will you do then? Anyway, I feel very uncomfortable. I jumped directly from slavery to utopia emmmm.

This dream copy is indeed a bit boring. The focus of this novel is the apprentice. The apprentice creates a copy, and the protagonist determines the overall situation. According to the previous story, the plot should be about cultivating students, changing the old situation of the powerful black wizards, and then competing with other wizard towers to highlight the changed advantages. The results go directly to the protagonist's personal participation in the copy...

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There's something special about the author's avatar. It actually has two forms: 🐶 and 🐔 at the same time. It's really amazing.

To be honest, I have been teaching. The development of the academy is quite interesting. If you don't want to do all the mess, you can keep developing. Then you can write about the academy war. Then according to your plot, you can write about the academy splitting and developing towards white wizard and black wizard. Then you can write about plane war. Many things you can write about have to change the map. To be honest, I was really looking forward to it, because I didn't seem to see the wizard farming and cultivating stream before.

Indeed, it was fine at first, but the plot becomes boring when he becomes a wizard.

If you raise books and raise them, you will die 🙂

I read three chapters and was put off by the comments. Whether the novel is good or not is another matter, but the one-sided criticism in this review is really disgusting.

It's really good, but it's not interesting anymore after that. Most people have left, so I rush to the street.

{"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"The Collection of Masterpieces"}It had a chance to become a masterpiece 😟

So this is the disadvantage of new authors writing books, they disappear inexplicably.

Why does it have to end? You are such a loser. It is better to have a bad ending than to have it cut off.

I don't understand what you're doing. There's so much water here and it's so laborious to look at. It's going to be unfinished. Just give it a whimper. Don't be so pretentious that people won't understand.