
Imperial War: Beginning Infinite Rebels Template
帝王战争:开局无限逆贼模版
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- Completed
- Length
- 129k Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Virtual MMORPG
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Rebellion does not allow people to become emperors, so are you going to take the republican route?
Maybe I'm too picky. As a game novel, it's pretty good. But as a dynasty-type game novel, I didn't see the shining point of the protagonist. To be precise, the protagonist's portrayal lacked personality charm, giving people a feeling that I can do anything. Regardless of history, Every founding emperor has his own charisma, and even some of the rebel kings who failed in the struggle for the dragon have people with charisma. Whether it is domineering, heroic, perseverance, loyalty, etc., No matter what kind of traits he can attract his subordinates to move forward with him, especially In addition, the NPCs in your article all have their own thoughts, so there must be betrayal. You have no personality charm and no means to control your subordinates. How do you control these heroes who have left their names in history? You must know that many famous ministers and heroes are not motivated by profit, but by ambition. In other words, emotional value, so I hope to see the protagonist have more personality and charm, instead of being like an ordinary ordinary person who relies on luck, the halo of the protagonist, and the history that only he knows to dominate the world. Especially history, he will only let you know the origins of famous officials and generals in allusions, and increase your experience and knowledge.
I don't agree with him if he's not called Xia, Shang and Zhou 😎
Thanks for everyone's suggestions
This is the first book of a new author. There are really many things that I have not taken into consideration. The writing is not strong enough. It is my fault that I was a little uncomfortable with the previous writing. I have also completed the revision of some suggestions that I think are indeed correct. I am mainly just for advice. Thank you again.
In the lord story, the important thing is to command and develop subordinates, and to build the territory. When fighting, it is the protagonist who fights. This is the game "The Legend of Dragon Aotian from Another World", right?
I guess I don't even have an outline, so I don't know how to write it. 🙂It's so uncomfortable. It's okay to encounter this kind of book. It's not on the shelves anyway.
It's time to part ways, brothers, there hasn't been an update for 6 days, I guess it's been cut, but luckily it's not on the shelves.