A Martial Arts Tale: The Misty Guest of Mount Hua

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Isn't Hunyuan Gong a palm technique from the outside in?

The settings are okay. The human body is a whole. Internal energy and vital energy should be the same as physical strength. People will always have it until they die. How can it be like battery power?

There is a reason why this book is not popular. Everything is taken for granted. Just like a naughty boy who knows that 1+1=2, he thinks that he knows all the knowledge and is smarter than everyone else. Everything can be applied using 1+1!

After reading it, most of the content can be said to be wonderful. The author has his own ideas and understanding of the setting, which is not bad. However, the writing of some plots is really inferior, and there are also retro-style narratives interspersed in it. The plot is introduced from a third perspective. This habit is really not good. I don't say it is outdated or outdated. Anyway, it doesn't match the content of your book. If you just use it to enrich the plot, then just pretend I didn't say anything. . In short, the book is okay, but there are many things that can be criticized. If you are not afraid that the author will be unhappy, you can go and read the sword out of Hengshan next door to check for any omissions.

Yan Xiake, I thought I was writing about the misty world, but I didn't know that your realistic version, the various principles of practicing martial arts, greatly reduced the sense of satisfaction. You only took Jin Yong's reasonable view of reality, and there is no romance at all.

The character design of Pig's Knuckle is determined by planning, but the matter of brushing it is inexplicable 1, what are the benefits? What's the motive? 2. If I practice martial arts with high strength, can I guarantee that I can beat pig's feet? What about stability? 3. If I don't bring a helper, I can go and defeat Youxiang Wentian and Renwoxing who may have help from other demon sect elders. Where is my brain? There is no benefit, the risk is very high, and there is no preparation for the risk, why do you act like this?

I feel like this protagonist is too awesome compared to Yue Buqun. He keeps creating his own exercises casually and everything goes smoothly.

During the Tianlong Period, Jiumozhi directly entered the Dali Kingdom to steal the royal things. The Xixia Princess Li Qiushui who was chased by the Tianshan Boy Lao went into hiding. During the Condor Trilogy period, the Four Jue entered the palace and went home, and even ignored the powerful prince of the Jin Kingdom. During the Divine Condor Period, Yang Guo killed the prime minister, the Mongol Khan, and Guo Jing blocked the main Mongolian army for decades, which fully demonstrated the master's ability to destroy the enemy's country.

Why do I think the protagonist's martial arts is very powerful in the description, but he's not that strong in fighting?😥