Help, I Really Didn't Know They Were All Real

How come there is only the protagonist when encountering difficulties or crises. Then when the collective is in trouble, the protagonist will have to work hard to get in without any money You have to have the army show up to support the protagonist when he is forcibly adopted. When you want to write about two sisters who are bewitched, the staff and the whole family still live up to their mission If you are not aware of this problem, it is not recommended to write about a large group.

This kind of thing is too abstract. The simulated heroine is actually just a physical phenomenon. At least add some biological phenomena.

I like this setting, but it's a bit abstract

The simulation is too long, and this is not considered a rescue in despair. The protagonist appears as the rescuer when he starts to despair for mankind. It does not feel sad. I suggest the author to watch works of the same type (desperate again after desperate rescue, and the yandere feeling of seeing the male protagonist again). If you feel a chill in your heart, it is called sad. The first simulation is smelly and long (personally) I don't think it's necessary to write so much about the male protagonist's family background in the simulation. It feels very superficial. You can have a general background, or be an orphan, and shape the growth process. The first simulation really dazzled me, the setting was too complicated, and the world background is too). Of course, the author still needs to slowly improve the new book, come on 👍

If you can write so much in one simulation, you might as well just turn the simulation into a novel. 😒

It's really strange, why don't we directly rule the world if we have technology? Looking at all the subsequent crises, almost all of them were caused by human beings seeking death. If they had ruled the world from the beginning, there would not have been so much trouble in fighting for their lives.

I came here to introduce poison, and introduce it to raise the boss, right?

You told me that the new book has been around for a while, why is it so short?

I clicked on it when I saw the introduction and thought it was a romance novel. But just after reading a few pictures, you told me that it was science fiction and had no romance elements at all. Isn't this pure selling of dog meat? Click here to watch a love story, please help me make this happen

I bet this cw turns around.

After the first copy, the quality plummeted. What kind of stuff was written in reality?

Writing a novel is contrary to nature, and dying on the road is normal

Not cruel enough or too soft. You can go and see the same type of knife, how powerful it is.

I suggest the author to read Reincarnation Simulation: I Can Change My Life Against the Heavens. Although it is a bit unfinished, overall it is definitely above the standard. Or go see Lord of the Stars and learn.