Start Martial Arts and Become a God from Under One Person

Aboriginal fan, your setting excludes most readers from the beginning.

Author, the description of Feng Baobao in your book is somewhat different from the original work. It looks very fragmented. For example, Feng Baobao's emotions and his inability to recognize the protagonist. In the original work, Ma Xianhong changed his appearance and Feng Baobao could be recognized by Qi.

The reader has read the original text and feels like a fool when reading about the indigenous people. Since he is an indigenous person, he should be original! The author is good at screening readers

Feng Baobao's character is not established. No dialect

Get some martial arts from other worlds, not all from The Adventures of Lolo. Otherwise, you can change the golden finger and stipulate that you can only get the martial arts from The Adventures of Loluo.

Novice, there are many poisonous points, you still need to practice more, just watch it without thinking

Author, did you update it after one o'clock in the morning? Basically, the old man brings the newcomers (Chu Zihang, Chen Motong) out to do the task. How come the new chapter is gone when I turn around? 🤭🤭🤭

It's really awkward to watch. Firstly, I feel that the unique skills in Lolo's Adventures are written too poorly. Secondly, the main character is written too stupidly and doesn't look like a time traveler.

Actually, I don't understand. The author obviously said that it was his first time writing a book, so why do so many people have so many requests? Not very understanding. And there are many places where it seems that the writing is not very good, but after so many years of reading, this book is still at a normal level. Although it is not great, it is not too bad. I feel like everyone's expectations are a bit high. 😰

Are you serious about writing the adventures of Lolo in one person? Even if you find the tricks in the novel about cultivating immortals, it will be better than the adventures of Luoluo.

What kind of bullshit are you talking about? It feels like you are writing about aborigines, not time-travelers at all.

There was a typo at the beginning of the introduction. It was "all over the sky and all over the earth" rather than "all over the world". My impression of this novel was immediately shaken up. I personally have a bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder and find it hard to tolerate typos. The introduction was not written carefully, and my expectations for the content of the novel were lowered.