Death Rewind in a World of the Strange

The first 30+ chapters were really well-written. But those two scenes of the boy going home and talking to his parents were just ridiculous. Why did you have to create so many complicated settings? It's all just joking around and chatting. The plot barely moves. It's like padding the word count. Even if you're not an orphan in Qidian's orphanage, don't create so much unnecessary complexity.

He's doing weird stuff and picking up girls, it's pretty cool.

Hi everyone, I've been reading all your comments. Many people say that Su Meier's storyline is too long. Actually, Su Meier is related to a major plot later on, and I just wanted to lay the groundwork for it. As a newcomer, I may not have had a good grasp of the pacing, and the writing is a bit slow. Let's wrap up Su Meier's story for now, and we'll write about the later plot.

I usually just remove books I can't stand without saying much, but this one is truly a shame. The first twenty chapters were quite interesting; anyone who stayed after reading the first few chapters is an absolute genius. If you don't know how to develop a story, couldn't you at least refer to other books? Why use those outdated, cheesy, face-slapping tropes from ten or twenty years ago?

The plot is quite humorous, but the details and writing style are a bit too simplistic and childish. It feels a bit far-fetched. Overall, it's watchable, but not worth scrutinizing.

It's alright; it's watchable, but not as good as the reviews say.

Dear author, I feel your character dialogue is a bit immature, especially when I was listening to the audiobook. I suggest you write less about people and more about the supernatural, since many people have criticized the portrayal of people in the mystery revival.

What kind of crap did you write in the last few chapters after chapter 20? Are you trying to be retro?

It could have been written very well. He concentrated his thoughts on writing bizarre words. Too many stitches I don't even know what I'm writing anymore. Let's rewrite it and delete all the parts that aren't weird.

It's quite good; I finished it in no time. Keep up the good work, author!