My Wife Is Not Very Calm

Standard female channel writing. The male protagonist looks like a dog in the first few pictures, being walked around on a leash. The male protagonist has a background and is somewhat capable. The author's writing style doesn't look like a novice. I guess he came from a female channel or someone who writes about female channels from an external website. This plot looks really good on a male channel.

🌿God and🌂🧊's stories are better than yours

Which old demon is this? Tell me your name quickly.

Damn, damn, it's so good. I don't know who the master is. That feeling of freedom is really good.

Is this how Chapter 3 describes the heroine? Do you think you will make me feel that your writing is great and praise you? No, no, I will only think that this heroine is a slut or a bus, wearing a bellyband to meet people

It's so powdery, not to mention the protagonist, an adult time traveler, how can he change into a young man with a sour taste? Besides, the situation in the court is chaotic, and the emperor is walking on thin ice. A pair of sisters with different surnames are kings, and they have powerful soldiers. How can they have the leisure to play with a son-in-law every day? Will you die if you have too much fun?

I always feel unhappy, and the protagonist always feels depressed. There's always someone riding on the protagonist's head ()

The beginning of having a son-in-law is not new anymore. What kind of husband is there who has not yet married? The wife sings the lyrics of her husband following her daughter👊

I know how to describe beauties hahahaha 😍😍😍

This book has a lot of problems. The writing is okay, but what about the emotional drama? The heroines are written too openly, right? They just met and they don't mind the protagonist going to bed together? Don't blame some people for thinking that the heroine is a slut. King Jin and the protagonist have only known each other for a few days, and they are almost at the last step, which is outrageous 😅

You have found so many little wives, how can your wife be calm? 🤣🤣You and your wife treat each other like guests, and everyone else will kiss you under the covers😏

I have no idea what I'm writing about, it's just that there are some nc twists at the end, and the protagonist's personality is also unlikable. .

I advise you not to come in, or you may make yourself sick.

Now that I've seen the plot, I just want the eldest princess to die with her mother, and not to take anything else into the harem.

After reading Chapter 20, the princess was too unlikable at first, but her character changed drastically later on. Also, I think the author's writing style is good, but the plot arrangement is not good, and it seems that the front part is very weak.

I have just read about ten chapters, and I feel that in this context, the Jianghu power is so small The direct disciple of the top power in the Jianghu was casually threatened by a second lady with a different surname: Wang The eldest daughter of the direct descendant of Yaowang Valley worked as a maid, and she was casual Being bullied, there are no consequences at all, and the training is like a dog You can't understand it, Yaowanggu is not weak when he hears the name, and he has a lot of friendship with all the people in the world, and he actually let his own daughter work as a maid

The story line is too messy, the writing is good, keep the pace a little smoother, there is no need to draw such a big picture at the beginning, just go step by step

After reading more than a dozen chapters, apart from the writing, there is nothing that attracts me. I guess the main plot is the Jin Palace, because I have no idea what the first dozen chapters want to express. The sister-in-law's temptation has too many unnecessary dialogues. It talks about a lot of nonsense that can be covered in one or two chapters. It is not possible to express the character in just a few chapters, and the protagonist is a little bit uncomfortable? I can't see any of his own thoughts, he is just a tool to serve the plot. Summary: The plot is too protracted, the protagonist has no characteristics of his own, and the harem of soft rice belongs to the characteristics of this book, not the protagonist.

The male protagonist is written to be weak and weak, while the female supporting character is written to be extremely strong (not all). The male protagonist is sometimes manipulated by the female supporting character (the classic scheming princess), and then acts coquettishly in front of another female supporting character (the classic young naughty wife). More importantly, after watching it for a long time, I don't know what he is writing.

This, after reading 10 chapters, I can't understand what the author is writing. I'm trying to persuade you to quit.

What's going on? ? What's going on? ? They say it's very poisonous, why do I watch it with gusto? ? ? Could it be that I am sick? ? ?

No updates for three days 🔨

Both the beginning and the title of the book are imitated from the two books.

Author, why don't you update?

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