I Feel Like I'm Going to Be Speed-Passed by Them.

For novice authors, this book is basically a training guide. A word of caution, don't blindly imitate Niqing, especially the pure Niqing, because Niqing's dialogue is different from the domestic mainstream. Unless the writing is amazing, Niqing's dialogue will not only be a plus but also a minus. It is easy for readers to not be able to tell who is speaking. Secondly, the design of the female imp at the beginning is not good. You will find that there are very few such foul-mouthed female imps in light novels. The female imp is not a good character in the three-dimensional world or even in novels. In comics, the female imp is defeated immediately. In novels, the female imp often quarrels with people for a long time. The design of the plot is not very clever, it just feels chaotic. The most important thing is that the description of the character's appearance is still passable, but the description of the character or the behavior that shows personal characteristics is not very good. Many Japanese toilet paper writers can still make a living in Japan, but when they come to China, they are all famous for their writing. The biggest advantage of Nippon is that they have good imagination.

Industrial saccharine, slightly flawed (too many female leads lead to a bit of a mess), but the sweetness is really sweet. The system made this novel extremely sweet not long after the beginning, but the good feelings brought about by the electric current also made people feel a little inconsistent. By the way, the male protagonist is a real scumbag

This introduction tells the truth. It's so hard to understand. There are a bunch of lines, and the most important thing is that I don't know who said it. Did he say it to others or did others say it to him? It feels like I haven't read the introduction. After reading it, I was confused.

Is it possible that there are so many female protagonists writing about them?

Anyone who can read the introduction of this book is a genius

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Most of the dialogue is just dialogue, without him talking about it, or doing the actions incidentally. As a result, it's not clear who said some of the dialogue, and I still have to think about it.

After reading the daily introduction on July 22, I may only be able to look forward to the author's next book. As a member of the Golden Three Chapters (the demand for Golden Three Chapters is very high, Sword of the Dawn was abandoned because of this), I feel that the image of the characters is too empty, the language is too out of the ordinary, even the systematic discourse makes people feel awkward, and the logic of the characters' language is not reasonable (maybe the author thinks this is cute, but I was already poisoned by the second picture). It can be seen that the writing style is immature, which should be due to some pictures or fantasies for a novice who wants to show the story to the readers.

When you are drunk, you use single quotation marks to express psychology and double quotation marks to express language. When reading a book, you have to exercise your eyesight to distinguish these things. The point is that you are adding a language to many psychology. Have you never thought that readers can easily get confused when reading a book faster than you can write it? It's really free to write, and it's such a test for readers.

If you open a new book, remember to tell me the title