Reborn, I Don't Want to Be a Jerk

I like Zhang Yang's temperament so much. I actually like the male protagonists more than the female protagonists. I'm fed up with the male protagonists in most harem novels who say they are submissive before rebirth, but then turn into a wretched and greasy man instantly after rebirth. Although Zhang Yang's behavior is due to psychological shadow, he did fulfill his duties to the female protagonists and did not deceive his feelings.

There are a lot of trolls in the comment area, I really thought it was a masterpiece, that's all. . .

After reading one hundred and seventeen chapters in one day, I thought it was too superficial. The interaction between men and women was very superficial, and there was no emotional exchange, nor mutual understanding and repentance as the author had written before. Instead, it was very superficial, and the plot was also very superficial.

The idea of ​​anti-system is very good, but there is a problem with the setting of the heroines. What attracts everyone after rebirth should be the heroine's twisted, violent, and Shura field-like revenge. It is a revenge that does not satisfy the anger of the common people without killing. As a result, the author just wrote it as an ordinary high school student's love story, which caused the attraction of the emotional line to be greatly reduced.

It's really uncomfortable to lead a gangster to sell barbecue. His father has millions in wealth and he won't continue to sell barbecue to you, so he has changed his ways.

It's not that the more you write, the more you write, but it just feels boring. It feels like the plot is obviously developing, but it just feels like the plot is not advancing at all (just like going to work day after day, doing the same thing every day, nothing changes, but time just passes like this, and then it gets old) And the system is also very invisible behind the scenes, with almost no sense of existence. . It can be said that there is no system. If you change the way of writing or saying it, it can be done without affecting the structure of the whole story (just a few directly important people are reborn together with memories) Now I have to think about whether to continue to subscribe. In short, my current feeling is that it is not attractive to watch.

I promote the main plot, but I always write boring side plots, and I often use retro pretense and slap-in-the-face routines. It's really embarrassing and boring.

The writing is average. To put it bluntly, it doesn't tell a story. It's a bit literary but it doesn't have the writing style to make people want to read it.

It's so slow. Hundreds of virgins are lost, committing crimes.

It's really good. If you write it carefully, it will be a new urban campus legend.