America, 1945: The Wealth Tycoon

A successful businessman usually succeeds through a combination of chance and serendipity. You've already encountered a ton of troubles before you've even begun. It would be a joke if someone like that could succeed. Look at the development history of other business tycoons. They all started out quite easily, unlike your complicated story. If Jack Ma had started like that, there would be no Taobao.

What's the point of watching a white person rise to become a business tycoon?

Does the storyline involve supporting China? If so, I won't watch it.

If you understood even a little bit about the American system, you wouldn't know. The federal government can't command the states, and the states can't command the cities. Does defeating MacArthur mean you can't survive in big cities anymore? Ha! Not only do you not understand America, you don't even know who Desmond is. Do you know how famous he is as the first person to receive the Medal of Honor without carrying a weapon? In the United States, reputation is all the wealth.

The author next door started by following Capone's path, and then went insane while writing. I hope your work, modeled after Once Upon a Time in America, doesn't follow suit. There's no need to include so many conspiracies in the early stages. With the protagonist's starting position, aside from not being able to pursue a political or grassroots path initially, no one will bother him.

It's not that it's bad, but the story is too verbose and complicated. The opening story of an ordinary person is overly detailed, failing to develop the protagonist's character.

Shennong's Commentary: The writing is quite smooth, but the high-pitched tone at the beginning is somewhat inexplicable, making the overall writing seem dull and lacking in exhilaration. In the era of barbaric expansion, the protagonist needs violence combined with righteous actions, the so-called harmony of orthodox and unorthodox methods.

I didn't look closely because the war is over, but now that I'm back in America, why is there so much murder and conspiracy? Even though I don't have a good impression of Americans, this is going too far! How can a normal veteran be constantly being hunted down? What's going on?

Character Name: Walker Taft; from Ohio, USA; Age: similar to or three to five years older than the protagonist; Family Background: Walker comes from the prestigious Taft family, one of the most prominent American families. The family's founder, Alfonso Taft, was Secretary of War in 1875 and Attorney General in 1876.

Speechless (ー_ー)!! Knowing there was an enemy, why not eliminate them immediately? In this era, a businessman's first pot of gold is always made through bloodshed. If you're going to make money, can't you just be completely ruthless? Speechless (ー_ー)!!