Extract Comic Skills, Starting from Drawing a Recovery Warlock

The subject matter feels good, but the character of the protagonist really doesn't make sense to me. If I take away the identity of the protagonist, I will be a villain who suddenly gains power and lets himself go.

I saw Gun Yong coming in. Although the plot is cliché, it is a cool novel. If it is cliché, it is not unwatchable if the plot is reasonable. But! Yes, but! I saw the spiritual realm copy of the college entrance examination and the Saiyan transformation, and I was really stunned. Originally, although this copy is a bit old-fashioned and a little bit poisonous, it is not unreadable. Until I saw that the author directly created the Saiyan bloodline of Son Goku with a stroke of his pen, and then changed the gorilla transformation into a transformation similar to a Super Saiyan - except for the combat power, it is exactly the same as a Super Saiyan. Ah, this... Awkward, quite awkward. You said that you should just publish a setting collection and write a super game. After all, once your transformation comes out, the excitement of future super games will definitely be gone. Otherwise, if you want to suppress the competition, just write Gorilla. It can be said that it is to gain the fans' faith for the sake of the future super competition. If you do this, okay, in order to suppress the combat power, it is okay to directly destroy the rationality of the plot.

The author must have his own plans for his own book. I am not the author, so I will not take over for you in this regard. Focus on my feelings as a reader. First, I am sure that everyone who came in was attracted by Gun Yong's name when they first came in. In other words, the readers of this book are essentially a group of people attracted by Gun Yong. So the first choice to bind the comic is in line with the readers, so although the text is not very straightforward, the plot is acceptable to us and there is no problem. So I am not surprised after reading this paragraph, but I can still read it. Until the time of choosing the second comic, it was acceptable to choose One Piece. After all, One Piece is one of the three major migrant comics. I can understand that the author arranged the plot for the purpose of audience selection. But when I saw the fruit of face, I really couldn't stand it. It was like a huge mouthful of excrement falling from the sky. I could still watch it but I felt instantly disgusted. Even for the following content, I have no idea of ​​​​reading it after this selection. In itself, when one upgrade can only provide one choice of comic skills, what a normal person would consider is definitely not to try some and all, but to fill his skill set with suitable SSRs! Some people choose hundreds of comics and countless skills. Why choose a face fruit that is not sure whether it exists or has any effect? Don't say this is a compromise made because I only drew one chapter. Since I know that I have to enter the dungeon and I have to be a bait As the protagonist: If there is only enough time to draw one chapter, then no normal person will choose a pirate. As soon as the demi-human comes out, he can survive without death, and Eukuriwood can be a word spirit as soon as he opens his mouth. Who is not better than a pirate? Take a step back and choose another migrant manga. If you go straight up and refine the Nine-Tails Rebellion, you will be able to get Wingedame's Flying Thunder God or Obito's Kamui. Which one is not better than a pirate? Why draw pirates? What if you have enough time but only write one chapter? Why, does the protagonist think his life is too easy and wants to make it more difficult for him? As an author: I can understand your desire to overwhelm your ability to compete. It is understandable that you want to write more in your work, but your operation of choosing a face fruit is too... The face fruit is just a meme. You would rather make the meme skillful than choose a useful skill. What's wrong, do you think the work is too good? Whether you only draw one chapter is a matter of your words. Whether you can choose skills that have not yet appeared is also a matter of your setting. It is not that there are fruits that can be used in One Piece. In addition to the attributes you set high for a Goblin King, does it have other abilities? Can't you just create a useful mechanical ability? Is it possible to use multiple fruits to take off and gain air superiority? Is it possible to use Soul Soul Fruit to do real damage? Don't talk about those messy restrictions, they are just excuses for you to play tricks. Readers won't pay if they don't get it, and they will think you are stubborn! To put it bluntly, as a reader, I can accept you making compromises in your choices for the sake of the audience, but I cannot accept your not-so-smart operations because of your own bad taste. Because I want to bring in the protagonist, not the author. Okay, there are a lot of words, so let's leave it at that.

Snap! It's very fast. I clicked in when I saw Reply Warlock 😄

When it comes to extracting abilities from comics, since you have extracted the so-called "Face Fruit", the red-haired person in your novel must also be a user with the so-called "Face Fruit" ability, otherwise there will be problems with logic. All I can say is that the writing is not pleasant.

First of all, out of respect, I changed the article to change Super Saiyan 50x to 10x. I can't imagine how low it was before the change. It's boring to suppress the battle, and Shen Nong can't save it.

The face fruit is a joke by the author, but the super Saiyan bloodline ability is completely illogical. Dragon Ball draws the beginning, and the Saiyan concept is not yet released, and it is directly exchanged. Then I draw the beginning of a child becoming a disciple and cultivating immortality, and then say that I set the child to be the reincarnation of Pangu. Can I just spend 10,000 to directly exchange for Pangu's bloodline, and start to create a world? And the protagonist's ability itself is not rigorous. Add a setting, for example, the stronger the ability, the more people need to read the comic and agree with it, so that the ability can be refined. In this way, the combat power can be reasonably suppressed, and the reading is smoother, instead of watching the author cheating on himself and inexplicably suppressing the combat power. It feels like it can't be read without thinking. . .

Obviously, this plot is pretty good to fool young readers in recent years. For old bookworms, it feels a bit inadequate. There are some highlights but not many, and it is always embarrassing when it is enjoyable. It's as if the author himself doesn't know what kind of person he wants to write about the protagonist, and even has only a rough idea of ​​where his career will develop. It's like he started writing the book before finishing the outline, and it feels like "what you write is what you write." Further advice to the author, if you still have the idea to use this account to open the next book, no matter how bad the writing is, you must finish it. Don't be a eunuch, otherwise you won't be able to get the next book!

The protagonist is awesome because he is the protagonist, a time traveler, and has a golden finger. But if you are an ordinary person, your life will be ruined. If someone ruins your life, you can handle it lightly, and you can still be funny in a calm manner. Maybe it's normal from the author's point of view to create conflicts like this to advance the plot, but as readers we are generally used to assuming the role of the protagonist, and this is too poisonous!

Twenty cards or more have suppressed combat power at least three times before.

Breaking someone else's potion at the critical moment of awakening will already affect the protagonist's future. This is no small matter. It is normal to hate him for a lifetime.

The Face Fruit is really an old joke, and it directly interrupted my desire to read on, because as soon as I think that the subsequent plot is driven by the face fruit, it makes me laugh. As the author said, you want to interfere with the spiritual level, but for readers, there is no need to rely on memes. Conceptualization and skills, as other comments have said, if you want to be funny with Ukliwood's Word Spirit, you can also choose the field of spells to create your own field, or even your rubber fruit. The description of the rubber fruit is a joke-like ability, and it can be changed like a prank fruit. What is a meme? It feels like a kind of ridicule and banter. This kind of thing is technical. You are not writing funny novels. If your plot style is purely funny from the beginning, this skill is harmless at all and even complements each other, but you are not. Finally, you are the god of comics. If you want this skill, you can write an original short comic plot without describing it in detail, just to get this skill. Please remember that you are a comic, not a master of jokes.

Mom: Ling Xiaodong, aren't you very proud!

It's white and awkward, with a bit of a two-dimensional flavor, and relies on imagination to attract people.

Is this a must-attend school? The spiritual realm is there and I can't escape. Why don't I take a break from school for a few years and draw comics in peace? You draw with peace of mind in the hall of the training ground. With so many people and talismans, who dares to assassinate you?

I came in after seeing the title of the book, and the idea was pretty good. However, the first few chapters have written a round of classical plots. It would be more interesting if there were rich second-generation villains betting and ice-type girls in the class.

Click in and take a look, bang, it's all Japanese 🙂

Seriously, did the author treat Little Japan as his opponent? Isn't it normal? Has the country been secretly destroyed by our country's genius a long time ago? How did Japan survive for three hundred years?

In the first chapter, he went straight to the poisonous side and traveled to the peerless licking dog. The last hope of taking a step forward was ruined by the little fairy who was licking him in his predecessor. The protagonist's portrayal has no discernible personality and is disgusting, and the villain's writing is wonderful.

The first major chapter: Using rare SSS directly as bait is unreasonable in itself. Haven't you given any extra life-saving props? If it weren't for the protagonist Tongtian hanging in the dungeon, it would be g. To the extent that it is uncontrollable, the decoy plan is a joke. It might as well have been discovered in time. Moreover, in this first exam dungeon, the protagonist needs to be a Saiyan to pass. The combat power design has collapsed.