Invincible: Start with Xiaoao and Add Points

There is a serious problem with your outlook on life! Yue Lingshan asked the protagonist why he didn't respect his parents, and the protagonist replied that he wanted to kill the protagonist with respect. What kind of mother-daughter well? What is the current identity of the protagonist? Be a disciple! Still saved by Ning Zhongze! What does the protagonist say here that the mother-daughter well is a favor to them? Is this something a person can say?

The first few chapters are really difficult to explain in one sentence, so awkward. Does the protagonist have to kill Laudano at that time to arouse suspicion? The author wants the protagonist Yue Buqun's meaning to be too obvious, the conflicts and contradictions are arranged too deliberately, and group intelligence is the most deadly. Yue Buqun is really miserable. The original work was deceived by the disciple, and the fans were not only deceived by various protagonists, but also had their wives and children taken away. The key point is that each of the protagonists also had high-sounding excuses. For the rise of Mount Huashan, Lao Yue carried a heavy burden on his back, but became a clown until his death. The protagonist who stood on the moral high ground proudly hugged Ning Zhongze, looking like a "majestic and just".

The original work sent Lauderno and Yue Lingshan to Fuzhou first. They were not told in advance to finish their work and go to Hengshan. It was Yue Buqun who stopped them and they changed their route to Hengshan. Going to Fuzhou is Linghu Chong's business, not Yue Buqun's responsibility. Yue Buqun went to Fuzhou by himself. Originally, after Linghu Chong and the others went to Hengshan, they came to Fuzhou to meet up with Lao Denuo and Yue Lingshan. Yue Buqun did this in secret, and his disciples had no idea of ​​his whereabouts. Later the Lin family was destroyed, and he followed Lin Pingzhi to Hengshan.

It's mindless, it's better not to write it

There is no cerebral infarction, this is not the case

Does the author set a realm in the martial arts world? If you set a realm, there is no need to read it.

After taking it, I gave the pig's feet wisdom. Besides, you don't have the inner strength to protect your body. How dare you take Yu Canghai's heart-stimulating palm. After taking it, Chongxu and Fangzheng don't dare either.

I have only read four chapters of this novel. I found that the protagonist started to drift after he had a golden finger. When you come up, kill the traitor first, Laudno. I haven't figured out why I wanted to kill a known traitor, could I? Let someone else replace it. Then continue. I started to coax my master and my wife. He dared to fight against the master. I am very patient. You killed second senior brother Laudno. According to Yue Buqun's character, I am suspicious of you. I just asked you to explain, but you immediately started to frighten the master and then took action. What do you think?

Embarrassing, Yue Buqun, who was determined to become the best swordsman, was jealous of his apprentice's rapid progress in internal skills.

The sects are divided into inner and outer sects. There is no need to watch this. The old fairy tale routine makes me sick.

I would like to give some advice to the author. The protagonist has limited points, so don't add them indiscriminately. It will look like a retard. Sooner or later, writing like this will become boring.

Meng Qiansi (mature)

Golden Finger contains martial arts. You can get started directly when you get points, and then you can use the points to improve your martial arts. The hang-up was huge. As soon as I traveled through time, my mentality immediately started to fly. Not robust enough. The first time you get points, you can improve your internal and external martial arts to the state of transformation. Then kill Lawnold. He also challenged Yue Buqun. The previous article is still saying that we should keep the foundation of Mount Huashan. In the next two chapters, Yue Buqun is provoked and a fight begins. I just traveled through time, and my mentality was just to play the game and start clearing it, without any worries.

I may have poor understanding. I have been reading novels for more than ten years, but suddenly I can't understand them. I have no idea what the protagonist is going to do. With Diudiu's martial arts, he dares to go to the mountain gate to ask for martial arts. I don't know if he really never thought that a group of people in the mountain gate are just for food. I dare not kill him. Linghu Chong scolded the Qingcheng sect and had to write a letter to apologize and explain. You are such a dick. You directly blocked the door of Wudang. I really can't understand.

The author has incorrect views, so read carefully! !

I have ideas, but my views are incorrect What a pity

Come, let's fly together

🙂 It is indeed the other way around. You may find it inconvenient to carry a guqin while walking around the world.

Overall, it's a pretty good book. It's not easy for martial arts fans to write something interesting. Good luck, author! ! !

GG, give me more heroines at the beginning! The heavens cannot have female protagonists unless there is a main world, but to the maximum extent, they can accept a single female protagonist!

Why don't you respect the character of the original characters? You steal other people's things and then scold them. What do you mean?

How dare you go to Mount Huashan without twos and threes? Don't be lazy, the truth is only within the range of the cannon.