The Dusk Councilor

At least judging from the introduction, it's quite wrong. Why does science collapse? Shouldn't scientists be crazy about seeing so many new things? Brand new material composition, brand new concepts, brand new papers... When it exists, it can be observed, when it can be observed, it can be disturbed, when it cannot be disturbed, it can be explored, when it can be explored, the rules can be summarized, when the rules are summarized, there is no mystery at all, and the crystallization obtained by summarizing and innovating these laws is called technology~ So the author has a big problem from the introduction...

It actually looks average. Many of the characters are hard and concave. At first glance, it looks cool, but after a second look, it doesn't matter. The protagonist's personality is not my type because of his super strong background and buggy abilities. Later, he becomes more and more unscrupulous, very motivated, and super reckless There are also many places where the author's writing skills are average and the writing is not good, which is almost boring There is also the part about the little girl. Why is the protagonist angry? What qualifications does he have? Although there must be a bad guy behind the orphanage, he hasn't happened yet. He did add shackles, which is a bit uncomfortable, but it makes sense to prevent him from running out. The little girl was playing on the grass when she appeared. Besides, is the protagonist so good to him? Aren't the little girls wandering outside? She also said she was a younger sister, which was really funny. She would pass by occasionally and give her something to eat. That would be great. To put it harshly, what is the difference between giving away kittens and puppies on the roadside? So this part is very bad, the anger is inexplicable, the protagonist looks like he wants to take action, it seems that he is very emotional This is purely because the author did not give enough foreshadowing. If you wait for the orphanage to show its tail, then let the protagonist come on the stage and stand on the side of justice and strike hard, there will be no problem with this part, I won't give a shit.

I regret it all. I wasted my starting coins. I said you are an invincible writer but also a coward. I said you are an upgrade writer but not good-looking. This is all a complete mess, right? I died from a drug addiction. If you can find this book more enjoyable, please enjoy it slowly.

I think the birth of the protagonist is much higher than that of the Lord of Mystery, right? Whether there is anything wrong with what I said, I don't know. Then why am I not aggrieved by the fact that my best friend is watching this, but I am aggrieved by the journey of such a great man to become a god again? Who can tell me?

Chapter 124, originally I just followed the maid to meet the protagonist, but I also went out of my way to hook up with Wei Tuantuan, wasting my money 😰 The novel should be logical, and don't force the character to be intelligent and parachute into the plot, okay? It's the same in the previous chapters. Sometimes the protagonist just can't remember something. He only "remembers" it under the author's instructions after getting a certain plot. His strength has reached the level of a god and he still has brain twitches, just like a puppet.

He kept shouting, "I will kill you" "I will kill you" looking on stupidly. It fully reflects that if it were not for the backup of his teammates, the protagonist would be a complete waste.

It's not like time travel, it's like an aboriginal, and as a creator god, his B-level is very high, but it feels low, with a weird feeling of bubbles and other A-games. And the reason why your protagonist, as a creator god, shuts down is because the god you created shut down, so it's weird anyway.

As long as it's a sealed artifact from the Outer God's past, it's mysterious, right?

The worldview is okay! It's quite attractive, but the author's writing ideas are really unflattering. There is no sense of narration, nor does it use stories to expand the world view. It's just forced writing, making the protagonist look dull and stupid, like a game character without subjective thinking. No idea about anything. A broken family was set up. It was clear that writing a few more sentences would enrich the character image, but in the end, it was written in one stroke, and it seemed like it was not written at all.

The introduction has been changed at least three times, from science being a joke to now science being a joke, and finally to modern science and technology being a joke.