Dusk Speaker

Plot, plot, pacing, writing, character reactions. It's very messy. It can be seen that I want to add a lot of things, but they are not integrated well at all, here and there. Basic expressions are not done well...

At least judging from the introduction, it's quite wrong. Why does science collapse? Shouldn't scientists be crazy about seeing so many new things? Brand new material composition, brand new concepts, brand new papers... When it exists, it can be observed, when it can be observed, it can be disturbed, when it cannot be disturbed, it can be explored, when it can be explored, the rules can be summarized, when the rules are summarized, there is no mystery at all, and the crystallization obtained by summarizing and innovating these laws is called technology~ So the author has a big problem from the introduction...

It actually looks average. Many of the characters are hard and concave. At first glance, it looks cool, but after a second look, it doesn't matter. The protagonist's personality is not my type because of his super strong background and buggy abilities. Later, he becomes more and more unscrupulous, very motivated, and super reckless There are also many places where the author's writing skills are average and the writing is not good, which is almost boring There is also the part about the little girl. Why is the protagonist angry? What qualifications does he have? Although there must be a bad guy behind the orphanage, he hasn't happened yet. He did add shackles, which is a bit uncomfortable, but it makes sense to prevent him from running out. The little girl was playing on the grass when she appeared. Besides, is the protagonist so good to him? Aren't the little girls wandering outside? She also said she was a younger sister, which was really funny. She would pass by occasionally and give her something to eat. That would be great. To put it harshly, what is the difference between giving away kittens and puppies on the roadside? So this part is very bad, the anger is inexplicable, the protagonist looks like he wants to take action, it seems that he is very emotional This is purely because the author did not give enough foreshadowing. If you wait for the orphanage to show its tail, then let the protagonist come on the stage and stand on the side of justice and strike hard, there will be no problem with this part, I won't give a shit.

I regret it all. I wasted my starting coins. I said you are an invincible writer but also a coward. I said you are an upgrade writer but not good-looking. This is all a complete mess, right? I died from a drug addiction. If you can find this book more enjoyable, please enjoy it slowly.

I think the birth of the protagonist is much higher than that of the Lord of Mystery, right? Whether there is anything wrong with what I said, I don't know. Then why am I not aggrieved by the fact that my best friend is watching this, but I am aggrieved by the journey of such a great man to become a god again? Who can tell me?

Chapter 124, originally I just followed the maid to meet the protagonist, but I also went out of my way to hook up with Wei Tuantuan, wasting my money 😰 The novel should be logical, and don't force the character to be intelligent and parachute into the plot, okay? It's the same in the previous chapters. Sometimes the protagonist just can't remember something. He only "remembers" it under the author's instructions after getting a certain plot. His strength has reached the level of a god and he still has brain twitches, just like a puppet.

He kept shouting, "I will kill you" "I will kill you" looking on stupidly. It fully reflects that if it were not for the backup of his teammates, the protagonist would be a complete waste.

It's not like time travel, it's like an aboriginal, and as a creator god, his B-level is very high, but it feels low, with a weird feeling of bubbles and other A-games. And the reason why your protagonist, as a creator god, shuts down is because the god you created shut down, so it's weird anyway.

The worldview is okay! It's quite attractive, but the author's writing ideas are really unflattering. There is no sense of narration, nor does it use stories to expand the world view. It's just forced writing, making the protagonist look dull and stupid, like a game character without subjective thinking. No idea about anything. A broken family was set up. It was clear that writing a few more sentences would enrich the character image, but in the end, it was written in one stroke, and it seemed like it was not written at all.

As long as it's a sealed artifact from the Outer God's past, it's mysterious, right?

The introduction has been changed at least three times, from science being a joke to now science being a joke, and finally to modern science and technology being a joke.

All the seedlings in Chapter 3 were sacrificed by cats.

I'm always led by the nose. When I encounter a trap or something, I suddenly break out and rush through. I'm not that powerful. I just go through various waves. When I encounter a trap, I suddenly break out and pass. It looks a bit blocked.

It's exciting but not exciting, it's neither rigorous nor rigorous, the beginning is unclear, and I can't understand it in several chapters.

Constantly incompetent and furious, chirping, pretending to be awkward and addicted

What's next for this book? I'm stuck at the stage where I want to continue reading but I'm disgusted. Is it worth reading later? Are the fights still so stupid?

Since the protagonist is a modern soul-traveling protagonist, why is he made so stupid?

Is this Gaowu?

More than seventy chapters have not yet reached the extraordinary level. Is this too much foreshadowing?

I'm just kidding, it's just gone? I watch ads every day just to subscribe to you, which is a waste of my feelings.

I haven't watched it for a few days and it's gone. ,.

I started watching it, but I felt that it became less and less interesting as I progressed to the end, and I still didn't understand it, which made me feel aggrieved because the protagonist was being plotted all the time.

I think Dusk should be a god. Nowadays, when I read books, I always find it difficult to read them, or they are all mindless and enjoyable. Dusk has a plot, layers, and writing style, but the number of words is a bit less.

The big pot is okay from the front, but it looks scattered and collapsed from the back, giving it a feeling of being in a cloud.

When I saw the latest chapter, my first impression was that no one who followed the protagonist had a good end.

It was recommended by the editor-in-chief, but why did so many people invest?

I have voted for the monthly vote. I hope the author can work hard. If you keep the plot stable, you will be successful. Just don't suddenly become obsessed with the plot. I will continue to support you.