Every Time I Come Home, My Wife Is Making Garbage

This book is well written, and the writing style is a happy type. However, the story logic itself needs to be optimized. Many plots are too illogical, giving people the feeling that the characters in the text are very brainless.

Speaking of which, my father-in-law must be almost 50 this year. I remember seeing my father-in-law when I was still in elementary school. At that time, my father-in-law was still in the novel and his child was born.

From normal people in the modern world to villains in the magical world, including the male protagonist, the psychological activities and behavioral expressions have an indescribable childishness. It is very strange. Maybe the author wants to write a fairy tale style?

How many chapters on tolerances have been updated?

It gives people the feeling of selling an account... This strange way of writing is so strange.

The story is quite stable, but there are no surprises. It is a conventional routine of two worlds reselling materials to make a fortune. The two worlds develop independently without much interlocking plot. From the title of the book, it gives the impression that it is mainly about the daily interactions of couples, but in fact there is not much related description, especially after the protagonist joins the other world, the queen's daily life is only bombing the kitchen.

There is no need to go to sensitive areas to assemble modern guns and other things, just go to civilian supplies warlords in places where foreigners are too poor to occupy them!)... Gas tank cannons, dust explosions, civilian self-destruction drones, Laiyang steel pipes, fire extinguisher Anti-rocket 🚀 (manual modification), chemical fertilizer purification... If the mass balance problem can be solved, the atomic and molecular levels will depend on continuous mining and raw materials, and the quality level will just be a waste of time. This is a personal exploration of a new continent! After becoming a Haitian warlord, the local people are raised directly as pigs, you directly use the two-dimensional cat and dog troops to establish order, [For details of the specific process, please see——Little John Khan's Weird Small Country Series] In addition, Please believe in the international arms market. You can personally buy decommissioned armored vehicles... Of course, if the relationship is strong, you can also buy mold tanks that "will be destroyed on sensitive front lines in a few days"... You don't even have to worry about no one knowing how to drive it, after all, with all kinds of outrageous mercenaries these days, it's easy to be a weird arms instructor.

I finally knew something was wrong. You are a pure Japanese light novel. After reading the recent chapters, I suddenly felt like watching Japanese comics... What a masterpiece

I feel like the combat pressure is a bit harsh. With the mobility of teleportation magic and the heroine's false witness technique, I can go to Meituan to wholesale spears and beat ordinary soldiers in other worlds.

I remember that when I first met my father-in-law, he was still in the cute girl series. I was in junior high school at that time. Now that I have come out to work, my father-in-law is still insisting on updating and writing books, forcing me to

It seems that my father-in-law is letting himself go again. According to my father-in-law's habit, if a book becomes popular, it must be released. Then rush to the street. Father-in-law will be more serious again

Flash marriage. Database. There is no personal information at all. How to get married without a passport

My father-in-law said before that the invincible flow is the mainstream of the market, and it has almost always been the invincible flow since then. But I have never studied the market and have no say. I am just tired of the invincible flow.

The book has the same feeling as before, and I feel comfortable reading it, but every time I finish reading it, I feel like I don't want to read more. I thought about it for a long time and don't know why. Recently, I feel more and more that there is something missing in this book. Today it suddenly occurred to me that the writing style you used to write was about fan fiction, but the plot of this book is original! The writing style of this book has a comic style, but the lack of exaggerated expressions in the comic style is not easy to figure out, so why is the cute girl series of the same fan so popular? Because of the sense of substitution, everyone in the fan book has a basic understanding of the character archetypes and can easily associate them with each other. Original characters need to be supplemented by specific images. This point is about how many people don't understand the behavior of the characters in the book. As for the plot, in fact, the plot is not bad, quite interesting, but it is not outstanding enough and a bit flat. I personally suggest that the protagonist can do more operations. Why can't he highlight some differences from others after watching so many TV movies, novels and comics? It's just that the resources between the two worlds are different. Does the protagonist have any special features after others obtain the same resources? Anyway, I know magic. Today I can cosplay Alsace and tomorrow I can cosplay Gandalf. In any case, it will highlight the difference between the protagonists. Anyway, come on

Is thirty-two now transformed? Are you writing a heroine?

Compared with the previous one, this author's book has great results.

I bet this book will not do as well as the previous one. It involves too much of the real world, and the protagonist also has a patriotic character, so there are many things that he cannot do. If you want to open that restaurant, you have to get a bunch of documents and try to make it legal. In addition to cat food, there will be more and more products to be produced. The author also has to find a way to legalize it But in fact, this part of the plot has no effect on the plot.

After reading Daming in the Box, it felt so strange to read this again. It was written by the son of the author Jun 🤭

I've read seven or eight chapters and I'm really speechless about the logic.

It was originally recommended by the round table and I read a small part of it. I came back to look at it after not reading it for a long time. Suddenly I saw the author's name, which seemed familiar...? ! Isn't this the author of Meng Niang's Journey to the West? What a coincidence.

Those who are surrounded by the round table, the animation of the round table is still beautiful 😠

It's so beautifully written that I highly recommend it. It's obviously a very family-friendly and cute plot and world view, but it's so beautifully written that it can turn decay into something magical. In terms of writing style, except for some slightly embarrassing moments like the sun and morning glow, it can basically be maintained at an above-average level. There is nothing outstanding, but it is very interesting and interesting, and does not have the impetuous energy of the Internet writers like Tomato. The first half of the book is a bit sweet and not very refreshing, and the rhythm of the description of the different worlds in the first dozens of chapters is a bit confusing, but the author has made great adjustments later on, and the rhythm has become more and more comfortable. The second half of the book is about war and farming, with lots of exciting points. Different from the old Internet articles with big bricks and flying cool points, the author's cool point design is more modern, with foreshadowing and background. I have to mention a small flaw here, that is, some important plot foreshadowing is a bit too deliberate. For example, if I want to make an article about the sense of honor of magic swordsmen, the author only urgently mentions the sense of honor of knights when destroying the dam. There is basically no foreshadowing in the previous article, which seems a bit abrupt. However, the flaws do not hide the advantages. Finally, if the author can see this comment, can you recommend the book you wrote before? These 6 books from Qidian are not enough!

After finishing Da Ming, I planned to follow the author's next book. I read a few chapters and felt that it wasn't very good and then gave up. Now I'm back to read it. It's finished. It's right to abandon the book 😊

Re-vote tomorrow

I was a bit tired of chasing it all the time, and I wanted to keep it up, but ended up dying after only 20 chapters. What happened to father-in-law? Did he get another cut?

Ah? Is this the end? What about the sea of ​​stars?

I feel that there is nothing wrong with the writing style and logic. I was very happy to finally find something I could read from Xiaobaihai.

Oh my god, I just found out that my father-in-law came back to write again 😰

😥 Why is my father-in-law so short and weak this time?

Author: I just watched the cute girl cosmopolitan somewhere on a pirated version. The protagonist's moral integrity is too low, and then I came to support the original version.