The Song Dynasty on the Sand Table

Let's talk about a lot of problems in this book The first is the issue of realism. My father-in-law undoubtedly made it difficult for himself, although it can be seen that my father-in-law really tried hard to understand the relevant history. But it is simply impossible to achieve realism. Because the main sentence pattern of this book is that modern people intervene in the past and change history. Since history has changed, the behavior and thinking of these historical figures will have changed greatly, let alone what changes modern people will make based on relevant history. How will history change? Even if you stay with him for more than ten or twenty years, you may not be able to understand him, let alone predict historical changes. Therefore, the reality of this book can only be based on what they have done, such as when they rebelled. Then, similar things happened at another time and for different reasons, and I can only write here. The second problem with seeking realism is that it does not consider the needs of readers at all. No one who reads this kind of novel pursues historical authenticity, but does it for fun and fun. As long as the plot logic is smooth. Therefore, the readers' needs are completely inconsistent with the author's pursuit. Then there is the characterization of the characters. Almost no character has any characteristics. Basically, except for Gong Yi, many characters, especially the characters in the Northern Song Dynasty, appeared in a few chapters and were brushed off. The character's personality and growth are not highlighted at all. In fact, these are also written about many things. For example, the bandits in the Northern Song Dynasty were basically improvised bandits with low cultural level and low thinking pattern. While creating funny characters like Daming, they also created various difficulties according to the limitations of their thinking pattern. Then the protagonist wiped their butts and they slowly grew up. The ability to portray their character's personality and growth mentality also allowed the protagonist to directly act cool like Li Doxuan. Have fun. The same goes for the Southern Song Dynasty. People like Yue Fei and Li Gang can also pass various short stories. To create characters and depict their growth, from the first contact with Yue Wenxuan to the gradual change of thinking and concepts, from the ignorance of the emperor, to the gradual understanding of what is true patriotism, what is truly good for the people and the country. In fact, this paragraph has gone too far. For example, when Yue Wenxuan deceived you and Li Gang went to the Northern Song Dynasty, he first discussed that Li Gang's purpose of becoming an official was to bring peace to all generations. Just like when Yue Fei also discussed, if Yue Fei did not obey the emperor's wishes and was not recalled by the 12 gold medals, could he win more territory for the Song Dynasty? You can definitely follow this idea and add some of their personal stories to shape the characters and arrange the story of their gradual changes in thoughts. The heroine Gong Yi also has this problem. Except for the early stage, she is basically the protagonist's little follower. She does whatever the protagonist says. Sometimes she will put forward some personal opinions, and then Yue Wenxuan will understand with a few simple words of education. Gong Yi and Gao Yiye have two completely different images, one is a naughty girl next door. One is an image of a tomboy who led troops to fight in the war as a teenager and doesn't understand anything. In fact, Gong Yi's personal growth would be quite interesting if it were written in detail. After his father died in battle, he was forced to lead the army in the war. He knew nothing but a little bit of force. Gradually grow up, know how to refine, know how to engage in politics, grow from practice, and then be slowly influenced by the protagonist and grow up step by step. However, the growth process of characters seems to be something that my father-in-law is not good at. Finally, the protagonist's abilities are too overwhelming. Except that the vision is fixed on the heroine, any talents, high-yielding agricultural products, and resources can be invested directly. Productivity and technology trees are developing rapidly. If you need talents, you will have them immediately. If you need weapons, you will have weapons immediately. If you need food, you will have food immediately. How to play a villain? Before, Li Daoxuan could only invest in raw materials, but could not invest in agricultural products. Agricultural products could only be found by villains themselves, and talents could only be cultivated slowly. Therefore, in the early stage, he could only manage enough and seek development in a stable manner. In fact, you can slowly unlock new functions like Li Daoxuan did before, and let the protagonist develop slowly, instead of being so outrageous at the beginning. In fact, if this ability is used well, it can create a lot of exciting plots, such as deliberately setting up an opportunity for the protagonist to take action, and then directly using modern weapons such as tanks and close-range anti-cannons, or throwing in a dozen modern combat troops, and a dozen people using machine guns and RPGs to kill tens of thousands of people on the opposite side. It brought a little shock to ancient people like Yue Fei, and at the same time enhanced their yearning for the future of democratic society. I hope my father-in-law can learn from this lesson and write a wonderful novel next time. In fact, I quite like reading it. It's similar to the Ming Dynasty in the box, this type of story.

The plot of the scout bumping into someone, and the screenshots of someone hanging him up were posted by me in unrelated groups. The world of the Internet is so small.

I have heard about the name of the Thirty-two Father-in-law for a long time!

Please tell me, what kind of person would have a Guan Yu figure at home instead of a statue of a god?

Now it doesn't seem to be exciting at all, and the author wants to slow down the progress. Improve progress here while fighting. Farming no longer feels like farming, and fighting for hegemony no longer feels like fighting for hegemony. It feels like there is too little involvement between the readers and the protagonist, and they just keep following the supporting characters around. If my father-in-law continues to write like this, this book will be sold out again.

I can't stand watching it anymore. The protagonist pretends to be a god in the sandbox, and frequently ends up doing everything himself. There are various downgrades. The protagonist sets himself up as a god, and he frequently appears and gets very close to the villagers. The real self has no abilities. The mismatch between the set identity and the performance ability feels very inconsistent.

To put it bluntly, the rules of the game are just different. He also talked about right and wrong. Bragging about modern football rules? The whole section collapsed.

Is there no author who can write a high-quality protagonist?

Your golden finger, the most buggy thing is that you can parachute troops at any time. When the two armies are fighting, just put the second master Guan or Lu Bu next to the enemy commander, won't he explode directly? The enemy's food camp can be burned casually. Dimensionality reduction strikes are much faster than killing people on the battlefield.

I only know about the Western Industrial Revolution. They all existed in our country before. It's just that the Manchu Qing Dynasty was completely destroyed

It's a bit awkward if the appearance is not arranged well. You either go behind the scenes or in front of the stage. This kind of half leakage and half leakage looks awkward. Looks silly

I don't understand why the protagonist calls Qin Hui daddy?

What about being cool? What about being passionate? In order to be logical and historical, it's like reading a running account. Is this article written by my father-in-law? My father-in-law wrote the story "Superman Attacks" that had no logic, but it was fun to read and I loved it. This book is too low level

Li Bai can fight and kill more than a dozen bullies by himself with a sword. Scholars in ancient times were not powerless.

If you take a photo and make a model, and put it in the sandbox, you will have all the memories and skills of that person, and can you also control him? Wouldn't it be faster to just photograph a few high-ranking officials, make models into the sandbox, and ask them for their dirty money accounts, or policy information, etc. To get money?

It feels like there is no Ming Dynasty in the box, and the step by step between the two latitudes leads to in-depth exploration. And this seems to be the way it should be for each other in the Song Dynasty. It is the author's subconscious mentality setting, or he is too anxious. It seems a bit frivolous. As a reader, the sense of involvement is very dramatic, 9 out of 10 scenes.

I was almost embarrassed to death when I saw the one in 126. A prince doesn't need to be alone, he uses me, he uses me. The author just thinks it's not uncomfortable to hear it, right?

You asked me to come in to see Mr. Guan, but all I saw was a manipulated Guan Yu doll?

Why does the latest chapter give me the feeling that the protagonist is dispensable? After all, Li Daoxuan can choose anyone.

Memory

Cement should be involved in infrastructure construction. If the transportation is not done well, it will be more difficult to build it in the later period. There is even some spare capacity. The railway system has to start preparing. Otherwise, it will be difficult to roll out when the foundation is large in the later period.

If the author purchases the book after completing it, will the author still receive the money?

I can only say that you are happy, goodbye👋

Write it quickly. As the saying goes, if a ruler is unworthy, his subjects will surrender to foreign countries, let alone their own country. To be honest, if you send out some letters of persuasion to surrender, and spread some rumors, those loyal and good generals will slowly come back to join them. Why bother with chisel after chisel? How laborious it is.

Is the thirty-second father-in-law's wife named Cai Xinzi?

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As expected of Father-in-law 72 😅 Eunuchs have become the norm

Completed with 1.13 Million words, is this a eunuch?

Waited for a long time